Diesarie a dit :

I don't really like the mices and the color...
Same for that..

You are using a lot of textures, this usually makes the drawing better but.. This is too MUCH ! :(
And.. the mouse is not .. not.. I don't know what to say, I'm not english xD (I'm french, teehee ~)
The anatomy seems not riiiiiiiiiiiiiight ! The feet seems... gigantic !

Good luck ! ~

That's rude. It's her style..

Fierying a dit :

#Towerdefense is back!

I love the shaman

Mouldychesse a dit :

AK-47

DELL

"LOL"

CODAGE

I found these hidden words in your piece of art.
LOL was easy.

Fierying a dit :

eee they arent hidden, is just little details :I
AK-47 is a type of gun, in my country, they will record the gun name if the bullet is shot.
DELL is one of the old model computers :I
Codage means "Codings" in French
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other than that you missed 2 more :P

I found Cuisine.
So 1 more left. Is it Tig?

Diesarie a dit :

I don't really like the mices and the color...
Same for that..

You are using a lot of textures, this usually makes the drawing better but.. This is too MUCH ! :(
And.. the mouse is not .. not.. I don't know what to say, I'm not english xD (I'm french, teehee ~)
The anatomy seems not riiiiiiiiiiiiiight ! The feet seems... gigantic !

Good luck ! ~

it's very impolite to offer critiques when the artist doesn't ask for them :)

Kattiej a dit :

That's rude. It's her style..

I love the shaman

Sorry to be rude, but I don't really know how to speak english, so.. I use my words ! xD

Sourisplum a dit :

it's very impolite to offer critiques when the artist doesn't ask for them :)

By the way, my critic meant to be constructive. I know it is not easy to draw and i like when people want to share their drawings. But, that doesn't mean that you cannot criticize to help people to improve their art. :)

Diesarie a dit :

Sorry to be rude, but I don't really know how to speak english, so.. I use my words ! xD


By the way, my critic meant to be constructive. I know it is not easy to draw and i like when people want to share their drawings. But, that doesn't mean that you cannot criticize to help people to improve their art. :)

some people just don't want critiques. if they do not say whether or not they want them, it is best to not offer any.

"The anatomy seems not riiiiiiiiiiiiiight !"

not right? that doesn't seem very cspecific or constructive.

Diesarie a dit :

Sorry to be rude, but I don't really know how to speak english, so.. I use my words ! xD


By the way, my critic meant to be constructive. I know it is not easy to draw and i like when people want to share their drawings. But, that doesn't mean that you cannot criticize to help people to improve their art. :)

it's actually one of the fanarts subforum rules

Vulli a dit :

7. No critiques unless requested by the creator
Some people do not appreciate receiving unwanted critiques on their work. Please keep it to yourself unless it's requested by the creator, or you can ask for permission first.

.

Guys guys please relax.
Diesarie did bring up some really good points and i am totally cool with it.
I should just say that Iam really fine with critics as long as they are not those that are not only not helpful, but also rude, but hers (or his) isn't.

Also I think in future if anyone gives their opinion in my art thread, i think it would be sweet if i can handle it myself, thanks!

Diesarie a dit :

I don't really like the mices and the color...
Same for that..

You are using a lot of textures, this usually makes the drawing better but.. This is too MUCH ! :(
And.. the mouse is not .. not.. I don't know what to say, I'm not english xD (I'm french, teehee ~)
The anatomy seems not riiiiiiiiiiiiiight ! The feet seems... gigantic !

Good luck ! ~

Actually I am not following the real mouse anatomy, which is totally wrong i know, is just my own anatomy which i made up myself, i can improvise on the feet no problem!

About bright light and texturing, is my fault, at the start when i find something new i tend to overuse it since i am not used to it so... maybe give me afew for months and i am sure i can control them.

Anyways i was testing on a new style of drawing and tested on those 2 drawings for a start, they are merely just grey pictures with overlayed color on them, thats why the colors looks messed up.
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Sounds like alot of excuses I know, but maybe give me time ^^"

Diesarie a dit :

I don't really like the mices and the color...
Same for that..

You are using a lot of textures, this usually makes the drawing better but.. This is too MUCH ! :(
And.. the mouse is not .. not.. I don't know what to say, I'm not english xD (I'm french, teehee ~)
The anatomy seems not riiiiiiiiiiiiiight ! The feet seems... gigantic !

Good luck ! ~

you're very rude
i hope you realise that
E: oh sorry fierying

Diesarie a dit :

I don't really like the mices and the color...
Same for that..

You are using a lot of textures, this usually makes the drawing better but.. This is too MUCH ! :(
And.. the mouse is not .. not.. I don't know what to say, I'm not english xD (I'm french, teehee ~)
The anatomy seems not riiiiiiiiiiiiiight ! The feet seems... gigantic !

Good luck ! ~

She wasn't asking for any critiques..

I think if the OP of this thread has spoken, this shouldn't be continued. We should stop :)

hello i just wanted to point out that i like that drawing you made of pikachudot :^)

Fierying a dit :

Guys guys please relax.
Diesarie did bring up some really good points and i am totally cool with it.
I should just say that Iam really fine with critics as long as they are not those that are not only not helpful, but also rude, but hers (or his) isn't.

Thanks. ;-; I was like "I ruined the topic of Fierying D:"

Fierying a dit :

Also I think in future if anyone gives their opinion in my art thread, i think it would be sweet if i can handle it myself, thanks!
Actually I am not following the real mouse anatomy, which is totally wrong i know, is just my own anatomy which i made up myself, i can improvise on the feet no problem!

My mices have a problem with their anatomy too, but if this is your style, you can draw like that if you want :D

Fierying a dit :

About bright light and texturing, is my fault, at the start when i find something new i tend to overuse it since i am not used to it so... maybe give me afew for months and i am sure i can control them.

I'm like you :') My friend was like "Eeeh, stop with the textures". I was sad to not control them (like you), but she helped me. :3

Fierying a dit :

Anyways i was testing on a new style of drawing and tested on those 2 drawings for a start, they are merely just grey pictures with overlayed color on them, thats why the colors looks messed up.
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Sounds like alot of excuses I know, but maybe give me time ^^"

Good "continuation" (i don't know the word in english P: This is like good luck or whatever)

Oh shame it's in *#towerdefense and it's laggy!
:/

Love your drawings!

Not to be rude :/ but u should make the mice some bigger noses ^^

Zuzuiscute a dit :

Not to be rude :/ but u should make the mice some bigger noses ^^

That's her style.
The noses look normal to me.

half related tfm thing, buut here are the 2 pillars that no one reallytook notice in the children's day map


with the help with Paperonaruto, we did a design for the pillars in them.
Even went to TFM just to get the Fraises sprite in vanilla rooms.
anyways happy children's day, hope you liked the map

beautiful

A friend of mine, Artakha and I have a unique Art Collab to show today!
Before that i just want to say i was trying to understand PK's color theory, so colors can be a bit vomitting
Art by: Me
Story by: Artakha


Have you ever done a job for so long, you get tired of doing it? That’s my job. I am the Timekeeper, the guardian of the Bell of Time. It is my job that it continues to ring for all eternity. While it must be done, it doesn’t help the monotony of the task at hand. As I stare off into the clouds, I am given a vision, a vision of the world at any point in time that I desire. I can see the wars of the universe unravel before my eyes, the triumphs of the races, and the destruction of worlds. The chime is slower and I once again prepare to swing the bell. Have you ever had a moment, where time seems to just stop? That is the bell slowing down. If it ever stops, that feeling will never end as time freezes to a halt in an instant for everyone in all times. As I go back to my post, I am met with the Master of the Universe, his massive white beard covering his body. “Hello, Timekeeper,” he said, his voice thundering through the room.
“Hello, Master,” I replied. “What brings you here to the Time Bell?”

“Nothing at all, I’m just checking upon you, Timekeeper. How have you been?”

“Pretty good, just making sure the bell keeps ringing y’know?” I didn’t want to tell him about a thing that has been nagging me: a companion. Being alone since the dawn of creation tends to make one lonely. The Master quickly picked up on this. “Is there something wrong?” he asked.

“I’m…Lonely,” I said.

“You’re lonely?”

“I’ve been ringing this bell since the dawn of creation. Not one time has there been another being here other than you, Master.” At this, the clouds around became slightly darker. It wasn’t anything too serious; the clouds did that all the time.

“Are you sure you’re alone?” The Master asked.

“The only thing here is a bell and these hourglasses.” The room got darker. “I want someone to talk to. Something I can relate to. Somethi”

The ground started to shake and the clouds turned to black. “What’s happening? I asked

“Do you not think I would forget about such simple needs? You are not alone here, Timekeeper. You do have a companion here.”

“But who is it?” I demanded


Lightning forked across the sky as the bell started to ring louder on its own accord. The ground shook even harder. “Do you not get the hints, Timekeeper?” The Master yelled. I then realized who, or rather what, it was: the Bell of Time. It is sentient. “Oh…I’m so sorry!”

“The Bell is out of control, angry at your ignorance to the possibility that it may be alive. You must find a way to stop it from destroying the fabric of time.”

“But How do I,” I couldn’t finish my question. The Master already left. I was now alone with a Bell bent on destroying all of reality. “Bell of Time! I’m sorry that I didn’t know you were sentient! Please! Stop destroying time!” I could feel the end of time approaching, the Bell purposefully stopping. Without hesitation, I grabbed the rope and pulled as hard as I could. “You’re not going away without me saying goodbye!” And with that, I let go and waited, and waited, and waited. The bell never stopped ringing and the clouds started to become white again. The Bell listened and accepted my apology. “Well, that was easy. I promise never to do something like that again. So, will we be friends?”

The surrounding area spawned with life as birds flew in the sky and the sound of an ocean could be heard. “I take that as a yes.”

Fierying a dit :

A friend of mine, Artakha and I have a unique Art Collab to show today!
Before that i just want to say i was trying to understand PK's color theory, so colors can be a bit vomitting
Art by: Me
Story by: Artakha

Have you ever done a job for so long, you get tired of doing it? That’s my job. I am the Timekeeper, the guardian of the Bell of Time. It is my job that it continues to ring for all eternity. While it must be done, it doesn’t help the monotony of the task at hand. As I stare off into the clouds, I am given a vision, a vision of the world at any point in time that I desire. I can see the wars of the universe unravel before my eyes, the triumphs of the races, and the destruction of worlds. The chime is slower and I once again prepare to swing the bell. Have you ever had a moment, where time seems to just stop? That is the bell slowing down. If it ever stops, that feeling will never end as time freezes to a halt in an instant for everyone in all times. As I go back to my post, I am met with the Master of the Universe, his massive white beard covering his body. “Hello, Timekeeper,” he said, his voice thundering through the room.
“Hello, Master,” I replied. “What brings you here to the Time Bell?”

“Nothing at all, I’m just checking upon you, Timekeeper. How have you been?”

“Pretty good, just making sure the bell keeps ringing y’know?” I didn’t want to tell him about a thing that has been nagging me: a companion. Being alone since the dawn of creation tends to make one lonely. The Master quickly picked up on this. “Is there something wrong?” he asked.

“I’m…Lonely,” I said.

“You’re lonely?”

“I’ve been ringing this bell since the dawn of creation. Not one time has there been another being here other than you, Master.” At this, the clouds around became slightly darker. It wasn’t anything too serious; the clouds did that all the time.

“Are you sure you’re alone?” The Master asked.

“The only thing here is a bell and these hourglasses.” The room got darker. “I want someone to talk to. Something I can relate to. Somethi”

The ground started to shake and the clouds turned to black. “What’s happening? I asked

“Do you not think I would forget about such simple needs? You are not alone here, Timekeeper. You do have a companion here.”

“But who is it?” I demanded


Lightning forked across the sky as the bell started to ring louder on its own accord. The ground shook even harder. “Do you not get the hints, Timekeeper?” The Master yelled. I then realized who, or rather what, it was: the Bell of Time. It is sentient. “Oh…I’m so sorry!”

“The Bell is out of control, angry at your ignorance to the possibility that it may be alive. You must find a way to stop it from destroying the fabric of time.”

“But How do I,” I couldn’t finish my question. The Master already left. I was now alone with a Bell bent on destroying all of reality. “Bell of Time! I’m sorry that I didn’t know you were sentient! Please! Stop destroying time!” I could feel the end of time approaching, the Bell purposefully stopping. Without hesitation, I grabbed the rope and pulled as hard as I could. “You’re not going away without me saying goodbye!” And with that, I let go and waited, and waited, and waited. The bell never stopped ringing and the clouds started to become white again. The Bell listened and accepted my apology. “Well, that was easy. I promise never to do something like that again. So, will we be friends?”

The surrounding area spawned with life as birds flew in the sky and the sound of an ocean could be heard. “I take that as a yes.”

So beatutiful art and story.
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400 ! :3
I like your arts.