cant wait for the new chapter ;-; ... hope u get better soon

bump , this thread shall survive !!!! (sorry for double-posting)

I'm not sick anymore!

New Chaptah

Chapter 6

I was still in shock after I found that Super was still alive. I know that the time for me to rise to the top has come though. Rage and sorrow filled in me. The surge of emotions overwhelming my mind. I felt like I could go berserk at any moment.

"We need to talk about Delatex..." soft and shallowly said by Super.
"SHUT UP!" I shouted.

Her eyes started to sink into her darkest memories of the battle...or the attack...
Tears flowed out of her eyes and she cried and sobbed.

My eyes wide open, scared at what I've become.

I'm a monster...A fucking crazy monster...

All I could think of was me and my insane words. I was scared. Truly scared of what I could do without meaning to. My mind was put into submission.

"Wake the fuck up." someone told me.

It's bright...
My eyes are burning from this brightness. Not even my own shadow was there. Only white, pale white walls. No, not walls. Just white floor going on forever.

"Godamnit, open your eyes you wont be blinded." the anonymous voice said, with the sound of sipping.

I opened my eyes from the protection of my eye lids.
Like it actually helped at all.

"Wi-Will?" I asked.
"Yes, cheesus. Will you wake the fuck up. I found you lying on the floor." Will said.
"Wait, what?" I asked in confusion and frustration.
"Are you dead too? Or are you just fucking with me? Or am I fucking with me? o.O" Will was confused too.

I looked around the empty room. Only a white table with some cups in it. I walked up to the table. The cups were filled.

"What's this?" I asked Will.
"It's some clear water-ish drink. Tastes pretty good, just hope I don't get drunk on it." Will said, reaching for another cup.

I grabbed one and took a sip.

I coughed, it was quite sweet. It was sweeter than honey and sugar water.

"Heh, same thing happened to me first time." Will said.
"Eck, uck. This is too sweet." I said with a hoarse voice, still coughing.

Fwoosh.

Something flew by.
I turned around, saw nothing, but white.

Fwushhh

The same noise.
I turned around again.
Still nothing, but white. I think I'm going to crazy. Like I'm losing it again.

"Look up, dumbass." a deep rumbling voice commanded.

I turned my head upwards. I saw the dragon, yet again. What an encounter. Sharp teeth, but not a long body like you would expect. It had a human sort figure. Scaled arms, legs and wings. Still a head of a dragon. It was black with red in it as well.

"You're caught in your mind. Same with your friend, the annoying girl one." the dragon spoke.
"What's your name?" I asked switching topics.
"Dragnus, now if you don't mind I'll explain things," Dragnus said.
"I'm waking you up, and by then, the sword will be grasped by your hands, gripped so fierce your knuckles will feel like snapping like twigs. Be prepared, or you might just die." Dragnus said with tension within his voice.

Flash!

A huge white flash had popped up into my eyes.
I was in the real world.

My knuckles hurt so bad, Dragnus was right.
I saw an owl, no 5 of them!
Next thing I knew my tail was on fire, and I had black and red fur.

‹You feel the power of a dragon now don't you?› Dragnus's words were in my mind.

I had a new power.
An owl flew straight at me ready to claw my face up. Blood splattered across the floor, on my face and against the blade. Who's blood was it?
I had yet to find out...

[To Be Continued...]

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Not that long, but enough to satisfy you I believe. Will be bringing action back soon. Thanks for staying up with my stories.

Yay ^_^

YES , FINALLY ! tomorrow is there a new one *-* ?!

There won't be a new one until Tuesday I think. Maybe tomorrow.
I'll be going off course of the storyline in the next post because it'll be the Thanksgiving Special for me and others who celebrate it.

happy to hear it !!!

[Thanksgiving Special]

"GIVE ME SOME TURKEY!" Will shouted.
"Calm down, there's still be some leftover for you." Super said.
"Just a little more until I finish cutting." Analetta said as she thrusted the knife down straight into the turkey.

I sat and watched Analetta cut the fresh, tempting turkey up and take a couple of slices for herself.

"ALL RIGHT! I'M NEXT!" Will shouted in enthusiasm to taste the turkey.
"Aye, don't there'll be enough after Will eats some." Impure said as he pulled down his hat to shade his eyes.

Will had taken 6 slices and a 3 scoops of gravy. The aroma of the room lifted everyone's spirits. We were thankful for the food and the good weather, besides the turbulent clouds.

"All right, who's leading the thanks to Tigrounette and the rest of the staff?" Redditguy asked after taking a bite of his slice of turkey.

I could tell he was enjoying it as much as everyone else. I wasn't sure if there was enough for everyone. The group was immense, larger than expected.

"I'll start I guess." Adm said, standing up to start the speech.
"We thank the staff of Atelier801 and Transformice. We thank you for always being there to help ban hackers, defeat bugs, and fix problems. We are loyal to you, thank you, Transformice." Adm had finished the speech.

Everyone sat back down to enoy the nice meal. I guess nothing really went on in their minds after the speech. I still had the feeling...

That some of my friends are not able to enjoy Thanksgiving...

[End Of Special]
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Admshumaker really hasn't been found yet. Like I said, going offcourse. I will bring new characters in soon, so sign up for it if you want to join.

Places Open for Main Characters : 2
Places Open for Minor Characters : 4

main characters -- meh ^^ (sorry if i am being rude) AND jake u did an awsome job ONCE AGAIN

I wanna be a main character,Im a boy :3

Can i be main character, i am a girl and i LOVE pokemon.
Btw, awesome story.

Sorry no updates in a while, huh?
I bet you're all wondering, "What happened, where's the new chapter D:"
Well I was out on Black Friday and Thanksgiving took up some time. You know family stuff. Not to mention school work has been driving me out of schedule.

No new chapters for this week sorry, but I'll be sure to bump a new chapter next week, or on the weekends perhaps.

So I just read the applications for characters. I have decided who will be in and who wont be.

Accepted :
- Niknol
- Sewaddlepwns [You need to state your gender first then I will implement you as a pokemon loving character]

Rejected :
- Laddee [Reason] You need to try to specify what you want to be and also your gender. Apply later with this information

So yes that is basicly all that I'm doing for this day. Back to homework, and then off to sleep.

Thanks for reading!!!

I'm back and ready to post a new chapter.

Chapter 7

I stared directly at the owl. I found that the blood...

Was Super's...

Blood dripped from her mouth as she was drooping lifelessly in the tallons of the evil owl. My mind raced, and so did my heart as it was beating rapidly.

I felt as if my heart was on fire, just like my tail was.

I ran life a fireball and struck the owl's wings as it dropped Super's body. Feathers flew out of it's side as it howled in pain and despair. My mind was only focused on killing. Killing every single enemy in sight. Once again I swung my blade hard into the owls neck and sliced through its flesh and skin.

I heard the blade slicing through the air in light speed as I struck it over and over again. Blood was splattered everywhere. The owl's feathers with no longer white, but a deep red from the stain of the blood. The other 4 owls had started charging.

Surrounded, my mind told me to strike, no matter how outnumbered I was.

Despite the fact that I was outnumbered and surrounded, I struck and fought on. Slicing, dashing, striking. Anything I could do to attack. I made a good attack combonation of striking the side, then the other side and then straight for the head or neck. Pain seared through my arms and wrists after every single blow I delivered. The agony had made me feel as if I was a voodoo doll of some sort. But I fought on, and I would not give up until my body was devoured and demolished.

"AHHHHH!" I shouted as I sliced an owl's wing off.

Blood spewed out of the wing socket. It had sprayed me straight in the face. My sight was blurred and red from the massive amount of blood that has been sprayed or splattered into my eyes and body. I could be considered a walking ruby with this much red on me. The areas of which my fur was white, was now red.

"Only 2 left to go." I murmered to myself.

I gritted my teeth together for a strong impact. An owl had flew and struck me with a powerful headbutt.

I could have sworn my ribs had cracked, but I felt no pain. Only fire, the fire of will. It came back around, this time ready to shred me. I was prepared as I countered its sharp tallons with the tip of my blade. I turned the owl off-course into a wall. It had knocked itself unconscious. I took my chance and stabbed my blade through its skull and pulled the blade out of it afterwards.

"You're the only one left eh?" I asked retorically.

"Cawww!!" the last owl screeched as it came charging straight at me.

The screech was so deafening I couldn't strike back when it had struck me in the left arm with it's tallons. I felt the pain and blood spew out as it soared back at me. This time I managed to stumble away, but I'm not sure about the next. My wrists were aching, my spine was about to crumble like pastries, and my vision was blurry. I'm losing too much blood, and too fast.

As it turned around to strike me for the last time, I dropped my blade, and grabbed its leg. Hand to hand combat was all I had left. My paws were aching too much to continue weilding a blade. The flame on my tail had grew brighter. I climbed unsteadily, for my vision was terrible and the owl was trying to shake me off. It was difficult to actually reach it's neck since it was so large in size.

"Hyahh!" I shouted.

I smacked it in the side of the head. It through it off to the side for a bit. I smacked it harder, but this time in the neck and it dropped some height. I was almost out of energy. I've wasted a ton of it clenching onto this owl and climbing it. I punched for the final time in the side of it's head, so hard I heard the skull crack...

"Cawwwwww..." it screeched one last time before it fell, along with me, straight into the floor.

It landed head-first. As my vision was blacking out, I saw that it was dead.

I felt no more flame, no more fire of will. If there was anything I was feeling, it was success and wonder...

[To Be Continued...]
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Well I'm done for the day, I'll be on later maybe. This chapter has been action packed huh? Sorry if you got confused in this, I understand because I haven't made a chapter in a while. If you were confused, please read chapter 6, it explains a ton.

Thank you viewers!

Koolstars a dit :

How is this not locked and in the fanart section with no arts at all?...Oh wait stories are art too ^^' I'm sorry

It is fairly rude to comment on a thread like this, because you should already know what arts are allowed within the Fan Art Subforums. Also I would appreciate it if you deleted any rude comments inside of your post.

Bump!

Bump!

Nice story!

Admshumaker a dit :

Nice story!

Thanks, I might add Selvidi into it later.