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Digitalpanda « Consul » 28/10/2016 23:23
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Just a sketch Critique pls |
Walianna « Citoyen » 29/10/2016 10:59
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digitalpanda a dit : Dernière modification le 29/10/2016 15:34 |
Hallucination « Censeur » 29/10/2016 11:22
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Maybe some critique? Some parts look lopsided, but some tips for the future would be nice. |
Macaronnie « Censeur » 29/10/2016 11:58
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critique on this would be nice |
Lunakami « Citoyen » 29/10/2016 12:15
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please Dernière modification le 29/10/2016 12:16 |
Digitalpanda « Consul » 29/10/2016 14:28
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walianna a dit : Thank you so much^^ |
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digitalpanda a dit : just gonna point out some things instead since the redline's already been provided: - the bowtie looks too pointy. try to make it look wider and curvier (like this) - the way you draw feathers look like knives. the ends should be rounder and the feathers must have more details into them - the arms are too stiff and the elbows look nonexistent. you should practice drawing joints and studying how they work, especially if the mouse is standing on a ground - the mouse seems to have a pretty tall chest. try lowering it's head until it reaches it's body and try highering the back as well - the hind legs dont have to look like beach balls all the time (1;2) (and try to draw the legs thinner) - the ears' folds look too big - the tail item doesnt look straight at all, you should lower it so that it looks more proportional - the hair isnt very visible, and unless you choose to make it look like that, i suggest you'd move the hat a bit backwards so that it shows a bit more no matter how much anything you draw doesnt look noticeable, don't forget that you still need to put it into perspective good job btw :') you really rock that art of yours!!! walianna a dit : redline im not usually good at drawing humans i tried my best to give you an idea of the things that need to be improved on. you did a pretty good job on it but there's something off with the hand.. the little finger looks very bent and it's not in place. it's supposed to be beside the palm (if that makes sense) the head is not proportional. it's not supposed to be a perfect circle but it looks out of shape. try sketching a circle and using it as a guideline next time! the ears are too high, lower them. also the headband at the top.... what is it exactly hanging on? how's it put in it's place? the way you drew it, it looks like its hanging between the horns, but it doesnt look right at all. one more thing is to adjust the eyes and make them look symmetrical!!! dont forget that Grincreep a dit : that's some really lovely art, i like the way you put colors into it! <3 although there are some things that are worth mentioning.... normally the feet of a mouse arent that huge. they're very thin and tiny. of course i dont mean that literally, since you can adjust them yourself to fit with your style, but it's a really important principle if you want your mice to look a bit more decent (no they're not bad, i love ur style very much ;_;) and therefore it needs to be applied. try starting small and practice it every time you get the chance! there's also something wrong with the lower part of the mouse's body. the lines don't align with the body at all and the hind legs look too... oval-ish. try making them rounder next time. the tail item looks a bit lifted upwards. you should draw it still, and try avoiding any curves that make it look off one more thing that i've also noticed that you're starting to get the hang of light sources. some places are kinda off (for example, the left ear. it's supposed to be shaded completely because there's no light coming from towards its direction. and then there's also that tail item) but i know you can get there someday, dont give up! i'll try and do a redline tomorrow @onni nice drawing! i dont really see alot of things wrong with it but the palms aren't showing. make the arms a bit thinner maybe? :o also the toes look a little too big for me. - this isnt my first time giving critiques but i've only began doing so. this one was pretty big, but if any of you have a problem with the way i critique just let me know. i hope i wasnt being too harsh on anyone, im just trying my best to help <3 |
Shardpixel « Consul » 30/10/2016 18:26
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@grincreep their left leg shouldnt travel up more than the torso, lower that and stick the body out a bit more instead always set a specific ground level. the only excuse for two feet not at the same height is either when one foot is bent or when there is some odd perspective. neither of which are present / distinguishable the feet look very 2d and the bend / curved line by the toes doesnt make sense. try practicing different foot angles and youll get it i marked the spot around where the tail would start to point out that it looks off where it is. just a suggestion. |
Creepinwolf « Citoyen » 30/10/2016 19:18
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Glowsticksss « Citoyen » 31/10/2016 01:04
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Please critique I shaded this time yay |
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something looks off but I'm not quite sure what it is |
Walianna « Citoyen » 31/10/2016 07:51
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glowsticksss a dit : |
Pandasoko « Censeur » 31/10/2016 18:02
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am ready also, any advice on anatomy and cleaner lines? |
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pandasoko a dit : What program are you using? |
Pumpernickelpup « Citoyen » 31/10/2016 20:13
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Not bad art, but feels like a MS Paint drawing. Maybe add some detail. MY TURN! |
Urallika « Citoyen » 31/10/2016 20:16
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Grincreep a dit : My english is quite bad, i really hope that all of my notes here are clear for you i like how you're drew her face, but her body have a lot of problems Onnicka a dit : You're copied my drawing and you asks critique for this? are you srs? о_о |
Walianna « Citoyen » 31/10/2016 20:23
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critique please. Yes,I know about left ear. Dernière modification le 31/10/2016 21:10 |
Notearl « Consul » 31/10/2016 21:45
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maybe someone can give me critique (since it's a long time I did something not on my computer)? Dernière modification le 31/10/2016 21:46 |
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Oh my so... this is where artists can correct their arts from other artists? ^o^ Amazing!!! I'll probably have mine critiqued ;u; So that I could Learn :D recently : xD critique ouo? E: I outlined it first instead. So i changed the pic Dernière modification le 01/11/2016 00:42 |
Glowsticksss « Citoyen » 31/10/2016 23:07
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walianna a dit : Hmm I see, thank you Looks like I better try another brush material |