A0xis a dit :

Push yourself, be dynamic with poses and camera angles

Atearatareta

Your style is very aesthetically pleasing and cute, and the darker sclera is interesting and unique. I like your choice to put the cat whisker symbol behind them.

I would suggest you move away from drawing floating torsos and crossed eyes and work on your confidence with anatomy in general. As you grow as an artist you will develop and lose many bad habits and these are ones many artists learn when they are insecure in their ability to draw fullbodies. Although drawing hands is hell, artists must force themselves to draw them to get any better at it, which also makes them easier to draw as the artist develops an understanding of the object and learns shortcuts and methods such as sketching the hand as a glove or a collection of simple shapes first. This applies to your art as well, as you need to practice fullbodies and anatomy to get good at them.

Basgetti

Your fluff+hair are very good and natural looking and the style is a good blend of cartoonish and detailed. Your lines are clean and smooth and you make good use of line variation.

Sidemouth is bad. Stop doing sidemouth.
The nose looks a little odd as it is. I think it throws off the perspective. It makes the muzzle look as though it's supposed to be foreshortened yet everything else suggests it's mostly turned to the side.

The dark triangle of pure black directly below the chin could be made to work with the shading instead of being put there just because.
Speaking of which, where's your light source?
The image gets darker toward the ear but there are seemingly random shadows on the mouse's (strangely muscular) neck so I'm assuming there's light coming from the left-front-top or left-front-bottom, especially since the dice and piercings are getting hit by light from the left. The shine on the hair also seems random -- remember, shadows don't make the image look good just by being there. I would suggest practicing shading and light-sources. The glasses also need light to reflect off them.
The necklace stands out a bit too much in my opinion and its brightness could be toned down.



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Bethdacat a dit :

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