[Fanfic] Tigs Mansion |
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Pawgold a dit : wat |
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Soakitup a dit : lol haha yea erm bisexual means you can love both boys and girls. Dictionary Definition: Bisexuality is sexual attraction or sexual behavior toward both males and females. |
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(sad sad can't be main character) :c |
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Kattiej a dit : bisexuality means you are sexually attracted to the female and male gender/sex biromantic means you are romnaitcally attracted to the female and male gender/sex i'm just gonna take this to en chat thread if anyone wants to continue this |
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Satash a dit : Coming -it was a mistake I fixed Nice story btws e: just realized that was from wiki and not the actual dictionary, stupid google |
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Okay I'll be a more character Name: Yei Age: 12 Gender: Female Referance: /profile Bethdacat ingame Personality: Yei is more different than other people. She is named from Snow, the translation from Yei which is a japanese word, so she is warm from snow, and cold from heat. She can even survive -100 degrees. She is a sorcerer which makes magic. In her opinion, she thinks she is pro and noob at the same time in sorcerery. It can be disappointing to see her get out of control. |
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Crap. I should start on this... -- Character sign ups are closed until I can get this all straightened out and find a place for everyone. -- @Bethdacat I'm going to need a reference that I can show on here.. I'm sorry ;; Can you make one really quickly on cheese.formice.com/dressroom ? |
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Alright. Can't wait, I really loved the first one you put in the TS. (Tribe Subform). |
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Chapter one: Down deep under the grounds of Transformania was a lost mansion. The air was thick and hard to breathe in, and it smelt unpleasant. The grounds and walls were damp, and it was dark. In the center was a fountain that had gone dry. On top of the fountain sat a female mouse, and around the fountain were mice, some out cold, most dead. After some time, three of the bodies started to stir. One by one, they woke up. They all saw one another, they all smelt the unpleasant aroma, and they all focused their sight on the fountain in the middle. Kira woke up to an unpleasant smell, and she stirred for a moment. The air was thick, so she couldn’t breathe well, she sat up and looked around, and saw outlines of four other mice standing. They all seemed to be focused on something in the center, so she looked there too. In the center was a fountain that has gone dry. There was a mouse sitting atop of it. Her red hair was covering her eyes, and she was swinging her legs back and forth. She had something in her paw, and it looked like a knife, but it was hard to tell. Kira tried to take a step forward to get a better look, but gravity was pulling her back down. She got up again thinking she was just dizzy from waking up, but the same thing happened, again and again. “Why can't I walk? And... Where am I?” she thought to herself as she looked around. After a second, she turned back to the fountian. “Who are you?” she tried to say, but her throat was as dry as the fountain, and no words came out. “You’re probably all wondering the same questions...” the girl started, “....so, I’ll just be nice and answer for you.” She smirked, and then jumped off from the fountain. “I know that voice.” Thought Kira. “My name’s Kaden. This is my masters--” she got cut off by a pale, ghost-like mouse, who had just appeared next to her. “Welcome, to my mansion....” he started “...Allow me to explain. You all have 24 hours to try and survive while Kaden here, tries to kill you. But, every once in awhile, I will show up and ask you all a question, you all get one answer, if one person answers right, they just saved you all, but if all of you guys answer wrong, well, you’ll see what happens..” he smirked at the worried faces around him. “Well, this should be fun.” A boy said sarcasticly. It was one of the mice who had woken up. From the looks of it, he had brown hair. Kira figured because of the sarcasm he was using, that he obviously would have a lot of attitude. She rolled her eyes, and looked back up at the mice by the fountian. Her sight ajusted to the dark. Her eyes widened as she realized who this 'Kaden' was. The ghost mouse ignored the boys comment. “Are you ready to run for your lives?” he asked. Even though they didn’t have a choice, he still waited for someone to speak up. When no one did, he just simply grinned. "Well then, let's begin." he looked over at Kaden. "Get them." he said before drifting away. And with that, a door opened on the far side of the room, Kaden bolted after the group of mice, and they ran. -- Here's the first chapter! Have fun little mice \o/ If you see any typos or anything, please let me know! I'm pretty much just copy-pasting from what I wrote in the tribe subforums, so I need to edit a few things to make it fit with these characters.. But if I missed anything, please do let me know! ^^ |
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AAAAAA SO AWESOME <3333 |
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Amaazing so far!! *-* |
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Thank you, guys ^^ |
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No problem, it's amazing. *-* |
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that chapter is amaze. just fkignhng amaze. such interesting c: Kiokosama a dit : oh. I don't know, ask Squeak yourself ^^" |
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yes like like |
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I'm glad you all like it ^^ -- I'm debathing on whether or not I should post chapter 2 right now... |
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YOU SHOULD YOU SHOULD YES YES YES YES |
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I wonder if we should do parings... That would make the story a bit more interesting... Do you guys think Squeakishly would be okay with a Kira x Talon pairing? Their personalities would be compatible once Talon actually opens up more. Ehm-- if.. he opens up more, I'm not sure if I should make him the strong silent time the entire time, or have him open up to the group a little bit sometime during the-- god damn, I need to plan this TT.TT |
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Kiokosama a dit : Aha, I don't mind, Pairings do make the story interesting ;) |
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Kiokosama a dit : Well, you should see if you think the chapter seems good, then you should post. well I think anyways gah, |