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griffincraft a dit :VoirMasquer

Alright, thanks~!
That of the ears, I’ll round them off next time, but there are wolves with longer ears. And I wasnt aiming for the realistic eye look ^-^’

Thank you though! I’ll keep that in mind

I meant the pointyness

Yes, but you also said “and the ears are not that long”. So I put in that some wolves have long ears. And yeah I’ll round off the tips next time ^^'

griffincraft a dit :

Can someone criteque this..? I’ve improved but Im not sure if I got it yet.. Also it’s a colored sketch.

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So here's a few things I saw that could use a little help
1. The ears
- wolves have rounded ears, never are they that pointed. Since I assume you are aiming for a short furred wolf, the ears can a appear a bit longer than with a long furred wolf although they are still the same length. In my redline, I drew over with a long furred wolf, however the ears would be the same length just less concealed, making them appear longer.

2. The neck
- even if you were drawing a short furred wolf, the neck should not be that far set back behind the muzzle. Again, In my redline, I pictured a long furred wolf so the neck wouldn't appear that thick but it also wouldn't be as thin as the original.

3. The stop
- As stated previously, the stop (where the muzzle meets the forehead at a slant) is a bit drastic. This is only minor but it could be a bit smoother.

4. The mouth
- another minor thing is the mouth I noticed is a bit long, usually wolves' lips come to an end even with the stop.

Anyway these are just some things I noticed. My redline isn't perfect so just keep that in mind. And it's also based on a long furred wolf while you might have been going for short fur but only a few things would be effected by that.

rosuuri a dit :

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May someone critique this? It doesn't have to be all of them, it can be just one or two :) a redline would be appreciated

just gonna quote this.,,.,..,,.,...

Thanks~! Also I’m confused of that of the eye, maybe I should make it smaller, but I’ve seen some drawings where the eye is triangular like this?

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Can someone show me how to make a wolf’s snout, but growling? Like.. lips drawn back... It’s kinda hard xD :P

griffincraft a dit :

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shastabby a dit :VoirMasquer

griffincraft a dit :VoirMasquer

Can someone criteque this..? I’ve improved but Im not sure if I got it yet.. Also it’s a colored sketch.

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So here's a few things I saw that could use a little help
1. The ears
- wolves have rounded ears, never are they that pointed. Since I assume you are aiming for a short furred wolf, the ears can a appear a bit longer than with a long furred wolf although they are still the same length. In my redline, I drew over with a long furred wolf, however the ears would be the same length just less concealed, making them appear longer.

2. The neck
- even if you were drawing a short furred wolf, the neck should not be that far set back behind the muzzle. Again, In my redline, I pictured a long furred wolf so the neck wouldn't appear that thick but it also wouldn't be as thin as the original.

3. The stop
- As stated previously, the stop (where the muzzle meets the forehead at a slant) is a bit drastic. This is only minor but it could be a bit smoother.

4. The mouth
- another minor thing is the mouth I noticed is a bit long, usually wolves' lips come to an end even with the stop.

Anyway these are just some things I noticed. My redline isn't perfect so just keep that in mind. And it's also based on a long furred wolf while you might have been going for short fur but only a few things would be effected by that.

Thanks~! Also I’m confused of that of the eye, maybe I should make it smaller, but I’ve seen some drawings where the eye is triangular like this?

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Can someone show me how to make a wolf’s snout, but growling? Like.. lips drawn back... It’s kinda hard xD :P

About the eyes, the one I did was just a place holder, it wasn't really part of the critique. It kinda depends on the style you're going for. Realistic is much smaller than what you did but at the same time you could also do a more stylized eye that could be a bit bigger. So it depends on you but you can always reference real wolf photos, that seems to help the most.

shastabby a dit :

griffincraft a dit :VoirMasquer

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shastabby a dit :VoirMasquer

griffincraft a dit :VoirMasquer

Can someone criteque this..? I’ve improved but Im not sure if I got it yet.. Also it’s a colored sketch.

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So here's a few things I saw that could use a little help
1. The ears
- wolves have rounded ears, never are they that pointed. Since I assume you are aiming for a short furred wolf, the ears can a appear a bit longer than with a long furred wolf although they are still the same length. In my redline, I drew over with a long furred wolf, however the ears would be the same length just less concealed, making them appear longer.

2. The neck
- even if you were drawing a short furred wolf, the neck should not be that far set back behind the muzzle. Again, In my redline, I pictured a long furred wolf so the neck wouldn't appear that thick but it also wouldn't be as thin as the original.

3. The stop
- As stated previously, the stop (where the muzzle meets the forehead at a slant) is a bit drastic. This is only minor but it could be a bit smoother.

4. The mouth
- another minor thing is the mouth I noticed is a bit long, usually wolves' lips come to an end even with the stop.

Anyway these are just some things I noticed. My redline isn't perfect so just keep that in mind. And it's also based on a long furred wolf while you might have been going for short fur but only a few things would be effected by that.

Thanks~! Also I’m confused of that of the eye, maybe I should make it smaller, but I’ve seen some drawings where the eye is triangular like this?

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Can someone show me how to make a wolf’s snout, but growling? Like.. lips drawn back... It’s kinda hard xD :P

About the eyes, the one I did was just a place holder, it wasn't really part of the critique. It kinda depends on the style you're going for. Realistic is much smaller than what you did but at the same time you could also do a more stylized eye that could be a bit bigger. So it depends on you but you can always reference real wolf photos, that seems to help the most.

Ah okie, thanks

Hey guys!
Do you can critique me?

ciocead a dit :

Hey guys!
Do you can critique me?

the ear on the left (right?? the one closer to your avatar :J) looks like the fleshy (how2describe) part just disappears. the other ear seems like it would either be huge or it's really low (drooping?). the head in general seems like it's too close to one side (again, the side closer to your avatar since i can't perspective). maybe move it to the other side a bit? tail also seems kind of weird, but that's probably just me.
pls forgive this crap excuse of a critique oop

ciocead a dit :

Hey guys!
Do you can critique me?

did a little redline for ya ^-^

sorry if this is really nitpicky/really crappy e.e

critique please!
sorry it's in gif form. I was too lazy to upload the still version to imgur. u_u

Critique if you have time please?

I made a collab with my friend but I can't draw humans. Can you write a critique? Mine is the boy, and the girl is belong to my friend.

PLEASE DON'T WRITE CRITIQUE FOR THE GIRL! Just the boy because the girl is my friend's art.
(I know the boy should look down but originally the boy was smaller then now. I'll fix it when I'll make the lineart)

fnafmike a dit :

Critique if you have time please?

Ok so firstly i think you should overall work on your anatomy, (especially the legs) because they're not just straight sticks, so i did these things that hopefully can help you with them. Also, your eye from side-view looks kinda weird, because it's not as as squished as it should be. (Try looking at your own eyes in the mirror, in side-view and you'll understand).
And it seems like it's body is parted from the middle, and the back legs are just placed there. I think you can understand the rest i was gonna say from the redline (and the pics next to it) i made.
So, i hope this was helpful!

rosuuri a dit :

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May someone critique this? It doesn't have to be all of them, it can be just one or two :) a redline would be appreciated

quoting once again

Someone?
I noticed some flaws on my one, like the mouth is too much to the left and the left eye is a bit larger than the right eye, but I’d like criteque more on the body? I think it’s better than my other cat drawings... But IDK

E// Discount the tail size, that was my choice xP I like drawing them long

griffincraft a dit :

Someone?
I noticed some flaws on my one, like the mouth is too much to the left and the left eye is a bit larger than the right eye, but I’d like criteque more on the body? I think it’s better than my other cat drawings... But IDK

E// Discount the tail size, that was my choice xP I like drawing them long

I got this one. First I'm going to start by giving you this image to look at and will upload a redline in a sec
felt this image was kinda similar to what you are trying to draw

Here is the redline+original and then redline by itself (click the link) http://i.imgur.com/HxKjHpf.png

Though, from the image, it looks more abrupt? I mean the curve? And what I was trying to do with the front paws was make it look like the cat was backing away.. :P Thanks anyways~

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Can someone criteque this drawing before I do anything more?

Critique me plz!

may i have some critiques on this?
be as harsh as you wish (redlines help greatly!)

supastarx a dit :

may i have some critiques on this?
be as harsh as you wish (redlines help greatly!)

you sure improved a lot! Remember the basket will rest on the arm/hand because of gravity! there should be no space!