This was near the bottom so I'm bumping, don't forget to spread this to your tribe and friends!

If it's a whole tribe, maybe they can become a major part in the story :o

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Hi could I be added as the spirit of good fighters?Or like someone that gives hope to the good side, maybe a hardmode shaman?

Can you post a traduction in French ? *-*

Chapter 4

|~={Current Time}=~|

It was 5:20am.

Hero said she heard something outside. A rustle, a rustle made by a mouse.

"C'mon, I know there's someone, or something out there," Hero said.
"Okay, I'll go too," I replied.

I went outside along with Hero and we saw eyes. Red eyes, and they were the eyes of dark mice. Filled with anger and confusion. We went back into the hut, through the back door in the storage room, where we came out in the first place.

"We need to attack, otherwise we'll be dead by sunrise," Hero said, without a happy mood this time.
"Okay, we'll strike first, hopefully no other dark mice will notice us attacking them 1 by 1." I said.

I grabbed a sword, a golden sword. It was shiny and had a red dragon imprinted on the blade. It was made by dents and cuts into the blade. Paint was poured into the cuts and dents, I could tell by the way it's colored in so evenly, and thickly.

We walked back out the door and took cover in a bush. I snuck up under a dark mouse and swung my golden sword up into its chin. Blood gushed out like a waterfall. It gushed onto my paw and arm. The blade now covered in dark red blood.

All the other dark mice had noticed us...

"ATTACK, WAKE UP GUYS!" I shouted loudly enough so that Beth and Falcon would wake up.

"Ughh, what's going on?" Falcon asked, 1 eye closed and the other half open.
"Can't you hear, there's war going on out there!" Beth shouted.
"Okay, I need a weapon," Falcon said full of exhaustion.

He looked through the hut trying to find a weapon. He picked up a mace and said it was too heavy.

"Ugh, where's a good weapon?" he muttered, talking to himself.
"OH ARE YOU SERIOUS? HERE JUST TAKE THIS CHEESUS!" Beth nagged at him, while handing him a silver sword, sharp as a hawk's eyes.

Meanwhile Beth just used a branch she found while walking outside to help fight.

I fought on, striking every dark mouse moving around me. Falcon struck a dark mouse hard in the side of the head. Its head starting gushing blood. Again, his stance reminded me of Redditguy.

[url]So this is how the mice near Impure feel like, fighting on and on,[/url] I thought.

From my perriferal vision I could see Hero spawning cannons at the enemies. With her staff decorated with shaman feathers and orbs.

"I know what you're thinking, and no this wont last for long. This is energy saved before anything happened. After this, it'll wear out, burn out like a candle." she said with worry in her voice.

I nodded, understanding that we must not relax just becuase we have cannons. Then I saw, Beth had been strucken in the leg hard with a branch. The dark mice were stronger than I had anticipated. I motioned her to go back into the hut and heal herself. She listened to my command and entered the hut, and locked the doors with spare anvils.

I took her place in the battlefield. Then, I saw once again, Falcon had been struck in the arm, causing him to favor his remaining good arm.

"I'm out, that's it, I'm out of shaman energy!" Hero said with despair in her voice.

She swung her staff into a mouse's face and they fell back. Sadly her staff broke from that powerful swing. Falcon was falling back, he was outnumbered by about 6 dark mice surrounding him. I jumped in and struck 1 in the leg and it collapsed onto another. A domino effect took over, but it wasn't going to last. They got back up, and seemed even more angry.

Falcon had fallen...
He wasn't dead though, he fainted from being out of energy. I knew I had to do something.

I used all of my might to finish off just 1 more dark mouse, for it would be my last. With everything I had, I struck it in the neck and its head flew off into the sky. I collapsed, out of energy. The dark mice surrounded me...

The lights faded out, the end had come. Is this the final ending...for me?

At the moment I thought I was dead. I could have sworn I saw a dragon. A real dragon, a red and black strong dragon. I woke up, finding that I was still on the ground, but no enemies in sight...

|7:43am|

A dragon, that dragon I saw in my mind was there. I could only see it fading now though, fading away. It talked to me.

"I will come every now and then, when there really is..." it started.
"...A Final Ending..." and it finished its sentence and faded away.

I had dragged everyone into the hut and put them into their beds.

We had to rest. We had a lot more traveling to do...

[To Be Continued...]
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So I haven't added any new people yet, but I am soon to add! Like I said action was coming up. Also I changed the color of the chapter. Since the dragon has appeared I have changed it to red, things are going to get intense...

Wut. :o Did my brain say it was epic?

Chapter 5

|12:26pm|

"I'm alive?!" Falcon shouted in shock.
"Yeah...I didn't do shit though, besides drag you back here." I said still dazed by the dragon.
"Wait, what happened? I thought we all died." Hero asked while touching her arms and legs to check if she wasn't a ghost.
"I dragged all of you back into the hut, if it weren't for that dragon we'd all be dead." I said.
"Dragon? There's no such thing as dragons, they're just myths, and even if there was, it was a story creature and was said to eat mice and cats depending on its mood." Hero said in disbelief.

Beth had woken up early, but her leg was still red and swolen. She now walked with a heavy limp and uses a smoothly carved staff I made her. I carved it to be shaped like a small tree. Falcon had a really badly injured arm, but it was almost completely healed now after I put that cream I found in the medical storage box on him. Hero's okay, but still suspiscious about something.

"I couldn't help, but realize something's brotherin' you, Hero...What is it?" I asked.
"I think we should head back...You know? To Impure." she answered.
"Kay' we'll be on our way at 1:15pm okay?" I said.
"Fine, we need to destroy this place though. Before someone figures out that we're here." she said with fear in her voice.

It had turned 1:15pm we all packed whatever we needed and could carry. 3 medical boxes (small), 5 boxes of food (small), our weapons sheathed into leather weapon sheaths hooked to our tail and around our waste, and then we had, a box containing Beth's shaman feather project. Since we're moving to Impure she thought we could try to clear out the rocks.

"They're still doing it right now if they're not all dead, it's still not cleared. There's no way it'll be done soon!" I disagreed with Beth.
"No, I want to use these to help everyone!" she continued to resist my statements.
"Fine, do whatever, you're carrying your own little stupid box of junk." I said.

We were walking down the mountain. I could still see the battlefield. The stack of dead bodies, 1 of dead mice (allies) and the other of dark mice. They were huge, I was disapointed to see that the ally pile was that big. Then again it had been what? 3 days? We need to get back and fast.

The sun set early today, or as well as we could see through the dark sky. We set up camp, but I didn't sleep quite yet. I picked up these logs I found. I set them up so that they looked like blocks. I used them as targets for practice. If I really wanted to help I'd need to get better at fighting.

"Hyah!" I let out a noise as I swung my golden sword into the log.

It was anchored in pretty well so it didn't go flying. I struck hard every single time I hit it. I tried new combos like striking it in the leg then kicking it in the leg with my heel after I turn around 360° to strike it in the head. These [url]had[/url] to help me. After a while I did get better. It was already 12:36am by the time I decided to stop for the night. My sword was now dull, which wasn't good. I walked into the forest to find a special stone called the Pointed Stone. It's supposed to make swords sharp. I found 1 near the sparkling stream. I grabbed it and started to sharpen my sword as I saw someone pop out of the river. Water sprayed at me and the grass.

"Hey there!" the stranger greeted me.
"What the..." I muttered to myself.
"What, never seen an underground protection tunnel?" they said mocking me for being surprised.
"My name's Polypopu!, yours?" Poly asked me.
"Uhhh, my names Jjaakkee, Jake for short..."I said.
"Oh that's great, c'mon in!" Poly said as he motioned me to enter his tunnel.

I entered through into the river and had to duck inside of it to find the entrance. I was surprised to see that some water followed me through the entrance, but after a bit, it just flushed out into a completely different tunnel.

"Yup, my home this is!" Poly said, proud of his tunnel.

I had assumed this provided protection from enemies. I was going to leave to get back to the group, but then Poly stopped me.

"Hey, stop right there! It could be dangerous out there!" Poly said conerned about me.
"I can fight for myself, so I think it's safe enough for me. I need to head back to me and my friend's camp." I said, thinking about destroying the camp 5 hours later anyways, just like the hut.
"Your friends? Well invite them over, I'm guessing you're heading to the resistance HQ." Poly said.
"Alright, I just need to leave for a bit then." I said.

I found the tunnel which I entered and swam up through the stream. It was already 4:42am. I ran back into the camp and shouted,

"Guys you gotta come! It's safer where I just came from!"
"Ugghh, you have to wake us up again?!" Falcon said, yet again exhausted.
"Alright, if it's safe I'd move there! Don't want to break my other leg from another attack." Beth said.

Hero tagged along, so we moved to Poly's tunnel. We slept for a good amount of time. It was quite comfortable after staying for about 2 hours.

[To Be Continued...]
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Sorry that chapter was so long, I just had to write it. Things are going back to normal, it's not too intense, more mild.

Added Characters :
-Polypopu

Nice one :P

Yay, and don`t be sorry for writing that much, is just some more interesting.I`m llooking forward to see what I`ll do in the future

am want to join

Chapter 6

{2 days later}

We had walked back up the snowy hills. Winter has come, it's chilly. Snow was falling like little feathers in the air. We spotted Impure standing outside of the tribehouse. The battle was still raging on, but I never noticed that only a few people were left.

"Welcome back, did you find Hero?" Impure asked me.
"Of course, she's back there!" I answered.
"No! You have to watch out for her! HOLY SHIT!" Impure said.

I turned around and I saw a dark mouse raging towards Hero fom behind, about to smack her straight in the back of the head. Then, Reddit ran from the side into Hero's direction and sliced off the mouse's head, a clean cut, no ridges or anything. Just straight...

"What the..." Hero said in shock.
"It's my job, no need for thanks'." Reddit said with a cool voice.

I turned back around to Impure.

Impure sighed, "You have to watch out. Especially in a battlefield like this. I have to tell you something as well." Impure said.

I nodded, and showed that I was all ears.

"Tyto, it has died. A band of dark mice attacked it and everyone split. There was a leader though. We just don't know who." Impure said with despair.
"Wh-What? That can't be, Delatex should have been healed by then and Willinator would have fended them off. Same with Super!" I said, refusing to believe that.
"Delatex was missing the day before, Willinator did fight, he was strucken down by sharp claws, like those of an owl, and Super ran away in fear! believe it or not, Tyto's dead. Admshumaker is no where to be found and Tummnus has joined Les Micerables." Impure told me.

I had to check it out...
So I ran out into the battlefield and took out my rage on the dark mice. I slashed and thrusted. Swung and attacked. Mice looked at me like I was crazy, no like I was a god. I took out numerous dark mice. But I wasn't satisfied. I kept slashing and hacking through the giant crowds of dark mice. Tears flew out of my eyes.

Tyto was dead...
And I'm the last remaining...

I ran towards Tyto's direction, through the battlefield. Mice still stared at me, thinking I was a crazy god. I sheathed my sword as I ran. I found Tyto's base. It was in ruins, furniture everywhere, torn up. Broken pieces of planks and boxes. Blood shedded on the floor and remaining walls. Feathers scattered across the floor, but not those of a shaman, those of an owl...

It was Delatex, he was the leader.

It all adds up! Delatex said he loves owls, he was missing the day before the attack, and he was healed by then!

I was shocked and angry. I screamed into the air, snow falling on to my face. I was so loud, the BR server must have heard me, if it was still alive.

"Calm down, get yourself together." someone said.

A familar voice. One of an annoying person, but someone in Tyto.

I turned around...

Super was standing there. I wasn't the last...
A new chapter of my life, has begun...

[To Be Continued...]
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This was based on a real event that happened to Tyto. So I decided to make the chapter color blue, for sadness.

Added Characters :
-Supereemory
-Willinator
-Tummnus

Jjaakkee a dit :

Chapter 6

{2 days later}

We had walked back up the snowy hills. Winter has come, it's chilly. Snow was falling like little feathers in the air. We spotted Impure standing outside of the tribehouse. The battle was still raging on, but I never noticed that only a few people were left.

"Welcome back, did you find Hero?" Impure asked me.
"Of course, she's back there!" I answered.
"No! You have to watch out for her! HOLY SHIT!" Impure said.

I turned around and I saw a dark mouse raging towards Hero fom behind, about to smack her straight in the back of the head. Then, Reddit ran from the side into Hero's direction and sliced off the mouse's head, a clean cut, no ridges or anything. Just straight...

"What the..." Hero said in shock.
"It's my job, no need for thanks'." Reddit said with a cool voice.

I turned back around to Impure.

Impure sighed, "You have to watch out. Especially in a battle field like this. I have to tell you something as well." Impure said.

I nodded, and showed that I was all ears.

"Tyto, it has died. A band of dark mice attacked it and everyone split. There was a leader though. We just don't know who." Impure said with despair.
"Wh-What? That can't be, Delatex should have been healed by then and Willinator would have fended them off. Same with Super!" I said, refusing to believe that.
"Delatex was missing the day before, Willinator did fight, he was strucken down by sharp claws, like those of an owl, and Super ran away in fear! believe it or not, Tyto's dead. Admshumaker is no where to be found and Tummnus has joined Les Micerables." Impure told me.

I had to check it out...
So I ran out into the battlefield and took out my rage on the dark mice. I slashed and thrusted. Swung and attacked. Mice looked at me like I was crazy, no like I was a god. I took out numerous dark mice. But I wasn't satisfied. I kept slashing and hacking through the giant crowds of dark mice. Tears flew out of my eyes.

Tyto was dead...
And I'm the last remaining...

I ran towards Tyto's direction, through the battlefield. Mice still stared at me thinking I was a crazy god. I sheathed my sword as I ran. I found Tyto's base. It was in ruins, furniture everywhere, torn up. Broken pieces of planks and boxes. Blood shredded everywhere. Feathers scattered across the floor, but not those of a shaman, those of an owl...

It was Delatex, he was the leader.

It all adds up! Delatex said he loves owls, he was missing the day before the attack, and he was healed by then!

I was shocked and angry. I screamed into the air, snow falling on to my face. I was so loud, the BR server must have heard me.

"Calm down, get yourself together." someone said.

A fimilar voice. One of an annoying person, but someone in Tyto.

I turned around...

Super was standing there. I wasn't the last...
A new chapter of my life, has begun...

[To Be Continued...]
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This was based on a real event that happened to Tyto. So I decided to make the chapter color blue, for sadness.

Added Characters :
-Supereemory
-Willinator
-Tummnus

Oh my god please O3O

Herobrinefan a dit :

Oh my god please O3O

What?

Jjaakkee a dit :

What?

Thats epic O3O

Herobrinefan a dit :

Thats epic O3O

I know right :D
Still sad though.
Shit just got real.

And very. ^_^

Sorry now new chapters today, not that many people are reading this so try to spread the story to your friends, tribe and other people you may bump into. It would help me a lot more, otherwise it just seems like a waste of time.

can u add me jake in dat whole Tyto dies thing - reality in a story I LIKE IT ... still sad tough ;_; I MISS U GUYS *reaches out*

Include me jake xD i know horn and you so I;m the guest of honor [if u want to make me a magical princess] i <3 fantasy :3

Still no new chapters.
Sorry, I'm sick, no new updates :c