Lol wat? xP

Vivihi a dit :

Woahhhhh nice story :) But when you start a new paragraph, make a space.
Example:
^^

The title is really long in my opinion o.o

Took the words out of my mouth.

----ohHO DELETE MYSELF OKAY

Okay, this is just getting out of hand. Why must people have to go around to every thread and correct their grammar? (ahem especially when they don't type perfectly themselves) It is really quite annoying and does more harm than good. I mean, I don't see anyone going and criticising the bad artists unless they asked for it! They say "Wow, that is very nice, I love it!" The same should go for fanfic writers. Why do people have to make such a big fuss if someone forgot to indent?

This was certainly not the right place to put this comment but I feel that it is needed here.


More on topic, I love this story, it is very descriptive, and if you write more I will certainly read it.

Sourisplum a dit :

Okay, this is just getting out of hand. Why must people have to go around to every thread and correct their grammar? (ahem especially when they don't type perfectly themselves) It is really quite annoying and does more harm than good. I mean, I don't see anyone going and criticising the bad artists unless they asked for it! They say "Wow, that is very nice, I love it!" The same should go for fanfic writers. Why do people have to make such a big fuss if someone forgot to indent?

This was certainly not the right place to put this comment but I feel that it is needed here.


More on topic, I love this story, it is very descriptive, and if you write more I will certainly read it.

OMG stop taking words out of my mouth >:O

Noobforevah a dit :

Let me just put that back in. (grabs words) Open up!

*Opens mouth*

Noobforevah a dit :

(drops words into mouth) YOUR WELCOME.
(runs out of text to sa

*Hands more text*

--- NO DELETE MYSELF JSEUS CHRIST

Noobforevah a dit :

(drops words into mouth) YOUR WELCOME.
(runs out of text to sa

You're*.

Now you know how it feels. I'll remember not to get my fingers tangled up next time when I'm typing. My apologies.

Sourisplum a dit :

Okay, this is just getting out of hand. Why must people have to go around to every thread and correct their grammar? (ahem especially when they don't type perfectly themselves) It is really quite annoying and does more harm than good. I mean, I don't see anyone going and criticising the bad artists unless they asked for it! They say "Wow, that is very nice, I love it!" The same should go for fanfic writers. Why do people have to make such a big fuss if someone forgot to indent?

Thanks. I normally offer criticism because a lot of people want to get better but are unsure how to say it, hence why I ask. Also thank you for bringing up something that bothers me, when people who don't even know how to spell grammar think they hold the right to correct someone's...

I dont think i will keep going althought i think iam in a good start
But i think i might make a new short story and call this story a short story ,too.

And srry for double postingn but

Sourisplum a dit :

Okay, this is just getting out of hand. Why must people have to go around to every thread and correct their grammar? (ahem especially when they don't type perfectly themselves) It is really quite annoying and does more harm than good. I mean, I don't see anyone going and criticising the bad artists unless they asked for it! They say "Wow, that is very nice, I love it!" The same should go for fanfic writers. Why do people have to make such a big fuss if someone forgot to indent?

This was certainly not the right place to put this comment but I feel that it is needed here.


More on topic, I love this story, it is very descriptive, and if you write more I will certainly read it.

thhank you very much i really thank u