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[FanFiction] Ballad Of A Cursed Soul
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Chapter 7: The Cure Found

Lillian woke up in a haze, and Akise was relieved. Amaranth and Allie were beside her in her place at the bed, and Mikaro had been sitting next to the bed in a wooden chair that Akise had brought up so Lillian could lay down. "She's awake." Junisci noted, looking relieved himself. When Lillian saw Akise, she sat up. Akise, suddenly curious, played one of Junsci's tracks off of Youtube on his computer. Unlike usual, Lillian didn't react. "Amaranth's singing... And Lillian's reaction..." Amaranth raised an eyebrow at this. "What are you implying?" "I think your singing broke the curse, Amaranth. Normally, Lillian would be in a screeching fangirl fit right now."
Now Amaranth was the curious one. Akise continued. "You did say you studied the supernatural and such. I wouldn't be surprised if your voice, much like Mikaro's, had an enchanting effect. Yours cancels out Junisci's." Allie raised a curious eyebrow, along with Lillian. "We just need Junisci fans to hear Amaranth sing..."
Amaranth backed away. "I'm a little..." Allie suddenly burst laughing. "You're shy?!" Amaranth shuffled his feet and looked away. Akise raised an eyebrow.
This was going to be a problem.

To Be Continued in Chapt. 8: What To Do About Shyness
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need to read next chapter
really badly
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leopardskyz a dit :
need to read next chapter
really badly

Need to write the next chapter
really badly
RIP XD
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Chapter 8: What To Do About Shyness

Akise pondered what to do, but only after slapping Allie and Lillian for being too noisy. "I can't hear myself think!" He'd shouted, and backhanded the two. He felt bad about it, but he had a short temper at the moment and didn't feel like putting up with anything.
Amaranth and Junisci were trying to talk out some kind of plan, but it wasn't doing much good. They kept contradicting eachother and eventually stopped talking.
"Amaranth," Akise began suddenly, and everyone suddenly had their eyes on him. "you said you've performed with Junisci before?"
Amaranth nodded, beginning to get an idea of what Akise was hinting at. "Yes. Do you have an idea?"
Akise grinned. "Oh, do I ever. I have a friend - a singer and pianist - who's well known in the state. Between all of you, we can get a huge crowd to show at the concert stage in Unity - the capital of the state. I'm sure we can get all of Junisci's fans to show because the hall itself is huge, and there are three singers, so your voices will blend, at the least. Does that sound good?"
Amaranth nodded slowly, joining Akise with a slight grin. "It does, actually. So, who is this friend of yours?"
Akise spun around in his chair and began typing rapidly, his clawtips making a soft click clack noise as they hit the keys. Before long, he rolled slightly over to the side and spun around again, his fingers indicating to the laptop screen. On the screen was an image and a short article about a female singer that went by the name of Caribbean Cat. "Her name is Meiko Tetrii. She's well known as a pop singer, but she does classical music, too."
Allie and Lillian smiled, and Junisci looked thoughtful. "I've heard of her." They all said at the same time, and everyone laughed for a short few seconds.
"Three singers, and a huge concert stage. We're going to break this curse tomorrow night." Akise declared with a triumphant grin.

TBC in Chapt. 9: Putting Plans Into Motion
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rip allie
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smartiewolfs a dit :
rip allie

Akise be angry m8
he's like me when I'm mad
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I WUV DISS :D

Anybody have a grave? And popcorn?
I was just scrolling on all these AMAZING chapters.
Nice work, Basgetti!
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bluecrest a dit :
I WUV DISS :D

Anybody have a grave? And popcorn?
I was just scrolling on all these AMAZING chapters.
Nice work, Basgetti!

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it!!! (:D
I write because I hope people will enjoy my stories <3
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Chapter 9: Putting Plans Into Motion

"We ready?" Akise called as he checked on the huge crowd outside, demanding that Mikaro perform. "Yeah." Amaranth called back.
Akise walked out on stage.
"Ladies and Gentleman, Boys and Girls. Welcome to the Greatest Show On Earth!" He thought it sounded dumb and cliche', but the crowd went wild. Behind the curtain, Lillian facepawed, then scurried with Allie off of the stage.
The curtain opened.
Seated around Amaranth's piano were Mikaro and Meiko. Meiko was holding an acoustic guitar, and Mikaro had a microphone.
Amaranth and Meiko began to play. Shortly after they started, they were singing, their voices blending in a harmonial unison. Akise, sitting towards the right of them, smiled and closed his eyes, listening.
As the song came towards its denouement, Mikaro and Meiko nodded towards eachother, and slowly crescendoed out of the song, leaving Amaranth. He sang the last verse, and the song came to a slow end.
The crowd clapped and cheered, then slowly - each and every one - passed out, as the effects of the curse were taken away.
Allie closed the curtain as Akise slipped backstage.
"That was amazing, you three." He cheered, laughing. "You did great."
Everyone laughed, until Allie cut in with something that Akise had skimmed over.
"Yes... But how do we fix Mikaro? Just because we fixed all his fans doesn't mean we fixed him."
Everyone froze.
Time seemed to stretch for an eternity.
"I hadn't..."
"...Thought of that..."
Both Akise and Amaranth facepawed, slamming the palm of their paw against their foreheads.
"One more problem."
"Great."
"I could just stop performing." Mikaro cut in. "Although it's really not preferred. I love music."

TBC In Chapt. 10: The Record Is Cracked
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that was beautiful
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  • Intro
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LONG CHAPTER THIS TIME GUYS
Yes, in case you're wondering, my Add is loosely based off of Add from Elsword.
Chapter 10: The Record Is Cracked

Back in Akise's apartment...
"You don't need to stop. That's silly talk. Even though I'm not cursed anymore, I still think your music is great!" Lillian piped up.
Akise looked at Lillian, who turned to look at Mikaro - who was still donning his mask.
Lillian stared.
"Mika, take off your mask."
"Why might you tell me that, Lillian?"
"Mika, take off your mask." She repeated.
With a sigh, Mikaro lifted his bird-shaped mask from his face. He handed it over to Akise, who gently brushed his paw over the feathers once. Lillian leaned forward from her spot on the bed and brushed Mikaro's bangs from his face, revealing the same crescent-moon symbol she'd seen when she visited him backstage.
"What does that moon mean, Mika?" She queried. Akise, interested, raised an eyebrow. (Well, you know, if mice had eyebrows?)
Mikaro froze.
"The crescent moon.... it's the symbol of the curse."
Allie grunted. "Couldn't you just wash it off, or something?"
"Do you really think I haven't tried that, Allie?"
Allie rolled her eyes and looked away.
"What have you tried to remove it?" Amaranth asked, his smooth voice making the room seem calmer.
"Let's see.. Burning, Washing.. I tried cutting it out once, but it was still there - on my skin. I think it's imprinted on my skull or something."
"I think a ritual would remove it." Amaranth cut in, popping a small cupcake-type pastry in his mouth.
Everyone looked at him. He calmly finished chewing the pastry and swallowed.
"What? Rituals are real, you know. Mikaro of all mice should know that, at least."
Akise walked over to his bookshelf and skimmed over the spines of the tomes that were neatly aligned in rows. Eventually, he picked out a book titled Rituals And Witchcraft. He handed it to Amaranth, who began skimming through the pages. He stopped eventually and began to read aloud.
"Mute Ritual. Note: This ritual does not actually make the subject mute.
"This ritual removes all music-type curses.
"Requirements: Soot or ashes - one pouchful. A vial of blood from the subject. A raven's feather. A patch of the subject's fur. One piece that the subject has written while induced with the curse.
"How to perform:
"1: Draw a treble clef for female, bass clef for male with the soot or ashes.
"2: Carefully trace that line with the subject's blood. Note that the subject themselves must perform these acts.
"3: Make sure that the subject does not use all of his or her blood in step two. Now, place the patch of fur in the center of your designated clef, then place the raven's feather on top.
"4: With the remaining blood - to the best of the subject's ability - draw the designated clef of the demon or demoness that has cursed the subject. Once again, for female: treble clef. For male: bass clef.
"5: Place the piece of music - written on paper - on top of the other ingredients. The subject must then sing the lyrics to said piece.
"6: The demon or demoness that cursed the subject should appear. Do not show fear, for otherwise the demon or demoness will curse all of the present mice with the same or a similar curse to which the subject has undergone.
"7: The subject must tell the demon or demoness that he or she is finished playing his or her games. If the subject does this without fear, the demon or demoness should be paralyzed.
"8: Take the raven's feather from the ritual ingredients. The edge will be sharper than a blade - do not touch it. For if you do, poison will grip your body and you will die. Walk up to the demon or demoness and carve your designated clef into their chest. The demon or demoness shall disappear, and the curse will be lifted."
Amaranth set the book down on a sidetable near him and lifted his gaze to Mikaro's.
"Think you can do that, Mika?" Lillian queried, breaking the silence.
"Yes... I believe so. But we must gather the ingredients.."
Allie rolled her eyes once more and yanked out a patch of Mikaro's fur. He let out a yelp of protest, but she only handed it to Akise without a word.
"I have a friend who can get the raven's feather," Meiko chimed in, "she has three pet ravens."
Akise nodded. "And I have a fireplace downstairs. Well, it's not really mine, but there's a fireplace in an apartment downstairs. The owner of that apartment is really rude, though. I'll try to get by him."
"I have a new song that I wrote in my jacket." Mikaro said, nodding towards where his coat was hanging near the wall.
"That leaves the blood." A dark yet somewhat charming voice suddenly said. Everyone looked towards the direction of the door, which suddenly swung open. A grey-furred mouse with silky silver hair slowly walked in and closed the door behind him. His dark violet eyes seemed to glow eerily in the pale light of the few candles that lit the room. "Who are you?!" Allie snapped, but the silver-haired mouse raised a single claw to his lips and made a sshhh noise. "How long have you been listening to us?" Amaranth queried. The mysterious mouse seemed to like Amaranth's calm attitude, so he replied. "The entire time. Don't fear, my lips are sealed." He made a zipping motion by tracing two claws across his lips, and made another motion as if he were throwing away a key. Now that he was in the weak candlelight, the group could see the white cloak that he donned. It draped slightly over his legs, and the back of it went down to almost halfway down his legs. He was wearing a black and slightly-glowing purple mechanical choker, and white gloves with rubies embedded in diamond-shapes a little higher than the center of them. His dark-violet eyes still seemed to have an eerie glow.
"Who are you?" Allie repeated, her tone calm - although, underneath she was fuming.
"My name is Add. It's a pleasure to meet you all, really."

TBC in Chapt. 11: The Mysterious Psychic Tracer!
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NOTE: I MADE THE PIC IN A TFM FANGAME !
(My Picture button will not work so I will use the link) http://imgur.com/32EOaxN
Name- Kadelynne [Kad-EH-Li-neh]
Gender- Female c:
Age- 15
Personality- Snappy, Rude..... Serious.. RARELY OCCASIOANALLY NICE.
Bio- She was born with something mysterious. When she was 5, her dad was bitten by a vampire and he disappeared the same day. Her mom went mad and commited Suicide a day after that. She wears a bandanna over her eyes for a somewhat unknown reason'; mainly to keep her identity herself.

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Hmm
She might not have that much show, as the story is close to ending, but accepted
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Okay.
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Pic: http://tse1.mm.bing.net/th?id=OIP.M07cc9f219e0c5815866f4c8e1a42245fo0&w=182&h=164&c=7&rs=1&qlt=90&o=4&pid=1.1
Name: Strya
Gender: Female
Age: 14
Personality: stuck up around people she doesn't know but when you know her she can be nice but is still a divia she is always trying to be the center of attintion
Bio: I'm Strya! I'm 14 and love shopping.My parents were away a lot and usaly forgot about me one night I ran away and bacicly lived in shops I earn my money by dancingon the streets I love the attention I get there. I like dancing to classical music the most but others are fine to.I also play the flute I like to decoded my music on my phone so I can play it when I dance. I hope you learned something about me!

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  • Int.
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Haven't written in a while
so here
also, yay for cliffhangers.
The Mysterious Psychic Tracer!

Add's grin ceased to fade as he faced a barrage of questioning from the gathered mice. His voice was smooth, silky, and frightening - though no one dared to admit it.
"Now, to the ritual." Add said. "Gather the materials. I'll take care of getting the blood."
Everyone left the room to gather their designated materials. All except Allie.
"Listen, you weird-ass brute," She snarled. "I'm not going to let you kill off my friend here."
"Did you really think that that was my intention?" Add replied, faking hurtfulness.
"Save the drama for Lillian." She snapped. "How, exactly, are you going to extract a vial of Mikaro's blood?" Allie snapped impatiently.
Add grinned again. "Watch and learn, Allie. Of course, you can't really learn how to do the things I do." He said afterward. Grabbing Mikaro's white-furred arm, he dragged his claw against the skin, making a small incision. Holding up the vial, Add watched as the blood flowed into it. After it was full, he put a cork in the top, and slid it into his pocket. Afterward, he bandaged Mikaro's arm to stop the incision from bleeding more.
Allie's jaw hit the floor, but she quickly regathered herself and stormed off with a "hmph."

~=~Meanwhile, in the apartment downstairs...~=~

"Akise? What the hell do you want?" Akise's neighbor snapped. Sighing apologetically, Akise explained that he only needed about a cup of ashes from the fireplace.
"Ashes? What the hell do you need those for? Some satanic ritual?" Not far from the truth, sadly. Akise thought bluntly. Holding out the measuring cup he'd brought with him, he let out another sigh. "Please, Jackson. I just need a cup of ashes."
Jackson muttered a curse and snatched the cup from his paw. Stomping over to the fireplace, he scooped up a pile of black, coal-filled ashes and dropped them into the cup. He handed it back to Akise and grunted, "Get out of here, you teenage rat."
Akise muttered a "Thank you," and went back to his own apartment.

~=~Meanwhile, at Crow's Mansion...~=~

"Crow~?" Meiko chimed as she entered the mansion's doorway.
"Meiko? It's been a while. What brings you? Your eyes give away your concern."
The idol frowned slightly. "I need a raven's feather. Preferably a large one."
Crow seemed to ponder for a bit, then raced into the kitchen. Opening a drawer that was revealed to be stuffed with raven's feathers, he picked up a rather long, bushy one and raced back to the doorway. "Found one~" He chimed as he handed it to Meiko.
"Thanks, Crow. You're a lifesaver." Literally.
Crow nodded as Meiko left the mansion to head back towards Akise's apartment.

~=~Meanwhile, Finally back in Akise's apartment...~=~

"Everyone here? Ingredients?"
Akise held up the cup of ashes. Meiko grinned as she stroked the smaller feathers on the raven's feather. Add held up the vial of Mikaro's blood, and Amaranth - who'd returned from God knows where - was holding the patch of Mikaro's fur. Mikaro himself was holding a piece titled "Songwriter's Lament".
"Then, it's time to get this ritual underway?"

TBC in Chapt. 12 - Mute Ritual
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god, all the "meanwhile"s
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leopardskyz a dit :
god, all the "meanwhile"s

YEAH
TOO LAZY TO DO ANYTHING ELSE
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*Reads a billiontimes* Dang, no showing up÷
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backupjulian a dit :
*Reads a billiontimes* Dang, no showing up÷

There was really no room in that chapter. If you continue to complain, I might not put you in there at all. Please be patient.
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