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[Fanfiction] New Divide
Sirusthemice
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Beautyiscool a dit :
text

i can imagine it being in summer and all of them having these hawaii-style flower necklaces

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insults

yep
mood lifter 100%
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yes

and let's make sure that those characters aren't real.

before they torture me,

mhm.

anyways.

I'll get that 444

[url=http://tny.cz/bfa34f9f is the reader x various nd haha. pass, ask some one who knows.][/url]
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Those drabbles...omg. Romance and insults, how perfect xD and hilarious
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Well.

I did say I was getting 444.

Insults are amaze

except when they come to life and torture me.


Siiri.

I shall force you to make chap
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still forcing
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Noobforevah a dit :
Well.

I did say I was getting 444.

Insults are amaze

except when they come to life and torture me.


Siiri.

I shall force you to make chap

ill maybe make it tomorrow ok now sh and enjoy your 444th
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i remembered i need to do chappie
wwwhatever let me finish this thing first it relates to nd (and rok) anyway


OKAY OKAY DOING CHAP
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Sirusthemice a dit :

OKAY OKAY DOING CHAP

get your inspiration back with

wine drunken calix.

goes to redraw because messy gaha

vv NGFNG

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good thing because he might take off his mask gaha


http://i.imgur.com/hJKdWLd.png
Sirusthemice
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IT DOESNT HELP GOD DAMMIT blARGH

well thanks now calix is drunk

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nnNNONONOn
Sirusthemice
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chapter done pg19 post 19
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Sirusthemice a dit :
:: Chapter 6 ::

AAAAAAAAmaze chappie
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Amgs what's plan b oh noessss

write more

also i tried writing cooper's backstory. Or semi backstory. Or thing that explains part of his personality idk
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Cooper sat alone, in a shady grove. He always sat alone, it was better that way.

He looked up at the sky through the many leaves. So many, like the people he- no it wouldn’t do to think of such things. Cooper looked down at his hands, and grimaced. Blood stained the slim palms, the long fingers.
Why did doing these things, bother him so much? Brief images of a particular job flashed through Cooper’s mind.
-Flash back-

He saw a young little mouse, hardly even twelve, staring at him with fear while he eliminated the last mouse in that house in front of her.

Her eyes, were filled with tears and were wide open with terror. When Cooper turned around and saw her face, something in him broke. He suddenly felt, what was it that he felt? He looked around him, and saw the little mouse’s mother on the floor, covered in blood. Had he done that? Cooper looked from the mother to her daughter and he could sense the little girl’s fear of him.

He walked over to her and raised his hand to strike the killing blow, but something wouldn’t let him. He couldn’t do it. Cooper couldn’t take the life of one who had barely lived.

He couldn’t move, and one of his companions came in and went to finish up the girl. Cooper swung around and defended the little mouse with big green eyes. It was a quick battle, but Cooper had gotten injured. He slowly reached up to touch his damaged eyes. He heard a cough and he turned around.

The mouse was shivering, but she sat by her mother who still barely breathed. Cooper walked over and she squeaked with fright. Cooper bent down by the dying mother, and began to work on her wounds. He bandaged her up and sighed, unsure how long the mother would live and frightened at the hate the girl probably felt for him. He couldn’t believe that he had nearly taken away the mouse’s mother, that he had probably ended her life.

He stood up and started to walk away, when he heard a tiny voice. “Thank you.” He looked back in surprise and blinked, because he couldn’t see very well.

He frowned and turned away walking out the door. “Don’t thank me, I was the one who did that to your mother. You should hate me, I won’t mind. I deserve it. All I have to say little mouse, is sorry.”

He swore to himself then, to never harm a hair on any child. He swore, to never kill a woman, because they might just be mothers.

-End of flashback-

Cooper sighed and wiped his hands on the grass around him. He then looked up at the sky, and wondered what shade of blue it was, it was darker than yesterday but still pretty light. He’d have to ask Calix or Axel or Shadow, because his guesses were getting closer and he needed to know how close he was to the right color. How close was he this time? He didn’t know.

All he saw was gray.

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Amaze chapter Siri <3 amaze I say
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That's amazing Bea, but....so sad ;; bwaaah.
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Flutterbest a dit :
Amaze chapter Siri &lt;3 amaze I say
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That's amazing Bea, but....so sad ;; bwaaah.

Pfft 'tis nothing compared to your backstories

but thank you
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*casually comes in and posts this here* Yeah so this has some language and shtuff
[quote=drabble/back story: Mitsuki was always an unlucky guy]Oh so you’re back again, huh? Well please, please sit down on the pile of shattered hearts and dreams, it’s actually quite comfortable! Now then today’s story is about one of our favorite good guys, ya’ know the unlucky bastard, Mitsuki! Okay so enough with the fancy introductions, time for the story.


“Mit, Mit wait up!” the cheery, voice of his best friend made Mitsuki turn around, and smile despite his ever-gloomy thoughts. He nodded to the girl, and she shook her head at him. “Mit, Mit, Mit! Not even a hello, how very sad.”
“Hello Siiri,” Mitsuki said chuckling. (BOOM, LET THE BOMB DROP! Yeah I went there, same name as one of the Freedom Fighters. Sorry got excited uh back to the story.) For some reason Siiri had been acting even giddier than usual lately, and it hadn’t slipped Mitsuki’s notice.

“What’re you staring at?” Siiri asked, and frowned. Mitsuki shook his head, blushing when he realized he had indeed been staring at her.

“Um sorry...it’s nothing,” he said. Siiri shrugged, and rolled her eyes at him. She grabbed his hand, and they started walking. Mitsuki thoughts wandered back to the place they had been when Siiri had called to him.

-Surely father would have it taken care of...- he thought. –There are enough people to stand guard. No, no what am I saying? That idiot is way too stubborn to have anyone protect him. I know I shouldn’t be worrying to much...this tribe has never had a problem with break-ins.- The pitiful faces of those who had tried to do such a thing made Mitsuki grimace. –But....this one is supposed to be good.-

“Mitsuki!” Siiri’s voice startled him back into reality, and he his head to look at her. “Have you even been listening?”

“Um...” Mitsuki said, trying to come up with an excuse.

“That’s what I thought...” Siiri said, and shook her head. “I want you to meet someone.” Mitsuki’s heart fell.

-Someone...? Please don’t let this someone be a certain special someone! - Mitsuki begged in his thoughts. –Although...that would explain why she’s been so happy.- A dark furred, tall, lanky mouse stepped in front of them out of nowhere, and Mitsuki stumbled back in shock.

“Hello,” the mouse said with a smile that sent chills down Mitsuki’s spine. Siiri ran up to the mouse, and threw her arms around him.

“Cupcake!” she cried. The mouse laughed, and hugged her back, while Mitsuki just stared at them. When the mouse let go of Siiri she was still laughing, but her smile faded when she saw Mitsuki. “Mit it’s rude to stare...”

“Who is he...?” Mitsuki asked.

“Mit, he’s my boyfriend!” Siiri groaned, and rolled her eyes.

“The name’s Shadow,” the mouse said. Mitsuki’s eyes looked like they were about to pop out of his head.

“Shadow...?” he whispered. “Y-you, you’re the one who’s been threatening the chief!” Shadow quickly reached over, grabbed Mitsuki’s shirt, and pulled him close.

“Listen up you little brat, you’re gonna help us get rid of the chief, and you aren’t going to say a word about this to anyone!” Shadow hissed. Siiri grabbed his arm.

“Shadow, don’t hurt him!” she said. The mouse’s sunglasses glinted in the light almost as if to add to the scene, as he dropped Mitsuki.

“Siiri...” Mitsuki began, but Shadow was already walking away, his arm around Siiri’s waist.
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Mitsuki paced around in his room, biting his lip.

-How could she have fallen for a guy like him?- he asked himself over and over again. –How can she expect me to kill my father? Well...she doesn’t know I’m his son does she? Of course she doesn’t, because I’m too much of a disgrace for him to tell people.- Mitsuki sat down on his bed, and shook his head, laughing at himself.

“I’m such an idiot...never fall in love with someone,” he scolded, still laughing. “It only leads to heart break when it’s an unlucky guy like me...”

“Mit!” Siiri’s voice broke through his thoughts for the third time that day. Mitsuki stood up with a sigh, and went to open the door. To his great surprise a gun was shoved in his face.

“What the hell is this Siiri?!” he demanded, and pushed it away.

“Shadow says we need to get this assassination done with as soon as possible,” she told him, her face so serious it was almost laughable.

“Siiri...I have to tell you something,” Mitsuki said.

“Mit, can’t you wait?” Siiri asked groaning. He shook his head, and dragged her into the room. She looked up at him a surprised look on her face. “Um...what is it Mit? I know this whole thing with the chief might be surprising, but you’ll do it for me right? You’re the smartest mouse I know, and I don’t think even Shadow could pull it off without someone like you!” Mitsuki put up a hand to shush her.

“Siiri....” he began.

“Hey kid! What’re ya’ doing!” the voice made Mitsuki jump, and he turned around to see Shadow tapping his foot impatiently.

“I’m sorry Mit, we’ll just have to wait,” Siiri whispered, patting Mitsuki’s arm. She then went over to Shadow, and they began to leave.

-I...I guess I’ll have to go...- Mitsuki thought, and solemnly followed them, feeling like there were weights holding him back. When they reached the place where the chief slept, Shadow signaled for quiet, and pushed Mitsuki towards the door. Mitsuki began picking the lock, and cringed when the door swung open, but the other mice didn’t seem to notice as they pulled him into the room.

“Alright so what do w-” Siiri was cut off, as Shadow suddenly grabbed her and held a knife to her throat.

“Siiri!” Mitsuki cried, and tried to come closer, but Shadow just kicked him away. The chief was stirring in his sleep.

“Good, good wake up!” Shadow yelled, and the chief’s eyes popped open. His mouth dropped when he saw the scene before him.

“Siiri!” the chief gasped.

“That’s right I’ve got your daughter,” Shadow said, smiling, as if he knew he had already won. He looked over at Mitsuki. “Aw and look at the poor brother who didn’t know. You were even sweet on her weren’t you?”

“Brother...?” Siiri asked, looking at Mitsuki, who couldn’t answer at all.

“Give it to me,” Shadow demanded, finally annoyed by the silence.

“Never...” the chief said.

“Oh what am I doing?! I’ve gotten all I need out of this twerp,” Shadow said rolling his eyes, then he slit Siiri’s throat with one swift movement. He pulled out a gun, and shot the chief. “This was so easy...”

“Siiri...father...” Mitsuki whispered, horrified. Shadow turned, grinning still.

“Oh I forgot there’s still one left,” he said, and tossed his head back, laughing as he raised his gun. Mitsuki saw his finger tighten on the trigger, and closed his eyes, knowing it was all over. Then the sound of the bullet releasing itself from the gun was heard, and a disgusting thud afterwards when it hit its target. Mitsuki opened his eyes, and saw Shadow on his knees clutching his side. The tapping of footsteps echoed throughout the room, and another mouse appeared. His fur was not just dark...it was pitch black, and his eyes were not just one color...one was gray and the other was...had it just turned yellow?

“Firiro...you damn...traitorous...” Shadow gasped the words out as best he could as he desperately tried to stop the blood from flowing. “Bastard!”

“I was never your ally Shadow,” the mouse who Mitsuko guessed was Firiro said, suddenly going on a spree of crazy laughter, but it stopped as suddenly as it had begun, and he got a horrible frown on his face. “Do you remember a day...you’re troops...never returned? Well Shadow...Shadow...dear Shadow, never mind that, I will be Shadow now. I will kill all of the rest of you merciless thugs, then show a lesson to the rest of this sick world. Good bye Shadow, good bye.” Firiro was now smiling again, as he leaned down, and struck Shadow on the head...the killing blow. He grabbed Shadow’s glasses, then turned to Mitsuki.

“P-p-please!” Mitsuki begged, tears coming to his eyes. “Don’t...don’t kill me!” Firiro shook his head, and put his paw on Mitsuki’s face.

“So you’ve lost your sister. I’ve been in quite the same situation before...” he said. “Don’t worry...I won’t lie to you. You will NEVER forget it, but sir...you see you can still make something of your life. You can still...avenge her.” Firiro stood up after saying this, put the sunglasses on, and then slowly walked out.


Mistuki later decided to join the Freedom Fighters, and on the day he applied, he was eagerly scanning the acceptance papers they had given him, when a shadow covered them. He looked up to see a girl.
“What are you looking at?!” she asked.

“Oh um sorry...” Mitsuki said, and quickly looked away. The girl didn’t go away though, but instead plopped down by him.

“Oh so you’re joining the Freedom Fighters as well?” she asked. Mitsuki looked at her again, and nodded. “Well then since we’ll be partners, I might as well tell ya’ my name. I’m Siiri.”

-Siiri...- Mitsuki thought, staring at her. –Why did it have to be Siiri?-
[back to the present time in New Divide]

Mitsuki looked over the piles of information about the recent activity of the Invading Tribe.

“The one called Shadow, the shadow, Shadow...” he murmured as the name began to pop up everywhere. He put the papers down, and sighed as he remembered Shadow’s words that one time they had met. Mitsuki said something quietly, not caring that he knew the person who had saved his life, and killed his family’s murderer, was already insane. “This is not the way Shadow...I...I know what it’s like to miss someone, but this is not the way. You can be better....so much better, Firiro.”[/quote]
Yep, sorry about it being soooo long, I got really caught up in it eheheh. *whistles and walks away*
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Flutty
That Siiri twist
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Littlechedda a dit :
Flutty
That Siiri twist

^^^

and that firiro twist.


Wow
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mother
of god
that
ttththththat
backstory
Littlechedda a dit :
Flutty
That Siiri twist

THAT
Beautyiscool a dit :
^^^

and that firiro twist.


Wow

THIS

i also added backstory post #2 i ran out of space

edit: shattered hearts,dreams pools of tears and whatnot
damn
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Littlechedda a dit :
Flutty
That Siiri twist

Beautyiscool a dit :
^^^

and that firiro twist.


Wow

I like twists
Sirusthemice a dit :
mother
of god
that
ttththththat
backstory


THAT

THIS

i also added backstory post #2 i ran out of space

edit: shattered hearts,dreams pools of tears and whatnot
damn

I like them a LOT

how else are you supposed to decorate a pit of sadness and despair?
Sirusthemice
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sso this kind of low

i might
make
a r late new year's drabble

because
yes
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Sirusthemice a dit :
sso this kind of low

i might
make
a r late new year's drabble

because
yes

do it

just fking do it.
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