Name: Soren
Age: 17
Personality: Soren is usually pretty full of himself, he tends forget others have feelings too. He doesn't like to get too close to people as friends, last time he did he lost them and went through much pain. If he does get close to someone he is very sweet.
Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter: Awesome fighter
Extra: Soren is a sadist, this started when the person he was close to died, afterwards watching other people get hurt made him very happy. This makes him a great fighter because each time he hurts someone, he wants to do it again because he receives joy from it.

Ref:

Name: Abyssa
Age: 16
Personality: Abyssa is a bright and open-minded mouse with slightly terrible humor. She's got a loud voice by nature but she Abyssa doesn't mind that. She'd put up with anything people throw at her, no matter how bad it is. Would often shout/mumble random things depending on the situation and often feels anger when others are sad.

Shaman/random/normal/awesome fighter: hella awesome fighter yeeeeeah

Extra: Listens to upbeat music in free time and has a slight trouble getting through spaces because of her horns. The sun pendant is scorchingly hot on the outer layers but in the middle it's cold as ice.

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Chapter one

A Discovery.
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Zensin was reading his latest fantasy book about some ancient lost spell when he heard a shout. Looking up, trying not to twitch his eye he scanned the surrounding area for the source. Of course what he saw was Shimmer running around with a wooden sword shouting insults at imaginary enemies.

"Would you shut up? I'm trying to read here." He said and Shimmer turned around to glare at him.

"Ok I like reading too but you need to learn to run around and have some fun every once in awhile you lazy butt." Shimmer crossed her arms and Zensin took a deep breath.

Standing up, he walked toward the right. Shimmer ran after him shouting "AND WHERE DO YOU THINK YOU'RE GOIN'?" Sighing Zensin looked over his shoulder at her.

"I'm going to have some fun."
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Zensin walked for about half an hour in the old forest that grew by his home, completely ignoring Shimmer who tried to follow him sneakily. But she was making so much noise that he had to grit his teeth and turn around tp face her.

"What the heck are you doing?" He asked and Shimmer shrugged.

"Sharing in the funnnn." She walked over some tree roots to get to him and put her arm around his shoulder. "Come on bro, you can't go off like that without expecting me to follow you. I'm predictable remember?" Zensin shrugged her arm off and continued walking. He had to admit, Shimmer was pretty predictable. -Why are sisters so annoying, is it just that they're naturally annoying or..- Zensin's thoughts were stopped by Shimmer's gasp.

"Hey hey Zen, this place feels weird. Like really weird, feeling sick here ok." Zensin reached out to catch her as she stumbled. He noticed that his breath had become ragged. What the cannon was happening!? Shimmer was now trying desperately to stay standing, but she had lean against him to keep upright.

After a few minutes the feeling passed although they both still felt weak and nausiated. Shimmer spun around, fists out and ready for a fight (she had a hard time because she kept stumbling over rocks and sticks).

"Okay who's punkass idea was this?! WHO THOUGHT IT WAS FUNNY TO PULL THIS PRANK HUH?! HUH?!" She shouted glaring at everything around them.

Zensin put a hand on her shoulder. "Hey calm down!" Shimmer shook his hand off.

"I can't, I'm pissed." Sighing, Zensin was about to explain to her that shouting at things that couldn't talk is a stupid thing to do when he felt it. A tug.

Something was, calling him, pulling him towards it. He looked at Shimmer in surprise and could tell by the look on her face that she was experiencing the same thing.

They turned, and followed the tug. Zensin lead the way while Shimmer trailed behind, they tripped a few times over some tangled tree roots.

Shimmer leaned against an old oak and scratched her head. "Gah why is this place so.. Tree-ish."

Zensin turned around. "Tree-ish? It's a forest Shimmer, the place is going to have trees." She grumbled following after him thinking -Pff.. Nerd.-

After awhile they came to a tiny clearing, and Zensin walked to the middle. The strange pull faded and Shimmer looked over her brother's shoulder.

"What the heck is that?"

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Here's a teaser guys. Again when I finish the chapter some things might be changed a little bit.

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Chapter two

A choice.
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Zensin shrugged, and knelt down. He reached out to grab a strange circular object that stuck out of the earth, but then stopped. -Should I be doing this? What if it's a trap and the vampire bats come out to get me. Then again bat's aren't real, they've been exctinct for over a hundred years. So I could take it out and examine it, but then again it might be something I'm not meant to see and- before he'd finished thinking Shimmer had already pulled the object from the dirt.

He jumped up and reached for it but she dodged. "What the hell are you doing!" Zensin shouted and made a grab for it again. "That thing could be dangerous!"

Shimmer stuck her tounge out at him. "Then why do you want it so badly?" Sighing, Zensin stopped trying to get the thing from her hands because he realized that it would be useless to use force or to try and explain the danger to her, she'd just ignore him. So instead he started trying to figure out what it was.

His sister had stopped running from him and now came up and sat down by him. She seemed, strangely quiet.

"Zen, I think I know what it is. Or who made it at least." Zensin looked down at her surprised.

He sat down and crossed his arms. "Well who then?" Shimmer looked down at the circle in her hands.

"That like, ancient mice race from all those fairy tales. You know the one." She said

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Here's a teaser guys. Again when I finish the chapter some things might be changed a little bit.
Oh dear. Double post eheh.

great!

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Here's a teaser guys. Again when I finish the chapter some things might be changed a little bit.
Oh dear. Double post eheh.

great so far

Chapter two

A choice.
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Zensin shrugged, and knelt down. He reached out to grab a strange circular object that stuck out of the earth, but then stopped. -Should I be doing this? What if it's a trap and the vampire bats come out to get me. Then again bat's aren't real, they've been exctinct for over a hundred years. So I could take it out and examine it, but then again it might be something I'm not meant to see and- before he'd finished thinking Shimmer had already pulled the object from the dirt.

He jumped up and reached for it but she dodged. "What the hell are you doing!" Zensin shouted and made a grab for it again. "That thing could be dangerous!"

Shimmer stuck her tounge out at him. "Then why do you want it so badly?" Sighing, Zensin stopped trying to get the thing from her hands because he realized that it would be useless to use force or to try and explain the danger to her, she'd just ignore him. So instead he started trying to figure out what it was.

His sister had stopped running from him and now came up and sat down by him. She seemed, strangely quiet.

"Zen, I think I know what it is. Or who made it at least." Zensin looked down at her surprised.

He sat down and crossed his arms. "Well who then?" Shimmer looked down at the circle in her hands.

"That like, ancient mice race from all those fairy tales." She said.

Zensin laughed. "Are you serioues? I loved those stories too but that doesn't mean they exist." He stopped laughing, and started to realize that if this was part of that fabled mice race then it'd be the beginning of discovering what the heck happened to them!

However, before he could state this or before Shimmer could reply to his earlier comment the circle began to glow blue. Shimmer stared at it wide eyed and her brother darted over and put his paw on it. A sudden beam a light flashed into the sky and images poured through the siblings' minds.

An old path, a broken forest, a withered mountain, a shadowed valley, and a long span of land with almost nothing in it whatsoever. And then, the images stopped.

They dropped the circle and scooted away. "What the fk was that." Shimmer asked standing up.

"I think it was.. A map." Zensin said standing up and dusting himself off.

"A map? Really? A map to what?" She stepped forward and picked the circle up again. Zensin came over and hugged her.

"Thank you for picking it up. Because now we might just have the map to the greatest mystery of transformice history!" Shimmer gave him a 'what the heck are you talking about' look and he sighed.

"I think it gave us the map to the missing mice." He said and she smiled.

"Ooooh. What should we do with it? Try and get there or go home cause we're lazy? I don't mind the go home part or anything." Shimmer laughed and Zensin frowned. -Right, home. The annoying place with all those snot nosed kids and rude dorm "mothers". But it is the only place we can stay, if we go on this adventure who knows what might happen. But then again that place was almost always a living hell so cheese it I'm doing this-

"I'm going to follow the map. The way is practically implanted in my brain now so why not? Plus I don't want to go back to that good for nothing boarding school. Come on, let's go." He turned around and headed north. Shimmer followed behind.

(I got lazy sorryyyy and cant put it in quote. Letter eating glitch...)

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Sketchtoy soren. Blewp

OOooo cool!Cant wait for next chap:3

I'll try and at least have a teaser done for you guys today.

But for now have this drawing of Zen

ooooooo, amazing! cant wait

Chapter three

The journey begins. Wait who's this?
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The siblings had been walking for a long time. It was beginning to get dark and they were still in this old dusty forest. It felt like they'd choke in the stuffyness. Large vine-like roots rose about a foot above the earth so they made slow progress, and tripped often. Their feet soon became sore with bruises and scratches. Shimmer had begun to curse and swear at the forest and its trees.

"Stupid freaking cheese lacking cannon ball filled bone yard!" She kicked at an old stump and squeaked at the pain. She heard a chuckle and looked up to glare at her brother. Zensin gave her an innocent look.

"Come on it was pretty funny." He said moving onward and Shimmer hit the back of his head.

"It is not funny when someone is in pain!" She said and Zensin laughed again and rubbed the now sore spot that she'd hit.

"It is when they cause the pain themselves. Especially when they do it by kicking an old stump." That comment earned him a punch in the arm. -Gosh why are girls so physical..- He wondered and sighed.

This was going to be a long trip.
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Lame teaser and a short one ;; sorry

MOWMOW! more more* amazing :D cant wait