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[Fanfic] The Rise of The Dead Shaman
Riiazu
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And i freakin' figured out how to post images! Yussssssssssss!
Ref of my character: http://i.imgur.com/melkSZH.png
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Ref:on my tablet I will later
Name: Jillain likes to be called jill
Age: 11
Gender: female
Personality: brave childish outgoing athletic prankster
Likes: gym, cheesey mints, pranking people
Dislikes: staying in one place, being bossed arounr
Shaman or Normal Mouse: normal mouse
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I can't was for Mango to show up,something like this: A strange orange mouse appeared from the shadows and coughed a few times
THAT WOULD BE AMAZING
Yes,she has a weird kind of sickness (i just came up with that),she just start coughing sometimes,and if it happens,it can last for a long time. Then it slowly fades away.. YES. IKR. I'M WEIRD

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~CHAPTER THREE~
When he Arises



Back at the cave, it was seemingly silent.
Then, someone was crawling out of the lava.
Surprisingly, it was Antonio.

"Finally, back from the dead!" Antonio exclaimed.

His body was half rotten, and his skeleton was seen.
He flew away from the cave and planned to terrorize Transformice.

Meanwhile, in the Shamans Castle....

"Zoey! Zoeeeeyy!" Paulo called Zoey.
"What?! Im trying to make a Canon Fortress!" Zoey shouted back, frustrated.
"Look at this note!!!" He exclaimed, pointing at the note.

Zoey started reading the note.
After that, she frowned.

"This must be something from Antonio. This handwriting perfectly matches his." Zoey said.
"What? But... how?" Paulo asked, extremely shocked.
"I dont know! Im not some fortune teller who has a Crystal Ball and stalking Antonio using it!" Zoey fumed.
"Oops. My bad." Paulo said, grinning.
"Its not funny!!!!" Zoey shouted.

Then, Violet and the other two mice popped in.

"Whats with all the commotion here?" Violet asked.
"I just asked Zoey how she knew Antonio wrote the note and suddenly blasted off like a ROCKET SHIP!" Paulo exclaimed.

Then, Zoey slapped Paulo.

"What?!" He asked in mock frustration.
"Im not a rocket ship, dude! Im a Shaman!!!!" Zoey shouted and totally lost it.
"It's just a metaphor!" He said, rolling his eyes.
"Guys, stop fighting. Were nearly deaf!" Pharah said, trying to calm down Paulo and The Rocket Ship err...Zoey.
"Alright, alright. So whats with that paper thing your holding?" Arianne asked, changing the topic.
"Ummm... a note from Antonio?" Paulo muttered.

This subject got everyone fired up.

"Ok, what kind of note?" Violet asked, looking at the cursive handwriting which she barely understands.
"Um....a Threat Note? Like the one warning you a deal or you will be cursed or something?" Pharah answered, looking at the note.
"But how did Antonio wrote this when he's dead?" Arianne asked.
"Thats what I asked Zoey the Rocket Ship!" Paulo said, adding the previous conversation.
"Here we go again...." Pharah said, face palming herself.
"If I was the Rocket Ship, then you'll be the Gummy Bear Fan crushing on Pharah!!!" Zoey shot back.

Everybody became silent.
After a few minutes, they heard shouts.

"Hey...whats going on outside?" Arianne asked.
"I dont know. But we have to check it out." Violet said, putting on her Shaman feather headress and tail item.
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LOL!
I dont know why, but this chapter was HILLARIOUS!

My Favorite Parts:

"I dont know! Im not some fortune teller who has a Crystal Ball and stalking Antonio using it!" Zoey fumed.
"Oops. My bad." Paulo said, grinning.
"Its not funny!!!!" Zoey shouted.

"Whats with all the commotion here?" Violet asked.
"I just asked Zoey how she knew Antonio wrote the note and suddenly blasted off like a ROCKET SHIP!" Paulo exclaimed.

"What?!" He asked in mock frustration.
"Im not a rocket ship, dude! Im a Shaman!!!!" Zoey shouted and totally lost it.
"It's just a metaphor!" He said, rolling his eyes.
"Guys, stop fighting. Were nearly deaf!" Pharah said, trying to calm down Paulo and The Rocket Ship err...Zoey.

"Ok, what kind of note?" Violet asked, looking at the cursive handwriting which she barely understands.
"Um....a Threat Note? Like the one warning you a deal or you will be cursed or something?" Pharah answered, looking at the note.
"But how did Antonio wrote this when he's dead?" Arianne asked.
"Thats what I asked Zoey the Rocket Ship!" Paulo said, adding the previous conversation.
"Here we go again...." Pharah said, face palming herself.
"If I was the Rocket Ship, then you'll be the Gummy Bear Fan crushing on Pharah!!!" Zoey shot back.

#PaurahFTW
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Ermm... Haven't you forgot about Mango?
Yes. I CAN'T FREAKIN WAIT FOR HER

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Loved that chapter! xD
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~CHAPTER FOUR~
Bad, bad Shaman



The little group went outside and saw Antonio, terrorizing the whole Transformice EN server.

"Oh no!!! The EN server!!!!" Violet screamed.
"Come on, lets lead everyone to the forest, he wont find us there!" Zoey said, running towards big group of mice that were fleeing in terror.

Zoey and the other Shamans did a headcount to see if anybody is missing.

"Violet! One of them is missing!" Zoey exclaimed.
"What?! Come on, lets find that mouse!" Violet said, holding Zoey's paw and went finding the mouse in every tree they saw.

They looked in every tree they saw.
Finally, a strange orange mouse was hiding behind the tree, terrified of what Antonio might do to her.

"Hello, what's your name?" Zoey asked.
"My name is Mango. And I was separated from my family. I didnt know what to do, so I hid behind this tree." she said and coughed a few times.
"Lets go! You might die from this!" Violet said and ran to the forests.

Everyone was at the forest except for Pharah, who was trying to reason with Antonio.

"Please, master! Dont harm them! They didnt do anything!" Pharah pleaded.
"And why should I care?!" Antonio said and spawned a huge box over Pharah.
"No!" Paulo screamed.
"Ill go save her before I get jailed in his triangular wood trap." Zoey said, running towards the box and Pharah.

Zoey pulled Pharah and ran back into the forest.

"Is everybody here?" Zoey asked, resting Pharah on the grass ground.
"They are, I guess." Arianne said.
"Okay, lets find the nearest server." Paulo said.
"I know! The EN 2 server!" Violet exclaimed.
"Then it's settled. Now follow me!" Zoey said.
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Hey guys!
Great news!

Since im on a 10 day trip to Qatar, I can update this everyday starting NOW! :D
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OMFG! So awesome! And like how you made Mango acting same as i would irl if that happened..
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Yay! Looking forward to more chapters :)
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~CHAPTER FIVE~
New Friends, New Enemies?



Every mice ran into the EN 2 server.
Then, they warned every mice about Antonio back from the dead and his plans to terrorize every server that existed.

"Everyone to your shelters!" Zoey shouted.
"But, how about us?" Arianne asked.
"In here guys!" A female mouse shouted from inside her utility house.

Paulo was the first to enter.
After opening the door, a bucket of water was dumped on him.

"Hahahahaha! Pranked!" the female mouse bursted out laughing.
"Hey! What was that for?!" Paulo asked, obviously angry.
"What? Its just a harmless little prank!" Violet said, laughing too.
"Alright, whats your name?" Zoey asked.
"Im Jillain, but call me Jill." the female mouse said. "Wanna meet my friends?" she said, winking.
"Oh no. I know that little wink over there." Paulo said, backing off.
"Whatever. Come on guys, lets go to the kitchen." Jill said.

They went to the kitchen.

"Hey." A girl with pink hair said, eating some french cheese.
"That is Rose. She sometimes become evil, so dont go near her a lot." Jill warned.
"Okay. So can we eat already?" Violet asked.
"Go on." Jill said.
"Hey Jill,can I go in my room for a second?" Rose asked.
"Yeah." Jill said.

Rose went in her room where Pharah was resting.
Then, she pushed her out of the bed.
Pharah was awoken but stayed silent.

"Antonio!" she shouted. But her room was locked, so nobody can hear it outside.
"What?" he said, flying in her room and crashed on the floor.
"Your targets are successfully manipulated. They were more gullible than I thought!" Rose said.
"Well done. First i'll take over them, this server and then the whole Transformice!" he said, cackling.
"Hahaha! Best plan ever." Rose said. "Now go!"

Rose thought Pharah was asleep, but she heard the whole thing.
Then, she woke up.

"You!" Rose pointed at Pharah.
"What me?" Pharah asked, pretending that she didnt hear the conversation.
"Did you hear anything when you were asleep?!" Rose asked.
"No..." Pharah muttered.

Rose sighed in relief.
Then, she went outside with Pharah.
Pharah quickly went to the little group.

"Guys, I need to squeak with you. In private." Pharah said.
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Anybody suspecting anything?
What was Pharah thinking of?
Find out in the next chapter!
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moaaar xd
and obviously rose is gonna betray every1
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So uhm
what uhhhHHh
happened to the other mice? (like mine for example...)
ANYWAYS
You're doing a GREAT job on this!
I'm really happy for you :D
(I'm scared that Luna's cats is gonna like, kill everyone . . . OMG
WHAT IF SHE WAS WORKING WITH ANTONIO AND ROSE WITH HER CATS? :O
bwehehehehe)

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~CHAPTER SIX~
An Unexpected Comeback



The little group left Jill's house but Rose went in stalker mode and followed them everywhere.
They went behind a bush to talk.

"Guys, so I found out something..." Pharah said, mystifying.
"What?" Violet asked.
"I just recently heard Rose talk to Antonio." Pharah replied.
"What?!" Paulo exclaimed.
"So she's working with him?!" Arianne exclaimed.
"Shh! Pipe down, blabbermouse!" Pharah whispered, frustrated.
"So, what did they talk about?" Zoey asked.
"Their plans to ruin us, this server and the whole Transformice!!!" Pharah exclaimed.
"Oh no, we have to save-" Paulo said, but didnt finish his sentence.
"Very clever, young mice!" A voice squeaked out.

Antonio, Rose, Luna and her two cats were watching them.

"Luna?!!" Arianne exclaimed in surprise.
"I cant believe you managed to find out our plan!" Rose said, cackling.
"Slasher! Swinger! Attack!" Luna ordered.

The two cats grabbed the mice by paw.

"OMG! I dont wanna dieee!!" Arianne screamed in a high-pitched voice.
"Just shut up!" Zoey demanded.

The cats were about to eat them until...

"NO YOU FISHBRAINS DONT EAT THEM! IMPRISON THEM!" Luna shouted and whipped her cats for the first time.
"Oh no." Paulo said.

The cats also grabbed Luna and imprisoned her too, along with the others.
Then, all of them was dazed and fainted.

"Now, bring them to the cave!" Antonio ordered and brainwashed the poor cats.
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Yas!
A cliffhanger! Woot!

Credits to Eeveewings for the idea! :)

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dat cliffhanger doe 0.0
Luna betrayed them! ;o
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You have until December to submit your characters!
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Iz need to create shaman o3o

Ref : http://i.imgur.com/zVHYL68.png (It looked like Mango tbh o3o, like the tail item and the lenneth's helmet)
Name : Tanzanite
Age : 30
Gender : Female
Personality : Peaceful, Caring, Charming.
Likes : Musics (mostly classical), Quiet places (main point to study musics), violins.
Dislikes : Musics (mostly modern musics like pop musics, rapping musics, etc.), Loud places, modern instruments (like drums, bass, etc.).
Shaman or Normal Mouse : Shaman

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omg ;o
poor luna doe
and her CATS
but i got credits ;o

Edit: i'm literally dying from being overwhelmed UGH

Edit 2: Is it okay to add another character? ouo

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what if they found a nice form of rose when they were imprisoned? ;o;
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DUNDUNDUN

i can image luna crying in the corner screaming in her head "MY POOR FUCKING CATS"
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oh look!
A nice comic and 40th place
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