Izupen a dit :

I drew a cat and a mouse
I feel like there's something wrong with both of the drawings, but can't seem to put my finger on it.

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I just realised I forgot to draw half of the mouse's tail, oops ^^''

Eyes on the cat seem weird to me, I think you should either put them closer together or shrink them.

Ebotthegreat a dit :

Could I get a critique on this please?

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Bumping this!

^ I wish to critique, but i'm very terrible... ;v;

can someone critique this? ;o;

i feel like something is out of place.
thx

Is there any way I can improve this little drawing right here?

Pandasoko a dit :

Is there any way I can improve this little drawing right here?

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The lines near the ears, tail, feet, and hair seem a bit confusing to me, since the colors on the lines seem brighter and lighter than what is colored inside. Try using brown or use black lines throughout the piece. I also think you should make the hair less stiff and loosen it out, especially the ponytail. Brief critique, since I am horrible at critiques in general

I think they are now clear because she was trying to make them transparent looking ?
But I do think it would look better if it had a black outline and consistent coloring, or simply just a black outline? In not sure you would have to try it out

sorry if the photo is too big ;(

I've finished it.I'd like advice on the shading but on other things too ofc

ack I accidentally double posted

All I can do for you is show you a general construction of her body.

Can somebody please critique this? It's heavily influenced by my style and it's meant to be cartoonish, but i tried to put something kinda realistic there, too. Also, the character in the drawing is Trico from The Last Guardian

hey hey can you critique this

[ it was my side of an art trade with another transformice user ]

critique???????

Digitalpanda a dit :

I feel like a few things are off on what I drew yesterday
So uhm..
Critique pls..?

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it just seems very flat + you need to work on anatomy, i suggest drawabox

Ebotthegreat a dit :

Ebotthegreat a dit :VoirMasquer

Could I get a critique on this please?

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Bumping this!

pretty good! maybe make the ears a little bigger?
and this may be a stylistic choice, but the super thick lines reaaaally throw off this piece, and I can't explain why, and I love thick lineart! you have good coloring and i love how painty it looks, but theres just something about the lineart thickness thats throwing me off. sorry i cant be of more help :(

Katssuumy a dit :

i feel like something is out of place.
thx

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i draw with a mouse excuse the rlly shakey lines

wowie kinda hard to get answers here
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Zakryah a dit :

Ebotthegreat a dit :VoirMasquer

Ebotthegreat a dit :VoirMasquer

Could I get a critique on this please?

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Bumping this!

pretty good! maybe make the ears a little bigger?
and this may be a stylistic choice, but the super thick lines reaaaally throw off this piece, and I can't explain why, and I love thick lineart! you have good coloring and i love how painty it looks, but theres just something about the lineart thickness thats throwing me off. sorry i cant be of more help :(

Ah ok, thank you so much! Any help is greatly appreciated!!

@a0xis well, looks like I'm still not getting along well with anatomy.time to practice :pp thx for that tho

Could someone redline/critique this for me? I'm unsure of his hands and torso shape.