beautyiscool a dit :

Spoiler

Chapter three part three

Derrin grimaced as he neared the building where the meeting was going to take place. He already knew things were getting tense, and to add to that irritating knowledge, he suddenly sensed another presence that stood out strongly from the rest of the agents. He cringed. It was Reline Hazer. He didn't know why she was so visible compared to the others, but as he ran the thought over in his mind it was probably because she took a lot of interest in him, well more like an interest in Shadows Gleam. She'd always give his horse sugar cubes or strawberries when he came back to Transformice, and yet, she always acted so suspicious and wary of everything accept with newer agents.

This was only one of the many things that confused him when it came to her. He remembered that she started out really nice and friendly when she first met him, as though she expected them to be best buddies that very instant. Of course Derrin hadn't liked that either, but in some ways he preferred it to how she acted now. Which happened out of nowhere too, and after that she'd grow more distant and suspicious with each day that passed. Derrin found out a few weeks later that she did this with everyone, and he couldn't figure out why which bugged him like a fly buzzing at his ear. He liked knowing things, which was why he traveled and explored so much of the world outside Transformice, in order to know more.

Reline pretty much ruined all of that! How could he claim to know so much when he couldn't figure out the actions of a subordinate? It was ludicrous!

At least with Reline though, it was interesting. With everyone else it just irritated him, he did not want to talk, he did not care about someone leaving cat stickers all over the offices and prisons after visiting them, and he did not want to get a drink of coffee. Why he had to come here and suffer with these noisy mice was beyond him, but he had to come this time. And so, with that in mind his resolve renewed and he entered the building.
It was large and open, and faintly resembled a school gym. Derrin saw mice leaning against walls, chatting like nothing was wrong. How stupid could these agents be? They had been called to an important meeting, not a get together! He groaned inwardly and didn't bother to hide his displeasure when he glanced around the room. Newer recruits who saw him started, and stood staring at Shadows Gleam and his rider with a quiet awe. The older ones who had been around for a longer time looked up at him once and made sure to keep out of his way, and the ones who had been there even longer (or were just plain stupid/oblivious) walked straight up to him and said hello.
One of these was a mouse named Ace. Derrin didn't understand why he always bothered him, much like how he didn't understand why Reline insisted on bothering him despite her suspicious attitude. Ace usually didn't talk a lot, and at first Derrin thought he wouldn't have to worry about him, but he was wrong. When he'd first met him everyone assured him that Ace wouldn't be a bother. What a bunch of liars He thought bitterly, remembering the first thing the black haired mouse had done was smile and talk to him, at great length. This had surprised others as much as it had him, and Derrin noticed a few of the female agents staring at Ace almost longingly, which caused him to grimace in disgust. Of course the mouse they were actually staring at ignored the expression and continued to try and talk to Derrin. Why? He had no clue. Derrin knew he wasn't a pleasant person, in fact he thought of himself as a downright jerk and thoughtless dingbat, so why would anyone bother talking to him?

Derrin grunted, clenching his teeth together in frustration as Ace strode over to greet him. He decided that if he had to suffer this he might as well dismount and feed Shadows Gleam. He quickly got off the horse and led it toward a strange structure with a wooden door, a net full of hay on one wall, and a wooden box full of wheat and other grains on the other, not to mention the strange piles of clean hay on the wooden floor. Derrin led his steed into the stall and carefully unsaddled him and hung up his harness and other riding gear on iron hooks that stuck out beside the hay net. Ace had followed him and was leaning on the lower half of the split wood door, staring at Shadows Gleam.

"He's a strange thing." He said softly, watching with an almost curious look on his face. Derrin grunted, letting him know that he acknowledged his presence. Sighing, he stopped what he was doing and turned toward the blonde haired mouse. He obviously wanted or needed to say something, so Derrin just wanted him to hurry and say it.
"Well, what is it?" He crossed his arms and glowered at him.

Ace put on a puzzled and irritated frown "We're still missing some people. Con and Warren haven't showed up yet." Before Derrin could reply the doors to the building were thrown open and a brown blur sped through the opening shouting "WE'RE HERE! WE'RE HERE! HI GUYS! HELLO! YAY WE MADE IT, DID WE MISS THE MEETING? HI HELLO!"

sohotomi a dit :

"the female agents staring at Ace almost longingly"
excuse me while i just take a moment to
just
YOU GO ACE, YOU GET THOSE LADIES!

flutterbest a dit :

Aww Warren and cats <3 so cute

beautyiscool a dit :VoirMasquer

Spoiler

Chapter three part three

Derrin grimaced as he neared the building where the meeting was going to take place. He already knew things were getting tense, and to add to that irritating knowledge, he suddenly sensed another presence that stood out strongly from the rest of the agents. He cringed. It was Reline Hazer. He didn't know why she was so visible compared to the others, but as he ran the thought over in his mind it was probably because she took a lot of interest in him, well more like an interest in Shadows Gleam. She'd always give his horse sugar cubes or strawberries when he came back to Transformice, and yet, she always acted so suspicious and wary of everything accept with newer agents.

This was only one of the many things that confused him when it came to her. He remembered that she started out really nice and friendly when she first met him, as though she expected them to be best buddies that very instant. Of course Derrin hadn't liked that either, but in some ways he preferred it to how she acted now. Which happened out of nowhere too, and after that she'd grow more distant and suspicious with each day that passed. Derrin found out a few weeks later that she did this with everyone, and he couldn't figure out why which bugged him like a fly buzzing at his ear. He liked knowing things, which was why he traveled and explored so much of the world outside Transformice, in order to know more.

Reline pretty much ruined all of that! How could he claim to know so much when he couldn't figure out the actions of a subordinate? It was ludicrous!

At least with Reline though, it was interesting. With everyone else it just irritated him, he did not want to talk, he did not care about someone leaving cat stickers all over the offices and prisons after visiting them, and he did not want to get a drink of coffee. Why he had to come here and suffer with these noisy mice was beyond him, but he had to come this time. And so, with that in mind his resolve renewed and he entered the building.
It was large and open, and faintly resembled a school gym. Derrin saw mice leaning against walls, chatting like nothing was wrong. How stupid could these agents be? They had been called to an important meeting, not a get together! He groaned inwardly and didn't bother to hide his displeasure when he glanced around the room. Newer recruits who saw him started, and stood staring at Shadows Gleam and his rider with a quiet awe. The older ones who had been around for a longer time looked up at him once and made sure to keep out of his way, and the ones who had been there even longer (or were just plain stupid/oblivious) walked straight up to him and said hello.
One of these was a mouse named Ace. Derrin didn't understand why he always bothered him, much like how he didn't understand why Reline insisted on bothering him despite her suspicious attitude. Ace usually didn't talk a lot, and at first Derrin thought he wouldn't have to worry about him, but he was wrong. When he'd first met him everyone assured him that Ace wouldn't be a bother. What a bunch of liars He thought bitterly, remembering the first thing the black haired mouse had done was smile and talk to him, at great length. This had surprised others as much as it had him, and Derrin noticed a few of the female agents staring at Ace almost longingly, which caused him to grimace in disgust. Of course the mouse they were actually staring at ignored the expression and continued to try and talk to Derrin. Why? He had no clue. Derrin knew he wasn't a pleasant person, in fact he thought of himself as a downright jerk and thoughtless dingbat, so why would anyone bother talking to him?

Derrin grunted, clenching his teeth together in frustration as Ace strode over to greet him. He decided that if he had to suffer this he might as well dismount and feed Shadows Gleam. He quickly got off the horse and led it toward a strange structure with a wooden door, a net full of hay on one wall, and a wooden box full of wheat and other grains on the other, not to mention the strange piles of clean hay on the wooden floor. Derrin led his steed into the stall and carefully unsaddled him and hung up his harness and other riding gear on iron hooks that stuck out beside the hay net. Ace had followed him and was leaning on the lower half of the split wood door, staring at Shadows Gleam.

"He's a strange thing." He said softly, watching with an almost curious look on his face. Derrin grunted, letting him know that he acknowledged his presence. Sighing, he stopped what he was doing and turned toward the blonde haired mouse. He obviously wanted or needed to say something, so Derrin just wanted him to hurry and say it.
"Well, what is it?" He crossed his arms and glowered at him.

Ace put on a puzzled and irritated frown "We're still missing some people. Con and Warren haven't showed up yet." Before Derrin could reply the doors to the building were thrown open and a brown blur sped through the opening shouting "WE'RE HERE! WE'RE HERE! HI GUYS! HELLO! YAY WE MADE IT, DID WE MISS THE MEETING? HI HELLO!"

I love all the characters so much....so much

sohotomi a dit :

"the female agents staring at Ace almost longingly"
excuse me while i just take a moment to
just
YOU GO ACE, YOU GET THOSE LADIES!

sirusthemice a dit :

sohotomi a dit :VoirMasquer

"the female agents staring at Ace almost longingly"
excuse me while i just take a moment to
just
YOU GO ACE, YOU GET THOSE LADIES!

ladies' man.

BUT ACE
MAKE UP YOUR MIND
ONE ONE

• boop
• beep

sirusthemice a dit :

this was
kind
of
sad

sohotomi a dit :

i was so happy and all of a sudden my heart just diED

i thought he was dead

was still sad and th-

i dont even know im just
bye this was beautiful

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