Art Critique Center

opicalneon a dit :
eek someone help me please
it was my first time trying out long-legged mice and droopy ears
i honestly don't know where to put the tail so i left it out

i went over it in MS Paint, but its really bad

#4462

@ mimi

i can do eveything that you say except the tail part. theres like no space behind the mouse

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opicalneon a dit :
@ mimi

i can do eveything that you say except the tail part. theres like no space behind the mouse

ill try to find another pose for the tail! ^-^

#4464

Can someone critique my sketches please? I tried to draw some dynamic poses ;v;

#4465

@mimi

its ok i found another tail-pose

#4466

Xprincessj a dit :
critique for Darkdayboom (my first critique, apologies for any errors):

NOTE: Some of these are based off of real life animal looks and anatomy. If you want a more "cartoonish" look, feel free to ignore some of the anatomy stuff.
1. Head fur:So most furry creatures (for instance, a cat) have fur all over their faces. If viewed at an angle, the fur should be visible, and not exactly "flat". And the hair makes the drawing seem sort of "confusing" in a way (the eye color and lines go through one bunch of hair but doesnt go through the other). Otherwise, the hair is pretty much fine. I can't really give you many tips on head fluff since you will develop your own hair drawing style.

2. Ears: Let's say your creature is like a feline (it seems like it, if not then sorry.). Typically feline ears are upwards, and not really tilted forward. I don't know if felines can tilt their ears forward, lol. Also, remember that animal ears are usually not on the face, but on the side of the head (funny thing is i didnt even do that in the drawing ._. i'm also getting used to that, so dont worry).

3. The mouth: Basically it was just flipped, so i fixed it for you. The short, curved side should always be closest to the side the character is facing(if they are grinning or talking).

4. Eyes/Face:The eyes seem a little too big in my opinion, but that may just be your style. Otherwise, its pretty good!

5. The Space-y mist stuff: In my opinion, the ends should be sharper.

6. if its a cat-feline thing, chest fur shouldn't really stick out.

7. in my opinion, the legs on your drawing are too straight, animals have joints you know!

8. i think hind legs should look somewhat similar to what i drew. you can modify it though. and the tail is not on a side of an animal, its in between. yet it's not in the butt either, so maybe it should be a little higher? finally, make some fur where the tail starts and ends (where the hind leg starts) to separate the tail and the side of the body.

9. felines have scruffs, so maybe you should draw that instead of a neck? but you dont have to if it's your style.
i hope you stick with your style, its really nice, just needs little improvements!

sorry its not super detailed, i was tired and rushing.

Thank you I will try to work one those things the best I can!
Also well done for your first critique!

#4467

thanks :>
also the space-y mist can be sharp or curved, it looks nice either way.

#4468

Is the blending ok here?

http://orig10.deviantart.net/eb60/f/2015/269/8/e/untitled_drawing_by_snowstormishdabest-d9b1a8u.png

#4469

hey, i'm a beginner

can someone critique ? thank u!

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Cartonx a dit :
hey, i'm a beginner

-cut-

can someone critique ? thank u!

I would just move the right arm a bit higher so that the shoulders are proportionally even, as for the rest, it's great! I really like your art style :D

#4471

oops old

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Cartonx a dit :
hey, i'm a beginner

pic

can someone critique ? thank u!

(i cant really do digital)

1) mice have round-er ears, but if thats your style, you don't have to change it :>

2) whiskers are closer to the nose(usually)

3) as michiyo said, the shoulders are uneven, causing the arms to look unproportionate

4) might want to add the rest of the stomach(its out of place cause i dont have a tablet)

5) might wanna add some leg there

6)i didnt put the 6 in because i forgot. idk if the tail is suppose to loop under the drawing or something?

@angelfromaj
cant really draw blush marks :P

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#4473

..This thread's a mess.
I don't think some of you should be giving critiques, especially if you don't do digital art. Fluid lines help convey an idea and you're making the picture a very hard-to-read mess. I would avoid giving out critiques if you have no idea how anatomy works or haven't studied mice. You may end up not teaching them anything at all. Tell them WHY you should draw something like this. What does the little amount of curve in a snout do? What can they do to improve? Red lines are good, but you need to explain.

angelfromaj a dit :
Is the blending ok here?

What program do you use? Do you know about layers?

Cartonx a dit :
hey, i'm a beginner

can someone critique ? thank u!

Always start your art with a skeleton drawing. This is an example of that;

https://i.gyazo.com/14d6a84482377a29e260ed619312f979.png

ALWAYS use a circle for the head to begin. When you get more into stylization, you'll learn to use ovals, squares, and such as bases for heads. Right now, stick with circle. Use shapes for drawing every part of the body. Circles for eyes, squares for hands, rectangles for feet, so on. This will bring a more natural and appealing feeling in your art. I suggest looking up structure, gesture, and pose tutorials as well! They will help you get started and you can improve more on there. When you learn more about anatomy, we can provide more in depth critiques!

WARNING || Often in art videos, there is censored but still nudity. Do not watch if you are near your parent for I don't want anyone to get in trouble. I recommend Proko, but his videos do have some of that.

#4474

don't judge lumi/shade plz because (1) I didn't shade and (2) I know the lumi is incorrect but I just like the look of it

#4475

Critique please? I need help on some of it!

#4476

xxkaylacatxx a dit :

Critique please? I need help on some of it!

Alright. Not going to go into anatomy stuff. But I'll talk about the shading first.
Your character's shadows are inconsistent. Always keep a light source in mind when you're shading. Whether it's from the back, front, left, right etc..keep it consistent. For example, The legs and hands show the light is coming from the left. The head... not sure where the light source is.. but definitely not the left. The ears and bow as well. The feather is shaded as if there was light from the right and the tail has little shadow at all.

Hnng probably not the most clear explanation, but cute drawing!

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Michiyo a dit :
Can someone critique my sketches please? I tried to draw some dynamic poses ;v;

i did this quickly, so there might be some anatomy issues! c:
your picture is really stylished, so i'll try to point out only the biggest issues. first, the back legs. their anatomy isn't that bad, but it really stands out because you drew the rest of the body better. the other half of the mouse is generally worse (back legs, tail). the other issues aren't as big, like the legs being too long/short in some places.
you did a good job on the poses though. and i really like that you did a gesture line in the second drawing (the tail shouldn't be so high tho), it makes drawing energetic poses a lot easier.

idk if you looked at a running cycle while doing this. if you didn't, here's a link to one, if you want to improve the anatomy more: http://1.bp.blogspot.com/-sdKHzFjsmZc/TuFRws0EqnI/AAAAAAAAAqY/QtqZNFQdhPk/s1600/MousieForBlog01.gif

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#4478

this is my first time trying sai

tho I did use a mouse to draw this

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bonbonthebun a dit :
this is my first time trying sai

is there anything wrong

tho I did use a mouse to draw this

here lemme see if i can help atiny bit even though i suck at drawing XD
My critique -

list of things that i would suggest:
Second ear,Feet,fix the arms,bring the tail to the other side and make it stand up,whiskers on the other side.
I hope this critique helped a tiny bit? XD

#4480

Anatomy Tips:

It is very important to use photo references.
A lot of you draw mice like cats.

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