Winterflurry a dit :

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this is a blue lineart. some limbs/body parts won't be connected since this just a rough draft of sort.

I'm having troubles with placing the umbrella behind the mouse and i need some tips on the anatomy

Maybe something like this for the umbrella?

Winterflurry a dit :

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this is a blue lineart. some limbs/body parts won't be connected since this just a rough draft of sort.

I'm having troubles with placing the umbrella behind the mouse and i need some tips on the anatomy

Keep in mind that if the umbrella is kinda over the shoulder and going behind the mouse, the handle is going to be angled towards the viewer and thus the umbrella behind the mouse will be at an angle kinda like this


You may see some of the 'outer' part of the umbrella but youre gonna see a lot of that inner.

You don't have to go super detailed, just as long as you draw the shape of the inner and then a shape for the outer.

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Winterflurry a dit :VoirMasquer

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this is a blue lineart. some limbs/body parts won't be connected since this just a rough draft of sort.

I'm having troubles with placing the umbrella behind the mouse and i need some tips on the anatomy

Keep in mind that if the umbrella is kinda over the shoulder and going behind the mouse, the handle is going to be angled towards the viewer and thus the umbrella behind the mouse will be at an angle kinda like this


You may see some of the 'outer' part of the umbrella but youre gonna see a lot of that inner.

You don't have to go super detailed, just as long as you draw the shape of the inner and then a shape for the outer.

Cloudoflames a dit :

Winterflurry a dit :VoirMasquer

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this is a blue lineart. some limbs/body parts won't be connected since this just a rough draft of sort.

I'm having troubles with placing the umbrella behind the mouse and i need some tips on the anatomy

Maybe something like this for the umbrella?

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thank you

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I feel like a few things are off on what I drew yesterday
So uhm..
Critique pls..?

Hair isn't plastered onto a head, make it flow out a bit. Eyepatch string should be just above the ear instead of near the top of the head. Arms seem a bit stiff and unreleastic (IMO).

This is still a WIP! I need some critique on this before I iron it. Might I also mention that this was an original piece by Cakeslice. I did get their permission to make this project.
the light blue flows in the dark \o/

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I feel like a few things are off on what I drew yesterday
So uhm..
Critique pls..?

Hair isn't plastered onto a head, make it flow out a bit. Eyepatch string should be just above the ear instead of near the top of the head. Arms seem a bit stiff and unreleastic (IMO).

Alrighty, thank you!

I drew a cat and a mouse
I feel like there's something wrong with both of the drawings, but can't seem to put my finger on it.

Astelyn a dit :

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This is still a WIP! I need some critique on this before I iron it.
the light blue flows in the dark \o/

very nice! just a few things to be fixed(though i know it'll be hard to do curved lines)

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Astelyn a dit :VoirMasquer

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This is still a WIP! I need some critique on this before I iron it.
the light blue flows in the dark \o/

very nice! just a few things to be fixed(though i know it'll be hard to do curved lines)

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-add these two beads (looks better imo)
-complete other feather outline
-round out the shaman mark
-round the ears as well
-a single black bead near the eyes?? remove if not necessary
-a loose bead!
-back line should stop there
-add tail, or separate from back (if that was the tail)

Thank you very much! I will fix most of these. I need another peg board for the tail, which is why there's a little stub. I have tried to round out the ear some more and I shall fix the forehead. The random bead around the eye was put there by acident (I guess I either forgot to move it or just put it there to see how it looked). I just noticed that the feather outline was incomplete. And I will add those two beads. Thank you again!

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Edit: Here is the finished look. Please critique now before I iron it.

Can I get a critiq on this?
And any way for me to improve?

Could I get a critique on this please?

Rainbowswag2 a dit :

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Can I get a critiq on this?
And any way for me to improve?

I'm not very good at critiquing art, but I feel like the tail needs to be down a little lower
Unless it's supposed to curve behind the body, like this:

Edit: Sorry, accidental double post

Astelyn a dit :

Xprincessj a dit :VoirMasquer

Astelyn a dit :VoirMasquer

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This is still a WIP! I need some critique on this before I iron it.
the light blue flows in the dark \o/

very nice! just a few things to be fixed(though i know it'll be hard to do curved lines)

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-add these two beads (looks better imo)
-complete other feather outline
-round out the shaman mark
-round the ears as well
-a single black bead near the eyes?? remove if not necessary
-a loose bead!
-back line should stop there
-add tail, or separate from back (if that was the tail)

Thank you very much! I will fix most of these. I need another peg board for the tail, which is why there's a little stub. I have tried to round out the ear some more and I shall fix the forehead. The random bead around the eye was put there by acident (I guess I either forgot to move it or just put it there to see how it looked). I just noticed that the feather outline was incomplete. And I will add those two beads. Thank you again!

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Edit: Here is the finished look. Please critique now before I iron it.

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i think you can iron it now, it looks fine to me!
(though you can always wait to see if someone else sees any issues)

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Can I get a critiq on this?
And any way for me to improve?

I'm not very good at critiquing art, but I feel like the tail needs to be down a little lower
Unless it's supposed to curve behind the body, like this:

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The blue outline is supposed to show what the tail MIGHT look like from behind. If the artist is imagining that the tail is like this, then in my own opinion, it looks a bit unnatural for the tail to curve a lot like that.

Yeah the tail is behind the mouse
but ok Ill try to work on the tail's cerve

Hello, can someone help me with this?

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Hello, can someone help me with this?

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The anatomy is horrible...ughhh
I hate drawing ears -__-

I'm not very good with anatomy myself but maybe this might help?

I noticed that on one of the hands there are 6 fingers and the other has 5 fingers in not sure if that was intentional but I figured might as well put that out there and the legs, on the bending leg, legs don't usually bend like that but instead bend at the knee.

For example if you try bending like that in real life I don't think it would be possible without bending your knee as well.

And for the ears what I like to do is not make it a straight up circle but a bit of a curve to it and I put it lower.

I also put the boob a little more outward and put the sleeves on the shirt to have those holes instead of just something slapped onto your skin I guess.

Hopefully this might somewhat help you ;^;

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Myscribbles a dit :VoirMasquer

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Hello, can someone help me with this?

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The anatomy is horrible...ughhh
I hate drawing ears -__-

I'm not very good with anatomy myself but maybe this might help?

I noticed that on one of the hands there are 6 fingers and the other has 5 fingers in not sure if that was intentional but I figured might as well put that out there and the legs, on the bending leg, legs don't usually bend like that but instead bend at the knee.

For example if you try bending like that in real life I don't think it would be possible without bending your knee as well.

And for the ears what I like to do is not make it a straight up circle but a bit of a curve to it and I put it lower.

I also put the boob a little more outward and put the sleeves on the shirt to have those holes instead of just something slapped onto your skin I guess.

Hopefully this might somewhat help you ;^;

Omg thank you! It really helps! ^-^
I didn't even notice the six fingers XD

You're welcome ! Glad I could help !!
^.^