Ciarakiwisky a dit :

Yes but I have tons of requests, a couple of art trades, homework, instruments to practice and school and AAAMMMMMGGGGG

Take as long as you want. c:

ALRIGHT! The round 2 reviews are done! Please notify me if I missed your application, or if you have any other questions.
I remember Ash saying that this round was worth 7 points, so this is how I will judge your entries:
Does the color fit in with the drawing? (2 pts max)
Is that drawing creative and original? (3 pts max)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show? (2 pts max)
My apologies if this method is different, but please bear with me.


Iceviaya
http://i.imgur.com/l40sQ4G.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
We would have preferred that you use more of the selected colors, red and brown, in your drawing. The minimum use of the colors was stated to be about 50%, while this drawing had about 30-40% of these colors. (1 pt)
Is the drawing creative and original?
The use of expression on the mice’s faces is very well done! The lineart is clean and consistent as well. As far as the perspective goes, though, it seems pretty routine. My advice for you would be to change that once and awhile. (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes! The concept is very understandable. (2 pts)

Jadeblood
http://i.imgur.com/FIbBhOH.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
The dialogue was amazing, though the idea was a bit cliché (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, however I would advise you to elaborate on the situation. Where does the cannon come from, and what is that ominous voice coming from the side? (1 pt)

Beautyiscool
http://i.imgur.com/YMN32Bg.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
As far as use of the colors, I think it could use some work. You did include the required colors, but did not really incorporate them in the drawing as much as we would like. (1 pt)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Expression is nice, but the perspective and situation is not very original. (1 pt)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes. The drawing is very clear. (2 pts)

Darklonewolf
http://i.imgur.com/tudZjy1.jpg
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes. You did a very nice job with color use-- using it to color the mice to give them
Is the drawing creative and original? (2 pts)
Again, yes. The expression on the demonic mice’s faces gave it an eerie aura that was a creative change to the category. As a bit of advice, I would add more expression to the shaman’s face. Nonetheless, the perspective of the drawing was very original, and let us see things from the shaman’s point of view. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
It is. It was a good idea to add the sentence on the top, that made the picture easier to understand. (2 pts)

Methusalah
http://i.imgur.com/3YG1tgA.jpg
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, you used the colors very well in the picture. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes! I liked that you used the poisson d’Avril tradition, that was a creative twist. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
The joke is pretty clear, but the use of the nouns “him” and “her” was a bit confusing, at first. I couldn’t exactly tell who you were talking about. That might just be me though, so I’ll give you the points. (2 pts)

Antikati
http://i.imgur.com/hMY2F3X.jpg
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, the color use was very good. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
I would have liked to see more of an original setting, but the use of perspective was good. (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, it is very clear! (2 pts)

Friend
http://i.imgur.com/oK520aX.pngi
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
the color describes my very mood (10/10)
Is the drawing creative and original?
this poetry moves me to tears (five stars and a medal)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
this is clearly a metaphor to the degrading horrors of social status drama in north america (10000 likes)

Peashaman
http://i.imgur.com/zktC1H6.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes-- the color choice was good and fit our standards. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
It would have been nice if you could change the perspective of the drawing, but I like that you added the cliché survivor comments in speech bubbles. That was a nice touch. (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Not exactly... if you could clarify what is happening and where that third speech bubble is coming from, that would be nice. You can never assume that the viewer knows what is going on and has played survivor before, so you must make the picture make sense to everyone who sees it. (1 pt)

Kayleekitty
http://i.imgur.com/Uk9bNu6.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, the color use was very good. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Assuming the mouse is getting hit with a cannon, I would advise you to change up the picture a little bit-- it could use more originality. (1 pt)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Unfortunately, it was difficult for me to grasp what was going on. I would suggest using darker shades of brown to separate objects. (1 pt)

Thefourthone
http://thefourthone.deviantart.com/art/April-Fools-Contest-366976762
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes. Thank you for using the advised colors. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes! Though I’ve seen these pranks before, they would not be considered cliché. Additionally, it was very creative of you to use a comic-like and lineless style to draw. Well done. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes. Your handwriting was very clear and easy to read, and the pictures illustrated what was being said with good expression on the mice’s faces. (2 pts)

Sourisplum
http://i.imgur.com/Cmx08R6.jpg
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Okay I totally have to go to the chiropractor after staring at this but yes! I liked how you used the green to shade, it gives the drawing a very nice tone. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes. I love how you used pastels to draw, it’s gorgeous. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
I have to admit, the cannon threw me off a little. Who is going to get hit with the cannon, the sleeping mouse, or his friend whos about to pour water all over him? Though as for overall clarity, the setting and is very clear, so I’ll let that slide because it’s probably just me who is confused on this. (2 pts)

Huggabear
http://i.imgur.com/6kvSAGg.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
I’m just going to ignore all the negative space in this drawing and say yes, the colors are nice. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes, the idea is very original! And the expression on the mouse’s face is cute. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, I believe. The shaman is using an anvil god to kill the survivors, and the lineart is very defined. (2 pts) Also marry me.

Hainkeru
http://i.imgur.com/DQEIhcb.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes! The use of color was very very nice here- you made it fit very well with the tone of the picture. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes, it is very original. I love the perspective of the picture, it is very creative, and the expression on the shaman’s face is excellent. Additionally, I appreciate the attention to detail you have. It adds a very good effect to the picture. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, you made the idea very clear and the objects defined. (2 pts)

Princesdan
http://i.imgur.com/wHxY6m3.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
You used the colors, but I would advise you to use red more to create a sense of mood. I won’t penalize on this though, because it wasn’t specified in the directions. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
It lacks originality, but I like that you used expression on the mice’s faces. (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
I’m not precisely sure what’s going on. (1 pts)

Vividia
http://i.imgur.com/eK4udu6.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, I like the mood the color creates. Very nice. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes! I like the idea, and the point of view is very creative. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, the concept was very easy to grasp. Nice job. (2 pts)

Meisftw
http://i.imgur.com/NIoxvM6.png
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, very nice use of color. I like how you incorporated the colors into the setting. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes, the drawing exhibits creativity and originality. It has a unique perspective. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, the objects and mice are well defined and I can tell what is going on in the picture. As a tip, though, I would make the pranking aspect more clear. Who’s pranking who? (2 pts)


Musiukaz
http://poloisindahouse.deviantart.com/art/Transformice-April-Fools-comic-366978576?q=gallery%3Apoloisindahouse&qo=0
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, I especially like how important the colors were to the story. It fits in really well! (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes, the concept was very original and the execution of the comic was creative. (3 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
The comic was clear and easy to understand. Additionally, your handwriting was very easy to read. (2 pts)

Vivihi
http://i.imgur.com/Z96Keas.jpg
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, you incorporated the colors very well. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
As a piece of advice, I would give the drawing a more original point of view. However, I liked how you used a variety of mice to give us a good representation of what the survivor room is like. (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, the drawing is very clear and easy to follow. Additionally, your handwriting is clear and easy to read! (2 pts)

Alikha
http://i46.tinypic.com/6e0pxd.jpg
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, the way you incorporated the colors fit into the setting and the mouse’s outfits worked well. (2 pts)
Is the drawing creative and original?
The prank is a bit cliché, but I can tell you put a lot of thought into it. (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, the drawing was very neat and I could easily tell what was going on! Good work! (2 pts)

Ciarkiwisky
http://imgur.com/bB4BuId
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Yes, the color fit in the with the drawing very well. Is that drawing creative and original? (3 pts)
Unfortunately, I've seen this pose many times... though I really like how you drew the expression well and paid attention to detail. (2 pts)
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
Yes, the drawing has a very clear concept. Good job! (2 pts)

just a note but zammycat's is actually by musiukas, they just posted it for him

but im proud of you for doing this so quick ily!

omg o.o I got through.. Just.. barely XD

E: I guess i'll work on round 3's lineart o.o

Haruhitastic a dit :

just a note but zammycat's is actually by musiukas, they just posted it for him

but im proud of you for doing this so quick ily!

Fixed, thanks for letting me know!
And no omg I procrastinated so much
I still have to finish the OP update and get it through Ash

ohmygodyesyesyesyes i got in i think lel
kay time to start with my entry ~
\\noreplytomarrymething

Ciarakiwisky a dit :

Meep I'm not on there D;
To save you from going through all the pages here is mine: http://imgur.com/bB4BuId
I know, the ear is weird, and when I drew this I was really bad at feet.

Sorry about that! I edited it in :) And you're fine, you're clearly improving and that's all that matters. We don't judge on anatomy in this contest anyway.

Huggabear a dit :

ohmygodyesyesyesyes i got in i think lel
kay time to start with my entry ~
\\noreplytomarrymething

heart shatters into a million pieces
don't leave me

OMG I PASSED!!!! :DDDD

Oh btw: I finished my third round drawing early go see it at page...23 of this thread.

Vivihi a dit :

OMG I PASSED!!!! :DDDD

Wait wasnt it worth 4 points for round 2.

Oh btw: I finished my third round drawing early go see it at page...23 of this thread.

Holy Cheesus thats like,3 pages from here.

Littlechedda a dit :

Holy Cheesus thats like,3 pages from here.

Yep. I just wanted to do it during the time I had. I wonder who will win...

Yay c: I passed. Now I have to do a quick draw by the 25th with all these exams

I got all 7 points? OMFG WOOP WOOP

huzzah cant w8 till 3rd round results

Ciarakiwisky a dit :

It's not even the deadline yet ;/
I'm still sketching and planning mine e.e

I know I can't wait until the results!

Shigary a dit :

Sourisplum
http://i.imgur.com/Cmx08R6.jpg
Does the color fit in with the drawing?
Okay I totally have to go to the chiropractor after staring at this but yes! I liked how you used the green to shade, it gives the drawing a very nice tone.
Is the drawing creative and original?
Yes. I love how you used pastels to draw, it’s gorgeous.
Is it clear what the drawing is trying to show?
I have to admit, the cannon threw me off a little. Who is going to get hit with the cannon, the sleeping mouse, or his friend whos about to pour water all over him? Though as for overall clarity, the setting and is very clear, so I’ll let that slide because it’s probably just me who is confused on this. (2 pts)

So did I get 2 points? It's kinda unclear for me as most everyone else has the amount of points every other line but I only have just those two, especiaally since you praised everything

Also that chiropractor comment lol

If you need help understanding the terribly confusing picture, the sleeping mouse's friend means to wake him up with a bucket of water, but does not know he is about to be hit with a stray cannon.

Sourisplum a dit :

So did I get 2 points? It's kinda unclear for me as most everyone else has the amount of points every other line but I only have just those two, especiaally since you praised everything

Also that chiropractor comment lol

If you need help understanding the terribly confusing picture, the sleeping mouse's friend means to wake him up with a bucket of water, but does not know he is about to be hit with a stray cannon.

Oh whoops. No, no, you got seven ;-; I'm really really sorry, I forgot to add them at the end of each question. Here, I'll fix that.
Man I should really double check everything again to make sure I didn't miss anythng else.

Ciarakiwisky a dit :

It's not even the deadline yet ;/
I'm still sketching and planning mine e.e

Lol, finished mine a long time before the 2nd round results.