[Fanfiction] The Shaman Elements: The Suffering Years... *Book #1* |
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Sorry to rush you, but can you update? |
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Name: Dex Age:16 Bio: He is the youngest of the shamans and has focused the majority of his shaman powers on building meaning he has built many houses,schools,castles,etc,etc the reason why is that he wants everyone to be equal and to start that quest he has tried to make sure everyone has a home and education. Role: Shaman Personality: Outgoing yet he can also over react at times,If he trusts someone he will stay loyal to them at all costs,when his trust is betrayed he will go berserk Ref: A dark brown mouse with light tan messy hair,wears green headphones and a green bandanna,shaman color thing is light tan. Secret: He is the shaman of earth tho he doesn't yell it out if someone wants to know he will tell them about it. With the powers he can move dirt,stone and even trees every thought he can't grow things. Another secret is that his real name is not Dex but it's Choseki (Cho-zek-ei) but he only tells this to the mice he trusts the most. Here's a bonus thing I guess showing his opinion on the other shamans. His opinion on Veronica is that she to him is unlike any mouse he has ever met and he wishes he could be like her someday. Aquarius seems like a pretty cool guy and would probably want to hang out with him alot. Aura seems misunderstood to him and he thinks it's rude that mice judge her by her power one-day he wants to understand how it feels to be her. Good? Dernière modification le 1423203480000 |
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Wow I havent checked this thread for a while o.o Anyway guys characters r accepted! I may have time to do the chapter! |
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OKAY GUYS I rlly have time to write so... HERES YOUR FRICKIN CHAPTER!!! Chapter 1: Nobody gets it "Urgh..what happened?" Violetta thought. She was dwindling around her broken house until she found another silent house that has been destroyed. "Hello? Anybody here?" A mouse shouted in fear. Violetta went closer to her and tapped her shoulder. "Hey, who are you?" The girl asked. "Im Violetta, you?" Violetta asked. Sorry guys its night time ill continue it tomorrow. |
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Better ref for Angel ![]() |
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you have not updated and it has been like 3 or 4 days... U lied D: |
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Hey, here's a really really interesting idea: Don't rush artists, including writers. It's hard to write when you don't feel up to it, when you're busy, et cetera. Writers are NOT word machines that you can punch and prose comes out. We look at our work and critique it. Also, you're not paying for said work, so it's not like you hold a right to ask for it. Just be patient, wait for it to come. If it doesn't come when it was ~*supposed to*~ then you've lost nothing. |
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Sorry for not updating any chapters. I had covered myself in sticky notes and crumpled paper thinking about whats next. Im too drained out. And offended. So, please help? Even the idea jar of mine didnt have a single drop left. What im trying to say is..I never had any ideas for the past days. I know you want youre freaking chapters and updates but this is a writer's life. So, please, deal with it. Its what happens if you got a lot of people liking your stories and wanting for more. Its just, I wanna go back to the past when my stories are not that commented and liked a little bit. So, if you guys cant help me, my only hope is my writer friend (MSGT, she is grade five) who has also drained out of ideas. I got a lot to write, trying to keep up progresses and ideas, ripping up unsatisfactory ideas to me, and even take note of your characters, chapters and what you want. I just dont think im a good writer anymore. Im just a single, overfilled brainhead with a lot to deal with. Dernière modification le 1423967400000 |
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If you can't find inspiration in this story, just dump it. There's no harm in that. I don't want to spam your thread so I'll jut say if you need help, message me privately. Writing is what I do for work and I can give you pointers. |
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Sorry, but i cant think of anything in this story. Please lock T_T |
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;-; NOOOOOOOOo |
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Soory angel..im taking care of more successful fanfictions so... Im really sorry. |
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Dont give up yet this story has great potential! :( |
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_______The Shaman Elements ________The Suffering Years_______ ___________*BOOK ONE*______ Transformice.....The perfect land....until it came. Welcome to The Shaman Elements Series, where a group of mice help return Transformice to what it was before the tsunami. Check out the tabs for the characters, prologue, and first chapter. *PLEASE NOTE: I have gotten permission from the original author, Queenlordess, to continue this story* I do not own anything. Transformice belongs to Atelier 801. THE ELEMENTAL SHAMANS ![]() Name: Veronica Age:26 Bio:One of the Elemental Shamans.She survived from the tsunami but same with the other Shams,she is missing.She is the leader of the Shams,all the other five Shamans are in the same place where they are missing but,Veronica is apart from the other five Shams,and she was in the left corner of Transformice,the coldest corner,no mice know if she is alive,or dead. Personality:Is a good leader,almost like the kindest mouse in Transformice, but is really crazy if you act crazy. Secret:Her powers are rainbow.She is the one casting a huge rainbow all over Transformice,and all the mice wanted to touch it. ![]() Name:Aura Age:26 Bio:The missing shaman of death , hated by everyone in sight for the fact that she is supposed to bring pain and suffering to all surroundings. Aura got caught by the tsunami, wondering if someone would actually bother to search for the most hated shaman. Personality: Sassy, cocky, never sympathizes with anybody, which might seem normal being that she's the shaman of death, can sometimes show glimpses of humor. Secret: She can actually use lost souls to protect and fight for her and she falls easily in love with pure souls. Name: Dex Age:16 Bio: He is the youngest of the shamans and has focused the majority of his shaman powers on building meaning he has built many houses,schools,castles,etc. The reason why that is because he wants everyone to be equal and to start that quest. He has tried to make sure everyone has a home and education. Appearance: A dark brown mouse with light tan messy hair,wears green headphones and a green bandanna,shaman color is light tan. Personality: Outgoing, yet he can also over react at times.If he trusts someone he will stay loyal to them at all costs.When his trust is betrayed, he will go berserk. Secret: He is the shaman of earth, though he doesn't yell it out if someone wants to know, he will tell them about it. With his powers, he can move dirt,stone and even trees every thought he can't grow things. Another secret is that his real name is not Dex but it's Choseki (Cho-zek-ei) but he only tells this to the mice he trusts the most. Name: Aquarius Age: 27 Bio: He is a missing shaman, who ended up alive, but no one knows this and they think he's dead. Personality: He's cool! He flows like the waves! He's awesome. Secret: He has water powers. Aquarius' Appearence SURVIVORS ![]() Name:Violetta Age:29 Bio:She was born at the middle time of Transformice, she was rich but the tsunami damaged her home and cheese,her parents died from the tsunami. Personality:Brave,very intelligent,is engaged with technology, she also wants to sacrifice her life just to save Transformice. Secret:She likes to train bravery by passing deadly obstacles,she is an expert if it comes to using a sword,and she also likes to shoot arrows. ![]() Name: Melody Age: 16 Bio: When she was in high school, she was the most popular girl. She ran most of the parties and dances. Until the tsunami came, she stayed home until she had the urge to fight. Personality: She tends to be sassy, sometimes she acts nothing like a girl at all and stuff like that. Secret: She spends her free time writing fanfics of sappy love pairings while listening to music. Other: She sings really good and is also good at archery. She always plans her outfits for special occasions, and unlike other girls she like playing Pokemon 24-7. When she goes on a adventure, she usually carries a pink backpack full of stuff, such as a 3DS with a Pokemon game in it, A diary and pencil, an IPod, a Pokemon book, a whole box of candy,1 water bottle, a knife and sword with a shiny and sharp blade. ![]() Name: Angel Age: 17 Bio: She trolls people. That's pretty much it. Personality: Trolly and sassy. Secret: She secretly is a spy. Whenever they spot her in her spy costume (all black with a black hankercheif around her mouth), she zooms away at the speed of light. Name: Crystal Age:11 Bio: She was working in a Science Lab when the tsunami Hit. Personality: Shes Near-Craziness, has a Sunny disposition, has a good sense of humor and often tries to cheer up her friends in times of sadness. Appearance: A tan mouse with Black Hair and Pink Streaks of hair. She also has glasses. Secret: She has Amnesia. ![]() Name: Lyla (Lie-luh) Age: 13 Bio: She nearly got killed by the flood, but her parents sent her away when they saw the wave. Both her parents died, and she was devastated when she learned that her parents had drowned. Ever since, she told everyone that her parents went away and she lost them. She's about hopeless, now she has to travel with the others and regain hope! Personality: In the beginning, Lyla is quiet and lonely. However, later on, she is clever, tough, stubborn, and makes a joke every once and a while. Secret: Her parents died, they never went away or got separated from Lyla. CHARACTER SLOTS USED: 4/6 Shaman slots 5/15 Survivor Slots 0/5 Baddie Slots (2 Elemental Shamans, 10 Survivors, and 5 Baddies slots left. Please use sign-up sheet on other spoiler) *By the end of the series, there should be 26 characters total.* *Characters will be introduced over time.* CHARACTER SHEET: Name: Age: Bio: Personality: Secret: Role: Ref: PROLOGUE: BEFORE THE TSUNAMI ![]() ??? POV If the great storm didn't appear, maybe I wouldn't have to worry about Transformice... yet. I mean, we were all having fun in vanilla1, etc. that nobody cared whether something came and destroyed anything. To clear it up for you, yeah, there would be some mice freaking out a bit, yet that wouldn't matter since glitches and all that happened on a daily basis. I'm not sure when, but there has been a rise of 'trolls' that it started to concern most of us. That was until the tsunami came and literally DESTROYED EVERYTHING! It wasn't a pretty picture. To sum it up for you, great waves came, flooded our lands (and rooms), drowning nearby mice (and making our fur soggy, too!)It was an atrocious sight! Shortly after that, triple whammy! All six of our elemental shamans were missing! Talk about bad luck... Thankfully, a somewhat small percentage of us survived. A few thousand or so...? Who knows? I can't really tell who survived and who did not. You tell me... CHAPTER ONE: NOBODY UNDERSTANDS VIOLETTA POV ![]() "Hnnge...augh.." My head felt foggy as I tried to regain my senses. I felt a spare wood panel in my paws, and I rested them on it, I blinked my eyes slowly, gaining conscious. I was laying down on the floor of a broken house... mine. The windows were shattered and the furniture was either broken or strewn on the floor. "W-What happened?" I weakly stood up, leaning against the wall. I ran past the broken glass and over to my room. The door had a gaping hole in the middle. I peeked inside briefly to see clothing strewn and my laptop, smashed. I stepped inside. I glanced at the bed, and saw one small, nimble body laying by the window. I ran over to it, feeling its heartbeat. Silent. I looked outside the cracked window, spotting what seemed to be another broken house. I left the room, and went past the broken rubble. I strayed outside, where I heard a nearby mouse cry out, "Hello? Anybody here?" I ran into the house silently, and by the entrance a shaman was sniffling. I gently tapped her shoulder, and she turned around. ![]() "Don't worry. My name is Violetta. Yours?" "Oh! Uh, Veronica.... Sorry if I look like a coward." Veronica stood up, straightening her shaman feathers. I shrugged, and looked around. "Hey, do you know where we are?" she asked. "Yeah, beside my house. To be more specific, the western part of Transformice." Veronica nodded, and started to examine the broken area. Dernière modification le 1430165100000 |
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Hopefully this will do for a second chapter l _ l' CHAPTER TWO: A BROKEN MESS VERONICA POV I follow Violetta out of the broken house. I drew my rainbow hair to the side, and looked around nervously. She walked over to the street, filled with damaged rubble. "How did this..?" Violetta's mouth opened, and she shook her head. How did what? I picked up a loose stone, and felt it in my paws. I looked up, and saw Violetta climbing the thick, stone wall. "Wait for me!" I yelled as I jumped, and Violetta screeched "Wait! Don't---!" and we both tumbled down. "Uhh.. sorry." I discouragingly looked down at my worn paws. Violetta sighed, and gazed at the broken wall. Ugh, I messed it up... I spawned a balloon that connected to Violetta, and turned away. "...Thanks, I suppose."Violetta turned to me, and motioned for me to join her. I ballooned myself up, a steadied a plank beside Violetta. She shrugged, and I looked around to see what looked like a small mouse. ![]() "I don't think it's alive..." Violetta whispered. "Maybe you could use a revive on it?" Revive? "Um... what's a revive?" I stammered. "...Something you use to revive knocked-out mice." "How do I summon it?" "I don't know." "Well then, I'm stuck between a rock and a hard place." I picked up the mouse, and dragged it around. Violetta watched me, and we went over the stone barrier. Sooner or later, we came across some cannons, rolling away. ![]() "Nah, other than a symbol of what looks like the anvil god." "Anvil God?" "The master of all anvils, it's so powerful that when spawned, no one survives." "So you're saying that the infamous 'anvil god' created this cannon?" Violetta didn't respond. She sighed, and looked at me for a moment. "The anvil god doesn't create anything. It never will, as far as I'm concerned. I think you need a refresher on memory..." There it is, chapter two. Since Veronica was knocked out during the tsunami, I thought it would be a small touch to add that she doesn't know anything about shaman stuff and tales (Such as Anvil/Cannon/Ball/Plank/Box gods, totems, or any of the shaman skills.) The FanFic thread has been really dead for awhile >-> Hopefully this one won't be dead, either. -Ayumiouo |
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Name: Blue Age: 24 Bio: Blue was a small mouse when the Tsunami first came. Her friends were dead, and she was one of the lucky ones. Sadly, she was depressed at the fact that her parents and friends had died, and turned evil. She goes around trying to destroy the good shamans. Personality: Tries her best to act evil, not the sharpest knife in the cabinet, clumsy, and reckless. Secret: She tries to keep it a secret that she has a scar on her left arm. Role: Baddie Ref: (Sorry about having to use sketchtoy) http://sketchtoy.com/65173461 (Her fur is a pale brown, she has a bandage on her left arm, a pumpkin tail thingy..., autumn-colored beanie, and an indigo scarf.) Dernière modification le 1432169880000 |