Art Critique Center

Tadame a dit :
Satash, if this thread allows non-Transformice related arts, you shall consider moving it to the new off-topic fanart section.

nah its fine here

#3902

Satash a dit :
Tadame a dit :
Satash, if this thread allows non-Transformice related arts, you shall consider moving it to the new off-topic fanart section.

You can still have off topic art in your thread I'm pretty sure, so I don't see the need for Art Critique to get another thread when one is just fine.

But, there's a reason for the new subforum. You can't lock the non-TFM art thread and keep this one cos it's seen as double standard.

#3903

This thread allows everyone to post art, TFM, Nekodancer, people, etc. and it's in the most accessible part of the forum. People have no problem finding this art section and therefore have no problem finding this thread, so the traffic of it is very high and people can improve greatly instead of being ignored for weeks.

It's staying where it is.

#3904

Tadame a dit :
Satash a dit :
Tadame a dit :
Satash, if this thread allows non-Transformice related arts, you shall consider moving it to the new off-topic fanart section.

You can still have off topic art in your thread I'm pretty sure, so I don't see the need for Art Critique to get another thread when one is just fine.

But, there's a reason for the new subforum. You can't lock the non-TFM art thread and keep this one cos it's seen as double standard.

What are you talking about? The non-TFM art thread? There is none, and if there is an non-TFM art critique thread I didn't make it.

And you're talking about double standards,

Yogiibear a dit :
Yeah, I'd suggest that if the majority of your art is TFM related then keep it in the fanarts section and post the couple of other things within your gallery thread there (and also in the single art thread). If you do lots of both, have one gallery in each section. If you have mostly non-TFM, have a gallery in the Off topic art section and use the single fanart thread.

I bolded why I'm keeping Art Critique in the Fanarts subforum.
You can still have non-tfm art in here, same rules as it was before. It's unnecessary to make another thread just for non-tfm when you can use one to do everything.

#3905

Since sentinels already moved a ton of threads they would've moved this one if they felt it should've been moved. That's all there is to it.

#3906

Hello! Reposting this old guide I found surfing through old pages, it is a critique guide made by Akreon on dA.

http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/056/9/5/the_hitchhiker__s_guide_to_critique_by_akreon-d4qxzr7.jpg

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#3907

Lordfuzzy a dit :
Hello! Reposting this old guide I found surfing through old pages, it is a critique guide made by Akreon on dA.

What for though? It's already on the first post.

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#3908

Something is bugging me on this Nekodancer drawing I made... I know the floor is off, though. I dont know how to make it look how it looks in the game ;A; (could use some tips !). I am also bugged a bit by the legs splayed out, It’s my first time trying that...

Simply correct anything I could use help on, thanks :3

#3909

griffincraft a dit :
Something is bugging me on this Nekodancer drawing I made... I know the floor is off, though. I dont know how to make it look how it looks in the game ;A; (could use some tips !). I am also bugged a bit by the legs splayed out, It’s my first time trying that...

Simply correct anything I could use help on, thanks :3

The layout of the background looks fine to me (please correct me on this as I don't to backgrounds very often)
However, the way that the cat is sprawled looks very uncomfortable.
Usually when animals are that tired (or dead in fact) they usually have all their legs sectioned off to one side depending at which angle they fell from.
This is just an example I sketched but

It's a good idea to sketch out the animal if it's doing this pose to make sure that thelegs are still equal in length.
Also the tail of the cat looks active, if the animal was that tired, I doubt it would even lift it's tail.
Also this is bugging me and it could just be a nitpick but the cat looks like it resembles a canine instead of a feline.
Nitpicking also, I would make the snout a lot shorter and maybe have the other ear behind it's head instead of pointing the other way since it's head doesn't look like it's facing sideways.

Corrections to this critique is also appreciated.

#3910

griffincraft a dit :
Something is bugging me on this Nekodancer drawing I made... I know the floor is off, though. I dont know how to make it look how it looks in the game ;A; (could use some tips !). I am also bugged a bit by the legs splayed out, It’s my first time trying that...

Simply correct anything I could use help on, thanks :3

here's your floor help ovo same can be done to the walls.

it depends on what program you use though since i only know this trick for SAI and PS.

#3911

Look at that , my first chibi human , I know the hair is messed up and I want to learn how to do it in a better way and the left arm is way too long .
Let the critique games begin !! ( correct everything you can and need to )

#3912

Thanks! I did mean to put the legs splayed out like that on purpose, I dont know how to explain it exactly. Have you ever seen those dogs that lay down with they’re legs sprawled apart? I was trying that, but the cat dropping in exhaustion kind of. Thanks anyways :D

E// Umm.. I would love to make the tail dropping down, but I have no idea how to do it properly ;3;

D: I use Sketchbook Express

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#3913

Ilingirl a dit :

Look at that , my first chibi human , I know the hair is messed up and I want to learn how to do it in a better way and the left arm is way too long .
Let the critique games begin !! ( correct everything you can and need to )

I feel the eyes are too much on the left side of the face. The right eye should be pulled apart a bit, since the body is facing right.
Another thing I notice is that the hair root is a little too low, it should be on top of the head and not on the forehead.
I can't tell if it is a female or not, there are no *ahem* breasts.
What is that black splotch behind the neck? There is a dot between the lower and upper arm on the left arm as well.

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#3914

Can someone criteque this sketch? I dont want to color it until I get to know what to fix :3

E//
Yeah, I have problems drawing the other leg of any anima when theyre sitting. I could use help on that

Also, In the picture you see a lot of neck fluff. The neck isnt that visible, like my sketch’s

And the leg held up, I don’t know how to explain it much. I wanted to make it look like.. well, I was going for “Scrouge” (warrior cats) at first, I wanted him to be holding up a paw and showing his long sharp claws. I could use help on that too

Thanks anyway v

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#3915

I'm not sure what to critique this as, is it a lion? If so...
The things that are immediately noticeable for me:
The leg that is being held in the air is bent at an unnatural angle and you should probably study a bit more about the anatomy of a lion and how they move.
It only has 3 legs, in that position you'd be able to see at least some of the other hind leg.
The neck doesn't connect right for being a lion.
I found a picture of a lion sitting down on Google, just as a reference for how the neck should connect and to show the visibility of the hind legs.
http://i.imgur.com/yqW1WDi.jpg
Some nitpicks I have are:
You can still see the eye even though the hair is covering it, and the hair kind of just ends so it's hard to tell where it connects.
The ears are a bit pointy for being a lion.
I'm sure someone else would have a better critique on the anatomy and all that, but these are the things that immediately came to mind when I looked at this.

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#3916

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2014/226/2/6/0cali_by_sunnyhamster-d7v7cwg.png

second time drawing an anthro ;v;
critique please?
(the left foot is supposed to be lifted off the ground)

#3917

Can I request some Critique on this please?

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#3918

Sunnyhamster a dit :

second time drawing an anthro ;v;
critique please?
(the left foot is supposed to be lifted off the ground)

The only thing that really bothers me is the balance of the creature, and the placement of the tail(preference)

#3919

Lordfuzzy a dit :
Ilingirl a dit :

Look at that , my first chibi human , I know the hair is messed up and I want to learn how to do it in a better way and the left arm is way too long .
Let the critique games begin !! ( correct everything you can and need to )

I feel the eyes are too much on the left side of the face. The right eye should be pulled apart a bit, since the body is facing right.
Another thing I notice is that the hair root is a little too low, it should be on top of the head and not on the forehead.
I can't tell if it is a female or not, there are no *ahem* breasts.
What is that black splotch behind the neck? There is a dot between the lower and upper arm on the left arm as well.

Sorry for my tendency to do eyes more on the left O>O the black dots are from me forgetting that I should check if I colored the background properly and it's a girl but you can see it as a unisex thingy just because I have short hair and guyish clothes. Thank you for your time :3

#3920

DTMAY :)

Please don't be too mean. I haven't set finger on a pencil for ages before this :/

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