Sorry that this is non-Transformice piece, but I want some critiques or tips for the position or/and shading.
Also the style is not supposed to be anime, it's just kind of, it'll help if you give some advice for just human anatomy, don't need to think of anime- looking. Also take it easy, I'm not that perfect at english XD
Thanks!

Shading and a bit of anatomy.

Can someone critique this please?

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Can someone critique this please?

Aw, it's so cute ^-^

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Can someone critique this please?

Maybe try to make the lines less shaky looking and smoother, the expression seems like they unsure of singing, I think a more confident expression would suit it better but if the unsure expression is what you were going for that's fine too, the only really noticeable thing that stand out to be would just be the shaky lines

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Can someone critique this please?

Maybe try to make the lines less shaky looking and smoother, the expression seems like they unsure of singing, I think a more confident expression would suit it better but if the unsure expression is what you were going for that's fine too, the only really noticeable thing that stand out to be would just be the shaky lines

i will try to but it is hard because im drawing with a mouse
thank you for the critique!

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Silianaja a dit :VoirMasquer

Can someone critique this please?

Maybe try to make the lines less shaky looking and smoother, the expression seems like they unsure of singing, I think a more confident expression would suit it better but if the unsure expression is what you were going for that's fine too, the only really noticeable thing that stand out to be would just be the shaky lines

i will try to but it is hard because im drawing with a mouse
thank you for the critique!

what program do you use? there's a way to stop the shaky lines depending on the program you use.

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Can someone critique this please?

Maybe try to make the lines less shaky looking and smoother, the expression seems like they unsure of singing, I think a more confident expression would suit it better but if the unsure expression is what you were going for that's fine too, the only really noticeable thing that stand out to be would just be the shaky lines

i will try to but it is hard because im drawing with a mouse
thank you for the critique!

what program do you use? there's a way to stop the shaky lines depending on the program you use.

i use paint tool sai (but the stabilizer isnt working) and often fire alpaca

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Can someone critique this please?

Maybe try to make the lines less shaky looking and smoother, the expression seems like they unsure of singing, I think a more confident expression would suit it better but if the unsure expression is what you were going for that's fine too, the only really noticeable thing that stand out to be would just be the shaky lines

i will try to but it is hard because im drawing with a mouse
thank you for the critique!

what program do you use? there's a way to stop the shaky lines depending on the program you use.

i use paint tool sai (but the stabilizer isnt working) and often fire alpaca

yaahh.. paint tool sai's stabiliser doesn't work if you don't have a tablet, which i think is dumb.
for firealpaca, go to "correction" and click the number, there will then be a dropdown menu.

Spoiler

click the numbers and mess around and see which one works best for you.
i draw with a mouse, and i typically use one of the highest numbers for lineart, and one of the middle ones for colouring.