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[Fanfiction] New Divide
Sirusthemice
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WHY
DO
AXEL
AND
DAKOTA
LOOK
LIKE
DUCKING
SIBLINGS
WHAT IS THIS

#pgget
Sirusthemice
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:: Chapter 1 "Introductions"

::5 years later after the Invasion::

“Get up you lazy mice asses! We’ve got work to do!” shouted an ebony-haired mouse with a tan fur. Her white scarf was slightly swaying in the wind, along with her hair. Entirely dressed in black with ripped pants and a long coat she stood on the top point of the camp. A slight groan was heard from inside the tents and a redhead mouse climbed out, shuddering in only her ruby red blouse with cut up sleeves.

“Ama, no need to shout to the whole god darn camp,” She said shaking her head in an attempt to get rid of the grogginess. The dark blue like the night sky feathers on her hat flinched in the cold, Nordic wind.
“What else am I actually supposed to do if you won’t get up? Go around your tents and poke the whole squad so you wake up?” Ama exclaimed as she hopped of the top point an walked over to the redhead. “Besides, aren’t you supposed to be in the infirmary, Raw?”

“That’s right…we should hurry, there are many injured from the last mission,” a mouse with a dark blue flower in her hair said. Pulling her dark jacket tighter around herself, she shuddered.
“Yeah. Totally. Fine. Let’s go then,” Raw replied with dripping sarcasm to a girl mouse who’s name was apparently Flutty.

“What the hell is going on here? I can’t concentrate properly!” exclaimed a male with icy blue hair and a blindfold over his eyes, though he wasn’t blind. Everybody turned their heads to him, but in the same moment a certain raven-haired girl mouse showed up in a cloud of smoke, which got blown away instantly. Before she could even begin her sentence, she was cut off by a mouse with an asymmetrical haircut.

“B-7,1-1, shut. Have your breakfast before you go anywhere, I had to scout the whole goddamn backside of the wall to get us some fresh cheese. We’re running out of supplies you know.” She said as she put down her backpack on the snow-covered ground. Dark bags hung under her eyes.
“Sleep debt?” asked Ama. “Siiri, what happened?”

“You’re putting me on watch day and night, cheesus Christ,” Siiri replied, tightening her scarf and shuddering ever so slightly. She stepped away, sat on a box and released a long sigh.
“Hey, I never thought you could get this stuff anymore!” Flutty said as she munched on the cheese. After a few minutes, they were all finished.

“Right then ,we’re off to the infirmary!” announced Raw as she and Flutty walked in the direction of the main camp building.
“That reminds me, where have you been, Dakota?” asked Siiri. “I assume you were scouting but I would’ve seen you, otherwise.”

Dakota looked as if she was about to throw a hissy fit and tried really, really hard to keep it in. Ama cracked up and started laughing.
“I take that as a yes, then?” said the girl mouse with her ear decorated by silvery piercings as she reached out for her sniper rifle. “I’ll be out on the outpost, see ya’.” Siiri said and waved a slight bye as she jogged away back to the outpost.


a/n: tried to squeeze most of you guys in in one chappie.introduction chapter sort.WE'LL GET TO THE REAL STUFF IN CH 2 OR 3 I PROMISE.
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kool chap is kool *0*
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Iwuvcheesed a dit :
kool chap is kool *0*

danke
arigatou
<w>
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Sirusthemice a dit :
awesomechapter

chap is so beautiful ;w;

v yw lovelyness (glomps you instead)
Sirusthemice
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Noobforevah a dit :
chap is so beautiful ;w;

^^ come here let me give you a hug for being a wonderful person

yes thank you
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Your story is really cool so far!

Can't wait for more.

(personally cannot wait for gun needed parts :D)
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Beautyiscool a dit :
Your story is really cool so far!

Can't wait for more.

(personally cannot wait for gun needed parts :D)

thank

just wait

(OHOHO we'll get to the mission in ch3 or somewhere around that)
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SORRY BUT AT TIMES I'M GETTING CONFUSED ON WHO'S WHO IN THE CHAPTER O.o

Wait nvm :P

Dis chapter is swagalicious.
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Nekoava a dit :
SORRY BUT AT TIMES I'M GETTING CONFUSED ON WHO'S WHO IN THE CHAPTER O.o

Wait nvm :P

^^ yes thank

got it all in place now? -v-
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Sirusthemice a dit :
got it all in place now? -v-

-u- amazing author is amazing.
much amazing.
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darn im already drawing ponified versions of these guys
Sirusthemice
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Iwuvcheesed a dit :
darn im already drawing ponified versions of these guys

can you not ALREady post it here when youre done

Noobforevah a dit :
-u- amazing author is amazing.
much amazing.

yes
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ooo
ill do my form soon
<------- is amaze
Sirusthemice
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who wants a ch2 teaser
ill probably start writing soon

vv ok fine

typing right now
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Sirusthemice a dit :
who wants a ch2 teaser
ill probably start writing soon

yes please.

or I'll force ya.

much thanks

very much thanks.
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Ooo I loved the Chapter! c:
Can't wait for the teaser! ;)
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Squeakishly a dit :
Ooo I loved the Chapter! c:
Can't wait for the teaser! ;)

i have the perf appearance for axel note me ingame if you want to know
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:: Chapter 2 "Heading Out!"

::45 minutes later that morning

“We’re going out to scout the inside walls, but far from the actual heart of the city,” Mitsuki said, “Or rather, YOU are going to do that. I’m staying here directing you.” Flutty shuffled her thumbs uncomfortably.
“Flutty, you’re staying at the camp. The rest, get ready. Get your weapons and ammunition. We need to be light if we want to come back quickly and without injuries,” Siiri said, and everybody else nodded in agreement. And with that, the squad went to their tents to grab their weapons.
Assembled near the outpost, there they were.
“Falcon 4-1,Helix 6-3,Scarecrow A-4 and Demon 1-1, you’re out!” was heard through the megaphone. The barb wired steel gates opened and the squad ventured out.
“We need to scavenge some supplies, too.” Siiri said before they ventured out.

::Outer walls

The outer wall were crawling with patrols. The team had to hide and be as stealthy as possible. Siiri rolled in behind a pile of snow, flicking through the targets. A slight pang was heard as the sniper mouse released the first bullet in years, with her conveniently silenced rifle. Siiri rolled in behind an another pile of snow and aimed for an another target. This surely raised an alarm but nobody knew what was killing their patrols. Obviously it was a sniper, but who? Sprinting up on a hill and hiding at a high point the sniper mouse began to count her kills.
“One…Two…Th…Three…Four…”
“Five,” said a male voice behind her. Next second she knew, her rifle had been pulled away and she was tumble weeding down the hill, right into the patrols. Oh my Shaman, was everything she thought before the sniper mouse hit her head and blacked out.
“Eagle 4-1?Eagle 4-1?!” Mitsuki blurted out into the microphone. “Scarecrow A-4?Demon 1-1?Helix 6-3? Do any of you know what happened to Eagle 4-1?”
“Negative. We lost her,” replied Ama. “We don’t know what happened to her.”
“Wait I think I saw her tumbling into the patrols…” Raw said into the microphone. A synchronized ‘WHAT’ was heard from Mitsuki and Ama. Dakota didn’t respond, for some reason.
“6-3,1-1,A-4, go rescue 4-1 NOW. THIS INSTANT.” Mitsuki angrily shouted into the mic.
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Sirusthemice a dit :
:: Chapter 2 ::
::45 minutes later that morning
“We’re going out to scout the inside walls, but far from the actual heart of the city,” Mitsuki said, “Or rather, YOU are going to do that. I’m staying here directing you.” Flutty shuffled her thumbs uncomfortably.
“Flutty, you’re staying at the camp. The rest, get ready. Get your weapons and ammunition. We need to be light if we want to come back quickly and without injuries,” Siiri said, and everybody else nodded in agreement. And with that, the squad went to their tents to grab their weapons.
Assembled near the outpost, there they were.
“Falcon 4-1,Helix 6-3,Scarecrow A-4 and Demon 1-1, you’re out!” was heard through the megaphone. The barb wired steel gates opened and the squad ventured out.


horrible teaser.

no not horrible. amazing teaser.

yes plz hug me.
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