now that you pointed it out I could really put more time cleaning my drawings up, any tips for that? :D
I'll try cell shading next time though and I completely forgot about the tail LOL

thank you sock <3

when i try to clean up my drawings i put just a really dark fill on a the bottom layer and if anything looks out of place i just find the layer its on and erase it and maybe zoom in a little bit to see if there's anything

NICE THREAD +9000 POINTS!!!!111!!1!!!one!

Meisftw a dit :

I'll use my mos recent mouse drawing then :O

What else can I improve on? :D

I need help on shading hair :((

I think it's great! But I find pronounced shading more attractive, so maybe make your shading darker? Otherwise, I love it!




I've aaalllwwaaayyysss wanted critiques on my art *u*

I like your style and mouse anatomy a lot c:
I think you should try making your shading a bit more noticable I guess? Also, try not to use too much of the highlights on the fur. also for the eyes making the sclera's white and color in the eyes like how they look irl

other than that I like your meece a lot :D

Satash a dit :

dA Muro is the worst.

Use GIMP or get Photoshop ($) or anything that can do vector.
Find Paint Tool SAI online for free if you want, but that's illegal.

ebil.



Tuxpaint o_o i only used it because of undo and redo buttons.

Tfmasian a dit :

ebil.


Tuxpaint o_o i only used it because of undo and redo buttons.

U need to round the face more and make the features more straight cause it's crooked

Ill use the art Im most prud of c: (sorry its so big i thought it was smaller when i made it '^')



I made this just before i discovered blur

Darklonewolf... What program do you use?
Most art programs support these layer-things which are pretty handy.
I usually leave the outline layer as the top one so that the color wouldn't overlap them.
Honestly, your picture looks rather messy :/

...I'm leaving this here for criticism:

Hmm...
I said that:

Mishkatave a dit :

Hmm...
I said that:

Ur image is too sharp,try bluring it a little.

Laddee a dit :

Ur image is too sharp,try bluring it a little.

Ok i edit!

Iceviaya a dit :

Darklonewolf... What program do you use?
Most art programs support these layer-things which are pretty handy.
I usually leave the outline layer as the top one so that the color wouldn't overlap them.
Honestly, your picture looks rather messy :/

...I'm leaving this here for criticism:

It's okay but just dat the mouse is in a very akward position (pretend being in the mouse's shoes)

Iceviaya a dit :

Darklonewolf... What program do you use?
Most art programs support these layer-things which are pretty handy.
I usually leave the outline layer as the top one so that the color wouldn't overlap them.
Honestly, your picture looks rather messy :/

...I'm leaving this here for criticism:

I kinda think that the eyes are in a weird spot
I mean, if you were to look at it face to face, it'd probably look like it had no eyes at all
Although, people have their own styles

Darklonewolf a dit :

Ill use the art Im most prud of c: (sorry its so big i thought it was smaller when i made it '^')


I made this just before i discovered blur

Just going to say that maybe you should add less detail into the hair, because that's the only part that stands out a lot

Laddee a dit :

It's okay but just dat the mouse is in a very akward position (pretend being in the mouse's shoes)

Oh, I made it that way cause I wanted it to look like a howling wolf more than a mouse :p

Laddee a dit :

U need to round the face more and make the features more straight cause it's crooked

The head was purposely crooked

Laddee a dit :

Ur image is too sharp,try bluring it a little.

don't forget when critiquing someone to make sure you tell them that blurring is just what you like and how you draw
@mishkatave, first of all i'd like to ask what program you're using for art since it kind of looks like either the binary brush on paint tool sai or MS paint and if you're using MS paint then i'd suggest that you try using a better art program like paint tool sai, photoshop, or gimp (which is FREE)
also i think you should try making things less shaky which can be hard with a mouse I know but look here

it looks a little unattrative

also on the arms here
i don't think arms go like that but you could try something a little more like this

you could also add some shading underneath items to make it seem more real

keep in mind that you don't have to take my critiques

Soakitup a dit :

don't forget when critiquing someone to make sure you tell them that blurring is just what you like and how you draw
@mishkatave, first of all i'd like to ask what program you're using for art since it kind of looks like either the binary brush on paint tool sai or MS paint and if you're using MS paint then i'd suggest that you try using a better art program like paint tool sai, photoshop, or gimp (which is FREE)
also i think you should try making things less shaky which can be hard with a mouse I know but look here
it looks a little unattrative

also on the arms here
i don't think arms go like that but you could try something a little more like this
you could also add some shading underneath items to make it seem more real

keep in mind that you don't have to take my critiques

I use Paint tool sai! Look:

Mishkatave a dit :

I use Paint tool sai! Look:

Beautiful Oo i'm not good than this...

Here's an exemple (I USE AN BASE) :

Mishkatave a dit :

I use Paint tool sai! Look:

yup, I see!
I like that picture, it looks nice

Soakitup a dit :

yup, I see!
I like that picture, it looks nice

Thanks! I am not pro on Paint tool sai