Bublamorce a dit :

Can somebody please critique this? It's heavily influenced by my style and it's meant to be cartoonish, but i tried to put something kinda realistic there, too. Also, the character in the drawing is Trico from The Last Guardian

Katssuumy a dit :

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pls help for the past 2 weeks ive been hating this drawing bc something seems REALLY off i need help

first of all the colours are S T U N N I N G. keep that the way it is because the colours just match really well and i lovE THEM AA--

anyway, lets get to the first problem. your lineart kind of looks "flat", due to the lack of line thickness in your drawings. try making parts of your lineart thicker and thinner, like in the clothes and hair.

you could always look up tutorials on how to do this whole lineart thickness thing instead of just guessing where you should make the lines thicker and thinner, because then it might look wonky.

i recommend testing out different things and seeing which one you like best.


second thing is the hair. you know where it connects to the head? hair isn't that thick when its tied up. you should try and draw it thinner towards the head and THEN draw it thicker. what's also bothering me is the extreme angles the pigtails have. try making them more
s m o o t h and c u r v y.



thirdly is the clothing. see where the "belt" thing around the waist is? if its supposed to hold the clothing together, it should be closer to the body.

^ kinda like this

OF COURSE, it depends on if the clothing itself is loose or tight. if the clothing is tight, it should cling onto the body like its clinging for its dear life hahha--
try also studying folds and stuff like that, because the folds in the picture look kind of random?? this ALSO depends on the thickness of the fabric, what TYPE of fabric it is and other stuff. not that i know about all that stuff haha--


FINALLY, just look up tutorials!! they always help with fixing up your drawings the way you like them, and just generally have cool tips and tricks!


hope this helped you in some way and i wish you the best of luck as well!!! <3

Katssuumy a dit :

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pls help for the past 2 weeks ive been hating this drawing bc something seems REALLY off i need help

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Cloudoflames a dit :

Please critique
Please also teach me how to draw eyes. Facial expressions, my biggest weakness >~<

The drawings is supposed to be the person acting surprised because he created a spark of light in his palm

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the tearduct is aligned with the top lid

Beatrice9812 a dit :

Critique for Glowsticksss

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: I don't really have anything to say about the girl playing the violin, so I'll focus on the violin. Violins are played up high, with the chin resting on the chinrest. The violin is also missing some parts, such as the chin rest and the tailpiece, I've inserted a diagramed picture of one here for reference. Lastly, the violin is huge compared to the girl holding it.

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A0xis a dit :

It seems as though you've shoved her cervix into her diaphragm. When you were sketching, right, you threw the curve of her waist where you presumed a good space for it would be, but you've accidentally created a mutant that, if the over-saturated robe was not there, you would immediately recognise as a monster right out of Human Centipede. Smartiewolf did a good compensation by pretending you'd wrapped her ribs over a high waisted petticoat and forcing her neck back into position by moving her upper body into a 3/4ths perspective, but even that tactic hasn't given her chest room to breathe (please don't tell me you started her legs under the cross wrap, god, there's only so much you can hide under a kimono)

Here's a tip, put that lady's neck back in the centre of her spine and don't try drawing a human again until you google "female drawing proportion" or "female drawing breakdown" into google images.

Here's something you probably don't realise, but the best anime artists can absolutely, unequivocally, without hesitation, draw a realistic human.

It's just too bad your reference was drawn by a two-bit hack (now that i recognise her), but thats not your fault.

Beatrice9812 a dit :

Critique for Glowsticksss: I don't really have anything to say about the girl playing the violin, so I'll focus on the violin. Violins are played up high, with the chin resting on the chinrest. The violin is also missing some parts, such as the chin rest and the tailpiece, I've inserted a diagramed picture of one here for reference. Lastly, the violin is huge compared to the girl holding it.



If it's meant to be a cello, the proportioning is more accurate but you shouldn't be able to see the very bottom because that should be set on the floor and the girl should be sitting down to play it. If it's a bass it will stay pretty much the same but you still won't be able to see the bottom of the bass even though the girl will stay standing up.

Stephspeach a dit :

Beatrice9812 a dit :VoirMasquer

Critique for Glowsticksss

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: I don't really have anything to say about the girl playing the violin, so I'll focus on the violin. Violins are played up high, with the chin resting on the chinrest. The violin is also missing some parts, such as the chin rest and the tailpiece, I've inserted a diagramed picture of one here for reference. Lastly, the violin is huge compared to the girl holding it.

It appears to be a cello or ground bass - not a violin XD.

If it's a cello then the cello should not be held up mid air like a guitar. A cello is supposed to be set on the ground and the player should be sitting in a chair, but it could be a double bass which is played standing up.

Here's an example of cello vs ground bass being played

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