Anniebuscus a dit :

After a long time of inactivity and the era of "Noob's Diaries", Darkness Unleashed is back!
And I just don't know when I should write the next chapter...
Oh, and I need some epic ideas for the next chapter :)

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Chapter 3: Palace of the Possessed

All the humice continued our journey, until they ended up going to a palace. But this wasn't an ordinary palace. Noell shivered and said: "How about we shouldn't go in here?"
Cream scoffed. "Don't be a sissy. Let's go!" They ventured in the wide corridor of the palace.
Skylar said: "Maybe we should split up? Ursula, Lillithia, Link. Come with me."
Shard was with Foxie J, Cream and Hailey. Cymru came with Meifee, Lucy and Renisha. Noell was left out, but she was brave enough to head to the 4th corridor, which had more ragged curtains and bloodstained walls.
Skylar's group saw a figure. A translucent figure floating around.
Link stammered: "W-Who are you?!" Next to the group there was a mirror. On it there was the spirit's name written with blood. "Sieling," said Lillithia. "why are you here?"
Now something else was written. On a wall. It said: "I was a princess in a huge kingdom. I became betrayed by Enes and his merciless personality.."
Ursula knew that feel! When everyone looked away for a second, Sieling dissappeared.
Link gasped. "Where did she..?!" She saw Sieling when she turned back. But now her outfit, her face, her humice paws were bloodstained.
Ursula sighed and thought: "Did she kill our allies? If so, she might have thought that they were allies of Enes." Just then, Meifee and Lucy ran up to Lillithia, Skylar, Link and Ursula. Meifee said: "Please don't trust that humice ghost! Lucy is hurt!"
Link and Skylar gasped when they saw Lucy's wound. Apparently it was a slash... of her own crystal sword.
"We saw the ghost just now.." said Ursula. Behind her there was a huge puff of smoke swirling. Runes surrounded Skylar's group, Meifee and Lucy. Noell appeared out of nowhere.
Lillithia thought: "So Sieling was Noell?! I'm confused..." She thought that Noell might probably read her mind, because she said: "I killed Sieling. Don't trust her or she can just slay you..." She wore a robe which apparently gave her divine protection and the power of light. She healed Lucy's wound. Suddenly, all the others went to the meeting place where the corridors start.
"We must escape this place as fast as possible. Sieling might avenge." said Cymru. Just then, the exit door mysteriously locked itself. "There's no escape..." Everyone heard this eery whisper. Will the team ever escape?

Sirusthemice a dit :

If shes wearIng her prIestess robes noell Is granted dIvIne protectIon and the power of lIght and healIng spells :B shes way more powerful In thIs but rarely wears the robes

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Chapter 4: Escape

A mysterious spirit flew around the room with the speed of light. Was it Sieling? Skylar and Link charged their bows, Hailey charged a beam of nature, Cymru and Meifee were ready to throw their swords. "This nuisance will be stopped soon." said Shard. "Foxie. You'll be my shield."
Foxie thought: "Wait. He wants me DEAD, if he guards himself... Ooh, a lovely sacrifice." Skylar shot an arrow, but she missed. Link shot an arrow - she missed as well. Cream threw her chicken.... she missed too. Luckily, the chicken flew back to Cream's head unharmed.
Sieling laughed evilly. "Haha, look at you struggling. You'll never stop me." All the team couldn't remember the moments before they were locked in... a room with magic spell books and potions. Magicians could just help their allies escape, because they specialize in these magic stuff. But the only escape choice was... to make a super potion which grants all the possible powers. Hailey, Noell and Cream found it easy. But it wasn't easy as they thought. The room was haunted by Sieling herself. Every room is haunted by this spirit. To defend, Hailey grew grass that could trap spirits.
Magicians were making the ultimate potion when suddenly... Everyone heard a screech coming from the side where Hailey grew grass traps. Sieling was caught! Shard pointed his blade and angrily snapped: "Now tell me the truth. WHY are you hurting us?"
"I swear to Dragostea, I can't control my urge to kill.... Let me go..."
Shard sighed. "Alright." He slashed the grass traps.
"I promise, I won't kill....." Sieling suddenly dissappeared to an unknown place... Everything in the palace turned normal. All the bloodstains dissappeared. All the humice escaped unharmed.

Sirusthemice a dit :

another priestess robe noell :B just has better colours than the trad one

Techtriostep a dit :

good luck with the comic! probably nice to read

though from experience, making a comic is not something to be taken lightly.

But none the least, good job.

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Chapter 5: Oblivion

But did they escape? The door actually turned out to be a door to oblivion. But was it really oblivion? No.
"Sieling tricked us!" hissed Lillithia. "Now we're in...." Suddenly, they fell through the oblivion and fell in a chamber with scratched and bloodstained walls. Renisha saw a humouse. It had wounds and scratches all over its body. But it apparently was a ghost. It flew through the wall of the chamber.
"Welcome..." a familiar voice said. It was Sieling.
"Sieling, you won't get away with this!" snapped Lucy. A purple beam shot out of nowhere and hit Hailey.
"I already have." said Sieling and flew away. Hailey's eyes turned red and glowed with a fiery glow. The glow quickly disappeared.
"Hailey... Are you okay?" asked Skylar quietly. Suddenly, Lillithia pointed at something. In the other side of the chamber there was a giant blood red crystal.
"What is it?" Noell asked.
"It's Sieling's power source. It's powered by souls of innocent humice." Foxie J replied.
"The rumours are true... Sieling is the daughter of Selina..." Meifee whispered. She heard these rumours when she was exiled. Hailey whispered: "Mei... Help... End this misery of me and the humice which suffered..." Her soul was sucked in the power source. Foxie J shot a hole in the crystal. The crystal shattered. The souls escaped. Sieling screeched in agony as her power was lost. The chamber turned all pitch black. Everyone were teleported to the overworld. A surprise awaited them. Spirituals!
Molbee grunted. "Our plan failed! Destiny, I ran out of ideas for the next plan!"
Destiny sighed. "Me too. Neatze?" Neatze shook her head. She said: "Gosh, why me? What about Erin and Oliver?" Erin smirked. "I have a plan!" She whispered something to Destiny.
Shard sighed. "Looks like they're immortal." Meifee facepawed. "I know! If we destroy Selina, they'll be destroyed as well!" And so they ignored Spirituals and continued their journey.

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Chapter 6: Hidden Power of an Ally

"Hey guys, do you remember that Dragostea gave us a mysterious chest?" asked Renisha. She was curious of what was actually in the chest. The other allies forgot about that because Spirituals interrupted them that time. "Oh, the chest of Drago!" some snapped.
But the new allies muttered: "What chest? Did they stop somebody or what?" Lillithia opened the chest. Everyone revealed the secret of why Drago became so godly. Beams of light flew in the heart of a chosen one. Apparently it was Lillithia. "Hey, why did SHE get the power? Why we can't get some of the godly light?!" Shard asked.
Foxie replied: "It's because she has the power of light and she's nicknamed: "The Godly Paw". The power of light is very important when it comes to fight gloomy opponents. She has only a small part of it - the power which shows out when the paws touch a rival with power. The rival is stunned and knocked out." Lucy, Skylar, Link and Cream gasped. What did Lillithia do now? She made a branch float.
"W-what is t-this m-magic?!" Hailey stammered.
"Lilli, we need to use this power wisely, otherwise it's dangerous..." snapped Ursula. Meifee and Cymru agreed.
"Telekinesis," thought Noell. "that sure is dangerous..."
Hailey scoffed. "Let's go."
Everyone went to a corrupted forest where spirits might revive themselves. Spirituals hid behind a tree. Neatze whispered: "Erin? Are you sure this plan will work?"
"Of course!" Erin snapped. "These traps will work for humice like them! Look!"
Shard almost fell in a hidden hole with spikes. "Foxie! Hold me!" he shouted.
Foxie pulled him. "I know who's making these traps. Spirituals!"
"What do you mean?" asked Meifee. "we stopped them!"
"After we trapped Sieling that time, probably she revived Spirituals SECRETLY." muttered Hailey.
Destiny sneaked out from their hiding place to see if our humice team is caught.
Cymru's whiskers twitched. "Psst! Spiritual incoming!" he whispered. Lillithia was prepared, when Destiny and her mates came. She threw Erin with her new power, Erin fell on Oliver, and he fell on Molbee. "How did you...?" Neatze asked.
Lillithia laughed. "Who's your creator now?"
Neatze growled.
"Come at me. Destiny, you too." snapped Lillithia. She unleashed her power into an ultimate level. Everyone were blown away, but Lilli's allies weren't hurt. And so they continued their journey.

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Chapter 7: Gloomy Soul Eaters

But our team was blown to the center of the gloomy forest. Lucy's ears lowered as she heard a screech. "Don't say it's Sieling.." she mumbled. Meifee ran up to a humouse which got attacked by... a soul eater.
"Help!" the attacked shaman shouted. Shard pulled the shaman and slashed the soul eater humouse's paw. It disappeared.
"Are you okay?" asked Ursula.
"A ghost..." muttered the shaman and screamed.
"Don't worry, we won't hurt you!" said Hailey.
"Huh? A witch... a demon humouse... Are you sure?" asked the shaman.
"Yes. We saved you from that beast!" Meifee squealed. "What's your name, sham?"
"Mishinotaku. But call me Mish."
He got up and brushed the dust from his fur. "Waaait... Are you the humice who saved the Shaman School from chaos?" he asked.
"Yup. But these four probably hadn't heard." replied Renisha.
"Seven, Reni. I, Mei and Ursula count as well." muttered Cymru.
"You know, I think I should leave you, guys... Mish will replace me. Will you help stop the spirits?" Ursula asked. "Farewell..." she whimpered as she flew to the sky.
"I will. I have seen a few spirits and soul eaters around." said Mishinotaku.