ommmmg!! ;w; thanks a million this really helped!!!! <3

What should I fix? also any tips on how to colour the hair?

Ah, thank you Fierying!

Lolokizka a dit :

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What should I fix? also any tips on how to colour the hair?

Ok, so:
-nose is too short
-lips should be placed a bit more to left
-eyelids must be more round at the top (eyeballs are there!)
-ear... it has to be more realistic (google how ears look like...)
-shoulders should be shorter and placed to down more (idk how to explain this)
I wish you understood something :D

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lojids a dit :VoirMasquer

Crtiques pls :v

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I think it's adorable!
One thing I would take note of is that the edges are cut off. Make your canvas bigger so that the white edges continue
Some parts of the lineart are colored in while some arent. Try to make this consistent. Either a consistent black, or a consistent colored lineart. You can also do black on the outside edges only too. There are many options, but what you have right now looks awkward. Also, if you are going to color your lineart, maybe darken it more so it has more clarity and doesn't just blend in with the rest.

On the note of shading. You kind of went for a pillow shading kind of thing. Visualize a light source and think about where light would and would not hit. Look at other examples because it's hard and lengthy to explain. Don't shade with black. Shade with the opposite color of your light source. LIght sources are rarely pure white unless it's indoors. Blue or purple are usually go to colors because they can make everything pop :)

thank you very much and am really pesima with shadows and everything that has to do, but thanks for the advice and put it into practice.

Fierying a dit :

Mass Critique Time

lojids a dit :VoirMasquer

Crtiques pls :v

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- I can tell that you have used Paint tool SAI, and I can give some tips about it!
* Most of the examples are mouse drawn, not with a tablet.
In your Linework layer, you can actually edit and add points you place by holding control and move them. You can also drag to select a bunch of them and move and right click to remove the selected points. Another lovely thing about linework tool is that you can use the pressure tool to give your lines weight.

2ndly, don't just blur everything just because you can, in art theory, these creates muddy values and make the object unreadable.

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And lastly, just to make an art theory simple, don't make shadows grey. Adding color to your shadows can make your work much more interesting. The most you would see is blue shadows outsides.

In terms of anatomy and other things advance theories, I would not go through because I understand you draw for a hobby, not something oyu want to go seriously to be a great concept artist, those are for you to explore and learn yourself~! Won't force it to you.

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thank you very much, I'm still practicing shading and take into account. As I said suck shading.
I use sai
but I do not like I did not know much use it well but also will try to put it into practice
Thank you again
(I am Lojids)

Ah, a Critique Center! I've been needing this! Before I show my drawing I'll give some cituque!

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Is there anything that needs to be fixed here?

Hmm, not a lot, I'll give some advice though!~
1. Don't use circle tool bodies, heads, and limbs.
You're making the curve tool and pencil tool sad... Try using the pencil tool or curve tool to make bodies, heads, and limbs next time!
2. Shading
Not a lot of it in this drawing... I know a very useful tip to shade!
Just put in the color that you are shading in the first color box. Then add the color of what shade you want to shade your shape with!
Annnnd you're done!
3. OC designs
Not too bad tbh, search up "How to not make an OC look like a mary sue" (I'm not saying your oc's are mary sues, I'm just giving a suggestion on what to do to help your ocs look nicer ^^) on Google and you'll find some guides! You don't have to change them, that's okay, but tbh, I like the one on the left the most! ^^
4. Smaller ears?
That's what I have to say...
5. Well... that's it.
yup, do those and your drawings will be much better! One more tip: add a background if you could. You don't have to though...

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I would like some criticism on this:

WARNING: This was made on a tablet app called ibis paint X. NOT Paint Tool Sai or anything like that.

anything i need to fix for this?? especially lighting

i suck whit shadows
sry y.y

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i suck whit shadows
sry y.y

Haha! Dont worry! I suck alot more with shadows! And plus, your drawing looks neat! Gj!

Could I have some critique on this? Be as harsh as you need to, and if possible, a redline would be great.
I'm pretty confident about it, but something really seems off, and I cant put my finger on what it is.

thanks!

edit: you can ignore this

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What should I fix? also any tips on how to colour the hair?

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Ok, so:
-nose is too short
-lips should be placed a bit more to left
-eyelids must be more round at the top (eyeballs are there!)
-ear... it has to be more realistic (google how ears look like...)
-shoulders should be shorter and placed to down more (idk how to explain this)
I wish you understood something :D

e: could anyone give tips how to colour hair?

Lolokizka a dit :

maarfinka a dit :VoirMasquer

Lolokizka a dit :VoirMasquer

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What should I fix? also any tips on how to colour the hair?

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Ok, so:
-nose is too short
-lips should be placed a bit more to left
-eyelids must be more round at the top (eyeballs are there!)
-ear... it has to be more realistic (google how ears look like...)
-shoulders should be shorter and placed to down more (idk how to explain this)
I wish you understood something :D

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Much better

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e: could anyone give tips how to colour hair?

Here's a quick guide I made! (I hope it helps)


If you use SAI:
Step 1: Make the sketch of the hair then color the sketch with lock opacity or a clipping layer, you can learn more about them Here
Step 2: make a new layer under the sketch layer and color it in with a base color
Step 3: merge sketch layer and color layer together and blend with the brush tool then adjust color with overlay. (Don't forget to clip!) To learn more about overlay click here
Step 4: using the brush tool, shade with making strokes on the tips and top of the hair, be sure to add highlights with a lighter color!

For mobile users:
Step 1: Instead of black use a dark color
Step 2: Shade with a darker version of the color but make sure to change the color a bit to make it look nicer.
Step 3: Add highlights
Step 4: Add details!

I hope this helped!

Hi, can I get some critique on this please?

I made this as a test picture when I first got SAI, so don't be too harsh on me, I was just learning!

Critique on this?

Could I get some anatomy help? I have looked at references but I dont think this is accurate at all yet

Redlines are especially helpful, but if you cant provide one that's ok! Be as harsh as you need to be too

Mind if I could get some critique? List some pros and cons and what I should work on.

please critique this!