Atelier 801
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| a bit old, but yeah  And yes, I know about the left leg and the hat |
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Derniers messages  Walianna  « Citoyen »
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| Critique for Milkybum redline
-Ears and eyes are too big.Hat too. -Neck is too long. -And try to use thin brush for tail. Critique for Stinkehcheze -Wrong head shape. -Ears and eyes are too big. -??? near the right ear. critique for Adobebolt redline
-Wrong head shape. -eyes are too big. -Wrong ears shape. -Feets are too small. -Tail is too tall. -Wrong body shape. -You missed neck. ---------- ----------
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Walianna
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walianna a dit : Thanks, but I personally dislike the tail style you used + the leg... :p |
| Walianna « Citoyen »
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Milkybum a dit : ok. |
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walianna a dit : I could, but I'm on my phone so it's harder |
Stevenunivs
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stinkehcheze a dit : I love the headshape you have going on here! Love snouts. The eye on the right should be closer in size to the eye on the left though. The far ear is also too small! Make it closer in size to the closer ear. Also, at the angle it should be at based off of the closer ear, you shouldn't see the 'inside' part of the ear. Draw it as if you're seeing it from the back. |
Stevenunivs
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Urallika  « Citoyen »
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stinkehcheze a dit : not really sure, but i'm tried  |
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 this one too please? its new |
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Milkybum a dit : http://prntscr.com/d1tj3d |
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pikuh a dit :  im not really good at this but: the lineart is too wonky and messy and i dunno is the hand ment to be floaty or not, but yeah and the coloring is pretty...bad? you could improve it by using magic tool (it keeps going off the line art) what art program do you use? |
Pumpernickelpup  « Citoyen »
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| No art to critique so.. ^ SKIP!  Redline!  -make the paw lines touch the paws -The hands were a little too big -the hair should flow and stuff That's all! MY TURN!  This is my profile pic. Critique it to your liking. (i drew it myself) |
Pumpernickelpup Griffincraft  « Consul »
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| ^This isnt a game thread... You dont have to post art for others to critique if you dont want to, and you dont have to critique others Could I get some critique with anatomy? A redline would be nice if possible  |
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Milkybum a dit : MEDIBANG paint |
Stevenunivs
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Yoakie
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| Pumpernickelpup « Citoyen »
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| ART: Redline!  -TONGUES. -The red cat does not have a mouth. -paw lines and claws |