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Soumission de cartes  Troll Map Submissions 3.0 |
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Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797096 (original 0, vanilla) Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797106 (original 2, vanilla) Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797124 (original 4, vanilla) Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797132 (original 19, vanilla) Newen#6196 - @7718570 (original 1, vanilla) Newen#6196 - @7723923 (original 70, no-shaman vanilla) Newen#6196 - @7724956 (original @229835, racing) Newen#6196 - @7740242 (original @5390698, misc) Dextech#0000 - @3765697 (original 69, vanilla) Stovedove#0000 - @7797162 (original 99, vanilla) Portwave#8221 - @7797213 (original @423672, racing) Jasseh#0000 - @7797254 (original @4045880, survivor)
B0wl#7075 - @5867974 - Badly masked fake cheese & with certain shaman actions fake cheeses spaz out and go where they aren't supposed to be. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797119 - Inaccurate copy: the wooden block seems to be too short. Newen#6196 - @7726397 - Incorrect copy: the background differs and the lavas are replaced with acid. Portwave#8221 - @7793399 - Doesn't resemble the original at all, and because of the scale no elements but the leftmost one can be seen without fullscreen. Jasseh#0000 - @7797257 - What's supposed to be the troll factor here? If I wasn't provided with the original, I would think this is it. |
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| This review was written by Trexexjc.
B0wl#7075 - @5202109 (original @335507, racing) B0wl#7075 - @5202605 (original @255098, racing) B0wl#7075 - @5202860 (original @371078, racing) B0wl#7075 - @5211570 (original @153201, no shaman)
Newen#6196 - @7778219 - The troll factor present on the map is alright, but the missing cheese at the start of the round might cause confusion since they don’t know where to go. I would suggest making the cheese visible to solve this problem. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797119 - The overall idea of the map is alright, but it comes with a flaw: The dynamic ground has some weird movement that exposes the whole troll map at the beginning of the round, making the troll factor predictable. I would suggest editing that so that it doesn’t move in a weird way at the beginning. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797419 - The troll idea present in the map is alright, but it has a major flaw, this is, being an inaccurate copy. If you take a closer look at the bottom part of the map, you can see the decorations are slightly off and some are even reversed when compared to the original. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797568 - The idea is alright, I quite like it, but you will need to make a couple of adjustments. If you look closely the rotation of the grounds is slightly off when compared to the original. Furthermore, the grounds set to be foreground, which is an easy giveaway to recognize the troll map. Obsyt#0000 - @7799259 - The idea is just fantastic, I love the face, but it has one small issue. The map is slightly different when compared to the original. If you take a closer look at the upper part of the grounds, it’s slightly lower. I would love it if you fixed that small issue.
Newen#6196 - @7768895 - This map contains a lot of dynamic objects that can bounce around with lava, which is not allowed since it can be quite demanding on the server. I would suggest not doing these types of maps in the future. Newen#6196 - @7778966 - Although the map contains a troll factor, just a simple change in the wind is too basic. I would suggest, for future reference, to change a bit more stuff since it makes the gameplay more enjoyable. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797394 - The overall map seems quite generic and boring. The only real troll factor is a changed ground, which is not really that exciting. On the flipside, the troll face is quite nice, I would add that into future maps. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797405 - The flipping ground alright, but the map contains a couple of flaws. Firstly, the map is not well copied, since the trees are facing different directions and the foreground of the trees makes it even easier to spot. Secondly, I won’t mess personally with bomb maps, since they don’t have an exact representation and are quite hard. B0wl#7075 - @5206062 - The overall troll factor of the map is great, but it comes with some fatal flaws. The map can be easily recognized at the start of the map, since the fake cheese really stands out. Apart from that, the cheese that falls off the sky is missing the sides, which makes it look ugly. Furthermore, the collision of the big cheese is totally off. On the flipside, we will be perming this map since it’s quite funny and can probably be used for other things. A note from the reviewers We noticed a large influx of generic submissions this session. Your maps should be more original than simply having a different gravity and leaving it at it. |
Trexexjc  « Citoyen »
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Urook#1131 - @7265052 (original @1490438, racing) Urook#1131 - @7342654 (original @159204, no shaman) Urook#1131 - @7343273 (original @159204, no shaman) Urook#1131 - @7344547 (original 77, vanilla) Urook#1131 - @7324135 (original 39, vanilla)
Newen#6196 - @7798253: Although we accepted “no jump” troll maps in the past, this map isn’t really fitted to use that mechanism since mice can’t even move up from the starting ground. I would try using different troll concepts. Newen#6196 - @7798254: The overall concept of the map is quite boring, blocking the top grounds is not enough for it to be considered as a troll map. I would suggest being more creative with the ideas. Meli#4973 - @7803383: Even though the map contains a troll factor, it’s quite simple and doesn’t really require any real effort in making it. I would suggest trying to make something a little bit more creative. Meli#4973 - @7803385: Once again, the map does contain a troll factor, but it’s too easy to replicate and quite boring. Meli#4973 - @7803427: The submitted map does not perfectly match with the original map. I advise you to use the XMLs from Aewing's thread linked in the OP. Xxthomatexx#0000 - @7803747: Even tho the idea is simply great, that concept has been done before in that map. If you check “The Wholy Document of Troll Maps” linked in the OP, you can see that the idea has been done before (@6498981) as it uses the same concept. Xxthomatexx#0000 - @7803752: The submitted map does not match with the original map. I advise you to use the XMLs from Aewing's thread linked in the OP. Apart from that, the whole concept of the troll maps is for it to be a surprise, if the grounds disappear before the mice can even touch them (in this case at the start of the map), and it ruins the surprise factor. I would take that suggestion for future reference. Xxthomatexx#0000 - @7803758: The submitted map does not match with the original map. I advise you to use the XMLs from Aewing's thread linked in the OP. (Grounds are slightly off). The idea could be better and more creative. The anvils are completely visible since you didn’t hide them, making the troll map obvious to every player and ruining the whole point of the troll map in the first place. Hackdesamba#0000 - @7806539: Even tho the whole concept of the map is alright, there are a couple of maps that use the same concept in this map. I would suggest looking at “The Wholy Document of Troll Maps” linked in the OP before creating a concept, to make sure it’s unique. Hackdesamba#0000 - @7807120: Even tho the bomb idea is pretty nice and unique, I wouldn’t suggest tinkering with bomb maps, as the mechanism can easily give it away. Apart from that, the submitted map does not match the original map. I advise you to use the XMLs from Aewing's thread linked in the OP. |