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nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu


i need to change the point of my charrie ;0;

Wingcestor a dit :

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nuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu


i need to change the point of my charrie ;0;

sorry for the disappointment ._.
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on a second thought, I'll just put the cfm one up first

bumping for the very first chapter !

The Mysterious ID server

Chapter 1

DING, DING, DING! The alarm clock went off. Linxus flailed around in search of his hat. He quickly got out of bed and rushed down stairs.
"C'mon guys! We're gonna miss our boat!" Linxus hollered. Cindy opened up her eyes and yawned. She turned around and went back to sleep. "We're gonna be late!" called out Linxus in a hurry. Half asleep, Joel slowly got out of his bed and walked down to the kitchen. He turned around and glanced at the clock.
"5:30am, have you lost your mind?" Joel yelled in frustration. He sighed and opened up the cellar door. It looked as empty as his stomach. Joel searches through the cabinets. One square of cheese. "When was the last time we gathered cheese?" Joel asked. Linxus shrugged and walked back upstairs.
Kia finally woke up after Linxus slammed the door several times. She quickly got dressed and hopped down stairs.
"Why so optimistic?" Linxus asked. Kia smiled back at Linxus and grabbed a small piece of the remaining cheese. Joel slowly sat down on his small navy blue chair and took a small bite of the cheese.
Cindy woke up to the smell of cheddar cheese. She sprang up from her bed and searched through her room for her ribbon. As soon as she got dressed, she ran down the stairs and took a huge bite of the sweet smelling cheese.
"You couldn't have saved some for me?" Linxus sighed. Looks like there was no breakfast today.
Cindy and the others grabbed their spy gear as fast as lightning. Everyone rushed outside of the hut and quickly walked down town.
"So where did Tig request us to go next?" asked Kia in wonder.
"To the ID server.." Joel quickly replied. Kia looked at Joel in excitement. She trotted to the shore in glee, wondering what the ID server would be like.
The boat keeper stared at the team looking like he was half dead. Joel dropped him a square of cheese.
"So this be your crew?" sneered the old boat keeper. Linxus slammed the small desk and replied in a sharp tone.
"Is there a problem?" Linxus asked, whisker to whisker with the boat keeper. The boat keeper grinned and gave him a slip.
"Not at all." smiled the boat keeper. He took a sip of beer from his rusty looking mug and waved back at the team. "Good luck, you'll need it." whispered the boat keeper in a creepy voice, as if each word slithered in his own mouth. Joel grabbed Linxus' arm and dashed to the medium sized boat, with the boat keeper a length of a whisker behind.
"Into the boat!" cried out Cindy in fright. The team barely made it to the boat alive. They quickly pulled up the sails and rowed the boat away from shore. All they could hear was the boat keeper screeching at the end of the shore..

Amazing k *-*

Iwuvcheesed a dit :

Amazing k *-*

yes thank you '-'

tht first chapter was aaawwwweeesssooome~~ can't wait for more ^^

Flutterbest a dit :

tht first chapter was aaawwwweeesssooome~~ can't wait for more ^^

thank you, I shall start on the second chapter soon ^-^

Reading through everything
It's amazing so far, Bengal *-*

Kiokosama a dit :

Reading through everything
It's amazing so far, Bengal *-*

heheh, thanks

I try my best '-'

Dis is awesome
You are awesome

Littlechedda a dit :

Dis is awesome
You are awesome

why thank you '-'
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I'm really lazy but one of my best friends requested me to start the next chapter so I'll probably start it tomorrow `-`

actually I'm writing it right now lol

bumping for de second chapter
tell me if you find any errors there please

The Mysterious ID server

Chapter 2

Joel quickly searched through his spy belt for his binoculars. He fell and looked back at the small green dot, which was where they once were. Immediately, his binoculars popped out right at the end of his belt.
"Found my binoculars!" announced Joel, although everyone else knew. He quickly turned around and stared at the endless ocean, wondering if something was there. Linxus sighed and rolled his eyes, Joel knew he was looking like an idiot. Kia glanced at Joel, wondering what the hell he was thinking.
"C'mon Joel you're supposed to be looking for ID not looking at the ocean." yelled Linxus from behind. Joel put his binoculars down and sat on the small box.
"I'm guessing you've never heard of Nick." replied Joel. The team stared back at him as if he was drunk.
"Pff, he's not playing death match here." Linxus said without a doubt. "Besides, if he was playing death match here, I highly doubt he'd be all the way over here." Cindy stared at Linxus in confusion. "I'm guessing that I should probably tell you who Nick is." Linxus sighed. "Well, h-" Joel quickly cut off Linxus. They both glanced at eachother and got back to rowing the boat.
"I think I see an island.." Kia hollered in excitement. The team rushed to the front of the deck. They all stared in wonder at the mysterious yet beautiful island. Small palm trees, hot pink flowers everywhere on the bushes. Joel even noticed the huge trees from far away!
The team quickly rowed to the small dot in the ocean. They finally landed on shore of the mysterious server.
Linxus immediately grabbed his walkie talkie from his belt and hooked up his small report hammer.
"Team Oppa just landed to ID." called out Linxus to Tigrounette. He could hear heavy breathing from the walkie talkie. "Tig? You there?" Linxus asked, wondering what he was doing.
"I-I'm here." replied Tigrounette in a shallow voice. "J-just do your job."

i only read the last part cuz its cool and what happened to tig?!

Wingcestor a dit :

i only read the last part cuz its cool and what happened to tig?!

Who knows..... c:

Wait, shall Imae appear in the forth chapter? :o

ALSO. THIS IS FREAKIN JUICEY.

Imaewsome a dit :

Wait, shall Imae appear in the forth chapter? :o

ALSO. THIS IS FREAKIN JUICEY.

actually, there's probably gonna be more chapters than that :'
I'm not sure how many chapters I'll write lol

although the end would be the epilogue (which I'm sure will be very exciting)

and yes I try ''

Anymore room for your story? *-*

Name: You could just call me Choo
Which Chapter you want to be in: Any :3
Description: Im usually quiet but I love to get things done fast. I love listening to music which is where you'd probably find me doing when not busy. I love spy kind of stuff. I also love using dangerous weapons. *-* Im strange e.e lol. I also love darkness.
Picture:

Choobots a dit :

Anymore room for your story? *-*

Name: You could just call me Choo
Which Chapter you want to be in: Any :3
Description: Im usually quiet but I love to get things done fast. I love listening to music which is where you'd probably find me doing when not busy. I love spy kind of stuff. I also love using dangerous weapons. *-* Im strange e.e lol. I also love darkness.
Picture:

Adding!~

wait is your character a boy or a girl?

Bengalstar a dit :

Adding!~

wait is your character a boy or a girl?

Oh boy lel

Choobots a dit :

Oh boy lel

okie that's what I thought lol
thanks !

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