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Conwolf « Citoyen » 1428682260000
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griffincraft a dit : I completely with Shastabby and looking up more pictures of canines, but your joint placement is really an issue. I suggest mapping out joints over pictures of canine legs and then looking at yours. For example, your standing hind legs bend far too close towards the top. If you do this for the poses, you'll find the differences and learn to know where and how legs are formed. |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1428688680000
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shastabby a dit : I do look at reference images, that’s why I thought I was having some trouble with the paws. But I never thought of looking at closeups im an idiot, so I’ll try to do that more often than not But is there somehow a trick[?] to make it so that the paws dont look so odd? I try but it always comes out how it appears in the sketch^ or too skinny and weird |
Pyrubble « Censeur » 1428703440000
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griffincraft a dit : Try Conwolf's suggestion for the paws, but instead of mapping out joints you could map out the shapes that make up the paws. Kind of like whenever you see sketches that use circles as a base, try and find where those circles and ellipses would be in a paw by drawing over a photo. After doing a few angles, try creating one from scratch. I've done this myself for various body parts and it has helped a ton! |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1428703680000
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pyrubble a dit : Alright, I’ll try this Thanks! |
Aisurisa « Citoyen » 1428703980000
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Erchannn a dit : Thank you! |
Bernardokika « Citoyen » 1428705960000
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[Sentinel] Remember only three images a day. Fourth image removed. Dernière modification le 1428770820000 |
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Or maybe something like that ? I'm not good at anatomy, tho. |
Aisurisa « Citoyen » 1428743400000
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kennymccap a dit : Thanks too |
Macaronnie « Censeur » 1429299180000
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[edit] removed Dernière modification le 1431371280000 |
Griffincraft « Consul » 1429428120000
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Can anyone critique this unfinished dragon sketch? I also need help making the other wing. I cant get it right and it always looks weird, so if someone could give me some tips I’d be very grateful I’m drawing my newest OC, which I bought from Shardpixel Ignore the fact that it is missing spikes and horns, those will be added when I add the permanent lineart E//Wings are intentionally large btw, just putting that out E2// I got someone to help me with the wings, but someone else can still critique body anatomy >w< c: Dernière modification le 1429558140000 |
Conwolf « Citoyen » 1429492260000
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please, perspective help the girl's head looks wonky but my main focus was the church building behind it, so i didn't get a chance to fix that. Dernière modification le 1429492320000 |
Gabreyolo « Citoyen » 1431351240000
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ok so this is my cousin in japan with an asian boy near the pokemon center. dont ask. just do your work with critique, i dont like it that much , even tho i spent 2hours |
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Be as harsh as you want. |
Cloudheartz « Citoyen » 1437351000000
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Normal Style Cute Style Be as critical as you want, I don't mind |
Koiipy « Citoyen » 1439579880000
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Cloudheartz a dit : sorry, i won't critique the anatomy at all, only the shadows. (im really bad at giving anatomy tips on anything that isn't realistic ;v;) i got a bit carried away while doing this, if you didn't already notice :D first, i had a bit trouble seeing where exactly is the light source, so i hope i didn't change it too much. you should be a little bit more confident with your shadows and lights. you probably weren't concentrading much on them, so your lines were good, but your shadows look like you did them very quickly. a lot of people seem to do these very blurry shadows with a very dim light source, which makes the character look flat. so don't be afraid to use more shadows and lights and make them more detailed. you'll improve much faster, and your drawings will look more realistic c: + i had to make the picture more dark so you would see the lights better. i hope the critique helped, even though the light source is a lot more intensive in my picture, and i had to change a couple things :D sorry for my bad english? |
Takumi « Censeur » 1439602140000
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i'd like some help on anatomy please oops i JUST noticed that i forgot the ears (faceplam) and that i forgot to shade some stuff just please don't mention how she's basically sitting on nothing thanks! Dernière modification le 1439602200000 |
Cloudheartz « Citoyen » 1439602560000
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Koiipy a dit : Thank you for responding! It helped me out! |
Cadencecool « Citoyen » 1439615820000
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Critic please! |
Sallydhc « Citoyen » 1439742480000
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Can I have some tips on lighting and anatomy? Be as harsh as you want, I can handle it. ^^ |