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Just something small but the shoulders seem unsymmetrical as one is longer than the other

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Just something small but the shoulders seem unsymmetrical as one is longer than the other

Yeah, I see, I was thinking that it somehow looks wrong too, thank you!

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You need to practice drawing from life on more simple geometries before you tackle a face or hand.

yeah, im still experimenting with... stuff. but i guess youre right, its the right thing to do. if i just start with the hard stuff i'll never advance
however, i still want to finish that drawing... ive been working on it for some good hours, all the work cant be in vain. it only took me 2 hours to do the body and all that

@Akinoko, I've been studying character design all week and I can yell you the main points;
Your character presentation is extemely weak, a good character design can show what the character is all about without any words or prompting, this means gesture, expression, and pose (though stay away from any pose that would obscure the character) aren't to be thrown out of a window just because you can use words as a crutch. Your color choice is aweful, if she's a magical wizard why does she keep her hair poop coloured and her clothes... How could she hunt anything when wearing bright purple? It's a self insert, isn't it.
Anyway, what you drew here is just a barbie doll outfit, it has no substance or personality at all.

@Kat Two hours on a drawing is nothing you pleablian. get on my level but seriously, two lost hours is better than than three or four lost hours if you continue.

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@Akinoko, I've been studying character design all week and I can yell you the main points;
Your character presentation is extemely weak, a good character design can show what the character is all about without any words or prompting, this means gesture, expression, and pose (though stay away from any pose that would obscure the character) aren't to be thrown out of a window just because you can use words as a crutch. Your color choice is aweful, if she's a magical wizard why does she keep her hair poop coloured and her clothes... How could she hunt anything when wearing bright purple? It's a self insert, isn't it.
Anyway, what you drew here is just a barbie doll outfit, it has no substance or personality at all.

@Kat Two hours on a drawing is nothing you pleablian. get on my level but seriously, two lost hours is better than than three or four lost hours if you continue.

oh no i meant 2 hours as in on the body. the rest of the hours was sketching and i think it took like 7 hours in total
but youre right its really not worth the time since i probably cant finish it anytime soon. i guess i will just try my hardest to do the arm for now

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Could I get some critique on anatomy + design consistency? (Of the fur, the mask doesnt have a set design yet)

The anthro drawing: the arm closest is too thin, and should have some sort of fat in there, instead of just bone and muscle. Looks very disproportionate to the legs. The leg furthest away looks bigger than the leg closest, so a leg fix on either would look better.

The weird strand of hair on the tail isn't really a thing that happens with cats. It looks wrong and out of place. Even so, it wouldn't be able to stand upright like that on its own, as it owns virtually no base.

Other than that, everything else seems fine.

Alright, I'll make sure to try to fix the arm+leg! However, even though the tail's single hair isnt really a thing, I'll be keeping it since I kind of like how it looks, Thank you!

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@Akinoko, I've been studying character design all week and I can yell you the main points;
Your character presentation is extemely weak, a good character design can show what the character is all about without any words or prompting, this means gesture, expression, and pose (though stay away from any pose that would obscure the character) aren't to be thrown out of a window just because you can use words as a crutch. Your color choice is aweful, if she's a magical wizard why does she keep her hair poop coloured and her clothes... How could she hunt anything when wearing bright purple? It's a self insert, isn't it.
Anyway, what you drew here is just a barbie doll outfit, it has no substance or personality at all.

@Kat Two hours on a drawing is nothing you pleablian. get on my level but seriously, two lost hours is better than than three or four lost hours if you continue.

Thank you for helping me out!
Actually, she was based off of me, since I have brown hair and brown eyes and always wearing a ponytail
Also I got the idea with the bright colours from MMORPG's, since they don't always wear dark green colours to blend in
Actually I should try poses and more expressions, but I just wanted a normal design to show off how her outfit looks and how she looks standing straight
I'm learning to do poses
But in all that, thank you again!

i was literally drawing this upside down because i forgot mspaint allows you to rotate your drawing but yes
the head (what am i talking about the whole body actually) is bothering me is there something wrong with it?
also gore i guess

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Do you honestly expect anyone to fall for that.

Kat; Her shoulderblades seem to be flush against the floor but the shoulders and head seem to be forced too high upward, as though she was just getting up, which grossly inflates the upper body. I dont think the face is too bad but I dont watch anime to be able to say. Your other problem might be the boring low slanting action line which starts from the knees and draws attention to the anatomy issue at the other end. You can do something more interesting with a girl on the floor.

I could be wrong, but I think drawing in the hair too early is what threw you off.

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Her shoulderblades seem to be flush against the floor but the shoulders and head seem to be forced too high upward, as though she was just getting up, which grossly inflates the upper body. I dont think the face is too bad but I dont watch anime to be able to say. Your other problem might be the boring low slanting action line which starts from the knees and draws attention to the anatomy issue at the other end. You can do something more interesting with a girl on the floor.

in my eyes i think the main issue was the head, which, indeed is way too high up, but in all honesty i dont have a good eye, i guess i will try and re-do it sometime, might as well use the flip feature, i dont think anybody cand regularly draw upside down lol...
and as you said, the shoulders are also too high up because.. i guess i was trying to make it look like she was forcing herself to stand up? lol im not really good with poses. i really wanted to use a reference for this but no way in hell a reference like that exists, so all thats left is my own imagination.
thank you anyway, i have a long way to go until i fully understand anatomy (or at least put more effort into it. i guarantee you that i could draw a semi-realistic portrait if i tried really hard)

oh by the way haha youre not wrong, the hair is one of the first things i drew at first, along with the head

Semi-realism isn't good enough, you need to strive for something bigger than your current abilities. If no exact reference exists, reference several images at once to map where your character ought to be (but thats such a boring and cliché pose, cute girl dying in a pool of blood, that if you dont find a reference for it you'll find a better one with better composition and character. Try key words like 'low perspective' also)