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Magickitten
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oceanpawgal a dit :
Omg America is just as I thought she would be gi cant wait for more

Thanks! =u=
I think that having Mer magically gone and etc can make the chapter
funny, and at same time have others freak out for worry as heck xD
And it also fits her, considering how she doesnt understand and focus on
something else instead. xD
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http://imgur.com/IAMyBHt.png
Alright,here's my ref.
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Csonewforyou a dit :
http://imgur.com/IAMyBHt.png
Alright,here's my ref.

Mkay.
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omg.
writer block is taking over me
i -
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i must think of something to inspire me..
the boredom is key.. /glares/
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Omg I had writers block one time when I had to get a story for school done this may not help but I sing when I have writers block it helps clear my head
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oceanpawgal a dit :
Omg I had writers block one time when I had to get a story for school done this may not help but I sing when I have writers block it helps clear my head

Well, singing is not my thing so .. uhh.. hmm
Maybe the portal could lead to another event?
The portal that led to event room will stay for atleast one day,
since events are special, which the portal would disappear and
appear again each end of week.
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I love the idea of this fanfic! http://i.imgur.com/7TTSk.png
Ref : http://i.imgur.com/bE2s1JW.png
Real Name : Okaru Xawyer I did it again..
Username : WhiteFur
Gender : Male
Age : 18
Class : Warrior
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal mouse
Dislike : Loud noises, Mice who push him aside, Bitter food, Dry throat
Like : Playing around with others' feelings, Music
Hate : Being cornered, Injuries, Mice who troll him
Love : Fights, Power, Gaming, Skiing
Personality : Nice to others,but can snap necks,if mad. Pretty quiet sometimes,mainly when injured or sick
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--Very,VERY cautious,but then after some time,pretty good friend
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
--He will be 'growling' at the mouse,not talking to it much.
Weapon (1/2) : Crystal sword (making ref for it)
Extras : His skin and fur are different,because they make injuries even more painful that they are.

He's not supposed to look like Sans from Undertale. It's my personal ref,that i play with,so please.
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bublamorce a dit :
I love the idea of this fanfic! http://i.imgur.com/7TTSk.png
Ref : http://i.imgur.com/bE2s1JW.png
Real Name : Okaru Xawyer I did it again..
Username : WhiteFur
Gender : Male
Age : 18
Class : Warrior
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal mouse
Dislike : Loud noises, Mice who push him aside, Bitter food, Dry throat
Like : Playing around with others' feelings, Music
Hate : Being cornered, Injuries, Mice who troll him
Love : Fights, Power, Gaming, Skiing
Personality : Nice to others,but can snap necks,if mad. Pretty quiet sometimes,mainly when injured or sick
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--Very,VERY cautious,but then after some time,pretty good friend
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
--He will be 'growling' at the mouse,not talking to it much.
Weapon (1/2) : Crystal sword (making ref for it)
Extras : His skin and fur are different,because they make injuries even more painful that they are.

He's not supposed to look like Sans from Undertale. It's my personal ref,that i play with,so please.

Accepted. ^^
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Magickitten a dit :
bublamorce a dit :
I love the idea of this fanfic! http://i.imgur.com/7TTSk.png
Ref : http://i.imgur.com/bE2s1JW.png
Real Name : Okaru Xawyer I did it again..
Username : WhiteFur
Gender : Male
Age : 18
Class : Warrior
( NORMAL / SHAMAN )Form : Normal mouse
Dislike : Loud noises, Mice who push him aside, Bitter food, Dry throat
Like : Playing around with others' feelings, Music
Hate : Being cornered, Injuries, Mice who troll him
Love : Fights, Power, Gaming, Skiing
Personality : Nice to others,but can snap necks,if mad. Pretty quiet sometimes,mainly when injured or sick
When mouse get to know 'it', what would 'it's' personality be like ? (like, cautious but after month or days, trusting them and always joke now)
--Very,VERY cautious,but then after some time,pretty good friend
When mouse just met 'it', how would it react like?
--He will be 'growling' at the mouse,not talking to it much.
Weapon (1/2) : Crystal sword (making ref for it)
Extras : His skin and fur are different,because they make injuries even more painful that they are.

He's not supposed to look like Sans from Undertale. It's my personal ref,that i play with,so please.

Accepted. ^^

Thanks!
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  • yoy
  • Chapter 5
YAY
FINALLY
FUVKING YES--
ALSO
IDK WTF IS ROPE-SWORD SO
I DECIDED TO MAKE UP THE SWORD ;~;
OH AND U BOTH APPEARED IN DE CHAPTER NOW

` Fishies! Not a green big fat banana creature! `


It had took lot of minutes for the two mouse to find Mer, and they both didnt appreciate it because they both were covered in bruises and small leaves. As Aka was patting himself away, he said. ` Mer, you should stop having that habit of going everywhere like a ghost.. ` Mer moved her ears slightly down, as she didnt mean it. ` Sorry. ` He replied. ` Oh well, it's okay now. So, what is your name? ` Lou flicked her ears. ` It's Loujain. Call me Lou for short. ` She chuckled as she gently shuffled her paws, which Aka stared for few second before turning his head to the sun now reaching the ground. ` Anyway, let's go before the portal disappears. ` After that, three of them had went to the portal entering inside. At somewhere now far away, a portal had appeared which three mouse went landing onto something as liquid which splashed away from the impact of feet landing. ` Water? ` Aka looked at the water slightly lifting his feet, which he looked around the lake. Lou chuckled happily as she then began bouncing around, splashing everywhere including on Aka and Mer. ` Hey- h- ` Aka said trying to continue, until lot of water splashed into his face. ` Ah, it's ON. ` He chuckled as he shook his head, whilst he padded away as he took the bandana, drying it which lot of liquid fell down to the sand. Mer and Lou was splashing happily for fun, which Aka watched. ` If i meet a female mouse again, i swear i am going to leave before i am filled with female mice booty everywhere. ` He said to himself quietly as the whisper, which he shook his head, rubbing his hair as he looked down. He saw the moving yet smaller shadow underwater, which he perked his ears. ` Hey, guys! We could catch some of fishes! ` He called out to the two female mice that had their attention to his shout now. ` Alright. ` Mer chirked as she looked around whilst lashing her tail. Lou, somewhat, flipped the fish out by whipping her tail. Ah, that's right, reading mind.. Aka thought. He then tried to catch some of fishes, which he failed because he had tripped onto the water, countless times. Mer squeaked as a fish jumped outside, which she began to catch it but the tail had btch-slapped onto her nose, causing her to drop because it had her nose slapped a few times. ` Owie. ` Lou had few of bigger fishes, which she yelped as she whipped another fish out. ` Aha! `

Aka had a difficult time trying to catch, which he kicked the water splashing it in frustration. ` Welp.. ` He murmured under his breath, whilst he moved to the sand. After shaking himself a lot, he sat and watched two of female mouse. Lou was now bored as she placed her paw to her forehead. ` Oh, i'm so boreeed. ` She said dramatically trying to be funny, until she realised the fact, Mer wasn't paying attention at all. Lou sighed in boredom. As Lou moved to the spot with Aka, she shook herself letting some of droplet land onto Aka. ` Hey! ` Aka didnt like that. ` Sorry. ` Lou said with a smug smile. OH, HOW she pisses me off. Aka thought, which Lou heard that but didn't say so. Aka was beginning to get bored so Lou and him had talked for few minutes. Mer was still playing with the water this time not trying to catch some fishes. ` Oh, when was the last time i get to play with the water? ` Mer chuckled as she began splashing some water. However, a big shadow began moving toward the female mouse. Aka looked around whilst Lou was explaining, until he widened his hidden eyes as he began to notice what was it, which Lou looked as well of curiosity until she saw the shadow. They both exchanged the look into surprise and shock. The shadow was beginning to get faster and faster, as well greenish hue growing now, which something came out of the water behind the happy Mer playing, which made the shadow appear above her. After that, Mer blinked before she turned her head slowly, only to see a big mouth with lot of yellow teethes stretching as if about to snap now. Aka and Lou yelled.

`` MMMEEERRR WATCH OUT! ``



Until something shined in the sky, which something as made of steel material suddenly thrust toward out of nowhere, making a contact with the green scales - which was at the forehead which the crocodile hissed loudly in pain, splashing lot of water which Mer yelled whilst stepping backward quickly, and ran toward her two friends. Two mice landed onto the crocodile's head, leaving a impact which the crocodile's head began to hit the water, splashing again. The blood was coming out under the thing, which the grey mouse pulled out making the crocodile screech again. Both of the mice quickly jumped out before the crocodile quickly spinned, whipping its tail hitting the tree, making a slight quake. As both of the saviours had landed onto the sand, Aka did take a good look. The grey mouse had a funny outfit which looked like a chicken that wanted to be like 'swag' and had a sword which was bigger as black-colored, with long chain used as like-rope at bottom of the sword. The white mouse had a hoodie on, with the crystal sword on his back. ` Jerry, what should we do? ` The white mouse began asking. ` It's obvious, duh. Kill it. ` Jerry said which the white mouse rolled his eyes. ` Exactly how? Without a plan? ` Both of them began to argue aggressively about ` we should make a freaking plan ` and ` im a commander so dont talk back ` etc like a father and son until a roar interrupted them. The crocodile was now angry. ` Great, you started it! ` Okaru yelled in annoyance, which Jerry flinged his paws around. ` Yes, i am so scared, please, have a mercy on me! Now let's go and circle, and do whatever we should do to kill. ` He hissed. Both of them began circling around the crocodile in annoyance, they both didnt care anymore about the plan now. The crocodile's gaze began to move around in confusion.

As Jerry stopped whilst splashing, he then grasped the chain tightly before he spinned the sword as the chain began to make crackling sounds whilst stretching out, he stopped which the sword thrust toward the crocodile's throat, the chain now rolling around the neck over and over which Jerry began running under the crocodile's neck, whilst the crocodile screeched loudly, angrier than earlier. To Okaru's turn now, he then crouched and jumped onto the crocodile's head, now landing onto the forehead. He began spinning the glowing, blue-colored sword which he then thrust it toward the green scales, sinking inside instantly which the crocodile screeched, a lot pain overwhelming as the head turned away, which Jerry then hovered above with the chain now going back to the sword. As Jerry went to the mid air like a rocket after the chain returned to the sword, he then landed onto the crocodile quickly sinking the sword again inside. Jerry and Okaru had pulled the two sword out quickly, and then jumped from each other away placing their sword in the cheek, falling down whilst the sword slid down leaving lot of blood. The crocodile cried out in pain leaving a loud screech, and began limping away, more like running away. Jerry and Okaru was now panting as exhausted. ` Hey, that was a nice move. ` Okaru said. ` You too. ` Jerry replied. Three of the mice had their jaw dropped to the ground.


Riiazu
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Omg,amazing!
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bublamorce a dit :
Omg,amazing!

awww, you shtface, no, i'm not amazing at writing as well the fight scenes :'3
pls no, i do not want to be flattered ;'3 oh stop it
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Got me smiling loved it I don't know at what point I started smiling but cant wait for more your awesome a fight parts
Riiazu
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Magickitten a dit :
bublamorce a dit :
Omg,amazing!

awww, you shtface, no, i'm not amazing at writing as well the fight scenes :'3
pls no, i do not want to be flattered ;'3 oh stop it

I. JUST. LOVE. THIS.
STOP. DISLIKING. YOURSELF.
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oceanpawgal a dit :
Got me smiling loved it I don't know at what point I started smiling but cant wait for more your awesome a fight parts

thanks
bublamorce a dit :
Magickitten a dit :
bublamorce a dit :
Omg,amazing!

awww, you shtface, no, i'm not amazing at writing as well the fight scenes :'3
pls no, i do not want to be flattered ;'3 oh stop it

I. JUST. LOVE. THIS.
STOP. DISLIKING. YOURSELF.

I AM JOKING
HAVE MERCY ON ME
xDD
Csonewforyou
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One word : Cool.
Magickitten
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Csonewforyou a dit :
One word : Cool.

danks =v=

jesus, i finally cured the writer block
yay chopchopchop btches
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Magickitten a dit :
Csonewforyou a dit :
One word : Cool.

danks =v=

jesus, i finally cured the writer block
yay chopchopchop btches

you big slacker where's chapter 6
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  • ay
  • Chapter 6
smartiewolfs a dit :
Magickitten a dit :
Csonewforyou a dit :
One word : Cool.

danks =v=

jesus, i finally cured the writer block
yay chopchopchop btches

you big slacker where's chapter 6

ay
you lil shtface
i have lot of things to do m8
have a respect for the elder !

` Talkie talkieeee `


As the little group left the room and went to the bar again, this time it was sunset. When they had found a seat to sit with each other, lot of mice were staring. They don't see a Commander here usually. Okaru coughed as he said. ` Uh, like you heard before, i'm Okaru. Whitefur. And he's-- ` Jerry chirked as he poked in. ` Jerry~ Jerry Henson. ` Aka tilted his head slightly as he asked. ` So.. you love chickens judging by 'Hens' right? I mean, your outfit and your name.. ` Okaru was holding his laughter in, which Jerry replied. ` Uh.. I am sorry, but i- Well, don't even ask me about that as it was difficult to answer, anyway. ` Lou asked. ` So.. how did you find us? ` Okaru replied the answer. ` Well, we both had to go out for fishing, and then we placed the ball, ball module, over here. Though we both had forgot our weapon, so we both went away. As we came back, we had saw you three entering inside. ` Jerry said as he crossed his arms. ` Just so you know, it's dangerous. I mean, who would enter in a ball module out of nowhere? ` Aka and Lou looked at each other before they looked at Mer between them both, and both of them pointed at her suddenly. ` Huh? ` Mer tilted her head. Aka sighed. ` Listen, normally i don't go after mice, and you should stay and stick closer to us. ` Aka noticed .. Mer wasnt listening. She did a 'pppffff' as she was spinning herself with the chair. ` That's it. ` Aka sighed as he placed his both paw to his face, grunting in annoyance loudly. ` Anyway, it's getting dark, so i should be going. ` Lou said as she got off the chair, along with Aka who jumped as well. ` Same. I'll need to find a place somewhere to sleep. ` Jerry replied as he watched. ` Oi, you forgot something that is happening. ` Aka turned his head just to catch a folded newspaper. ` Huh? ` Okaru replied. ` Like he said, there is something happening there. You should read to be aware and like that. ` Hmmm.. I'm now curious to see what happened.. Aka thought. ` Wait, guys. ` Mer said with slight worry in her voice. ` I don't understand or whatever, but .. can we return here again? Next morning? ` All of the mice looked at each other. ` Sure, why not. ` Lou replied with a smile. Mer returned the smile back. Next morning after everyone went someplace, they had returned in the same bar again. ` Oi, you look messy. But it's okay, be cool with it. ` Okaru said to Jerry which had his fur messed up due to running from late. ` Haha, funny, thank you. ` He said. Aka replied. ` It was nice to meet you guys. ` Jerry said. ` Same to you. ` Lou chirked as she raised her paw. ` Oi oi! This tribe seems perfect! ` All of them turned to Lou with a confused look on their expression. ` What? I'm just saying that we would make a perfect, funny tribe. ` She shrugged, before crossing her arms.



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