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walianna a dit :
Please

omf gr8 art
although your mouses face contour looks like a humans and its kinda creeping me out

Conwolf a dit :
begacheesy a dit :
Can someone help me on some shading tips using a mouse?

I'm sick of my shading, i want to discover new ones. Any ideas for new shadings for mouse users?

IMO, the easiest way to shade using a mouse is to do cel shading. While it is possible to do "painterly" shading with a mouse, it comes with great restrictions because of the lack of pen pressure and precise control over your movements. Look into tutorials about cel shading and what to do and what not to do. Whatever you do, do not resort to just using an air brush and blurring it. Also avoid pillow shading (look that up)
Otherwise, just look at others' artworks and see the massive amounts of shading techniques that exist :0 ^^

Thank you!!!

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pluppyz a dit :
Any advice helps.

http://imgur.com/a/PP6X3

sorry if this seems nitpicky, i tried my best not to criticize details that were stylistic choices

also sorry for my handwriting

#4665

ill translate the writing for u

#4666

bumped

#4667

Critique, please?

#4668

May someone fix my errors on this, please? :)

I know i already uploade dthis on DeviantArt.. Just asking someone to fix my errors. c:

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#4669

begacheesy a dit :
May someone fix my errors on this, please? :)
I know i already uploade dthis on DeviantArt.. Just asking someone to fix my errors. c:

I'm not very good at critique, but I'll try.
The ears should be the same sizes, and the inside of the left ear is too close to the head, center it.
The forehead is too large anatomy-wise, either raise the eyes or make the head a bit smaller.
Can't think of anything else, sorry.

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Funpaws a dit :
begacheesy a dit :
May someone fix my errors on this, please? :)
I know i already uploade dthis on DeviantArt.. Just asking someone to fix my errors. c:

I'm not very good at critique, but I'll try.
The ears should be the same sizes, and the inside of the left ear is too close to the head, center it.
The forehead is too large anatomy-wise, either raise the eyes or make the head a bit smaller.
Can't think of anything else, sorry.

To add on to this, i also suggest maybe try experimenting with shading, and make your background more than just some green scribbles. Also, your lines are shaky and cross over each other when they shouldnt, maybe try cleaning up your linework a tad.

#4671

hehe thanks guys! ;w;
And i'll try.. I'm not that good at shading tbh and i was the same time, lazy so i didn't even do lineart over the sketch, haha.

#4672

Try experimenting! Practice until you get better! Also don't you have a digital tablet? Try using some pen pressure.

#4673

Thanks, i'll try again! And yeah, i do but this is really irritating, on SAI, i use the tools to shade with my tablet and barely anything comes out, it just comes as very light grey and or nothing..

Can't do much and i'm still practising using this tablet.

#4674

http://sketchtoy.com/67353167
Ik I made this in sketchtoy, but I want an anatomy check since I usually make my drawings similar to this

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Funpaws a dit :
http://sketchtoy.com/67353167
Ik I made this in sketchtoy, but I want an anatomy check since I usually make my drawings similar to this

I'm not good at critiques but uh
I think the neck could be a little narrower on the right side and that the tail could have a little curve so it doesn't look like a stick or something? otherwise it looks p good

#4676

Funpaws a dit :
http://sketchtoy.com/67353167
Ik I made this in sketchtoy, but I want an anatomy check since I usually make my drawings similar to this

The body looks a bit long to me, either shorten it or make the waist thicker. Also his face is a bit too forward, maybe push it back a little. Try to make your lines a bit less shaky.

#4677

Basgetti a dit :
Critique, please?

I guess I'll just throw this back down

#4678

Okay, this one I actually spent legit time on, I used a reference from my sketchbook irl.

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ebotthegreat a dit :
Can i get some critiques on this? It's somewhat old but I still like it

large image

Putting this here again

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begacheesy a dit :
Thanks, i'll try again! And yeah, i do but this is really irritating, on SAI, i use the tools to shade with my tablet and barely anything comes out, it just comes as very light grey and or nothing..

Can't do much and i'm still practising using this tablet.

not really much of a critique but you should definitely try experimenting with different colors and layers if you havent got to it yet
you see. black/grey doesnt leave out much to the drawing, and it makes it look bland. but now that you know it, you should try using other colors to make your drawings look a bit more realistic (i usually use the color orange and purple, give em a try)

i've seen some of your recent drawings in your offtopic thread, and i just cant stand how wobbly the lines look like. i can tell that you havent tried out the stabilizer already as it's been several days and you still havent adjusted to your tablet. it doesnt take that long to get used to it... but as for what i was saying, you really should stick with the stabilizer until you're confident enough to make smooth lines without it.. (reminder: the higher the number, the stronger the stabilizer gets)

about the layer part, what i usually do is to set the opacity to something like 40-60% (or until the shading is soft and clear enough to see), set it on multiply, put the layer above the coloring layer and clip it so that it doesnt go out of of the drawing

you can also do the shading beforehand but eh you can try whatever suits you, this is just my advice

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