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[Fanfic] The Rise of The Dead Shaman
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Antonio plz. 0-0

U brainwashed those poor cats from Dandere~chan Luna. ;w;

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dittodoritos a dit :
Antonio plz. 0-0

U brainwashed those poor cats from Dandere~chan Luna. ;w;

YOU GET ME
HE USED HER I SWEAR
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dittodoritos a dit :
Antonio plz. 0-0

U brainwashed those poor cats from Dandere~chan Luna. ;w;

YOU GET ME
HE USED HER I SWEAR

O-O

btw this thread created on my birthday .o.

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Can we have another mouse
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oceanpawgal a dit :
Can we have another mouse

thiS
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Eh? Didn't you forget about Mango? Yes,I'm annoying...
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Eh? Didn't you forget about Mango? Yes,I'm annoying...

Not all characters come in all chapters, that would be too long..
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Mandymuis a dit :
bublamorce a dit :
Eh? Didn't you forget about Mango? Yes,I'm annoying...

Not all characters come in all chapters, that would be too long..

Hah,thanks xD
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OH. MY. JELLYFISH!

Sorry for the EXTREMELY LONG delay!
To make up for it, i'd write not ONE, not TWO, but THREE chapters!

(Sigh, this is going to be a long day......)
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~CHAPTER SEVEN~
In the cave, and out of the cave



After the cats, Antonio, Rose and Luna were walking, they reached the cave.

"Ugh! This walk just ruined my hair! Now its greasy from all the sweat!" Luna complained.
"Shut up and stop complaining. Dont be such a drama queen!" Antonio rolled his eyes at her.
"I know right!" Pharah agreed.

Everyone else's mouth hanged open when they saw the inside of the cave.

"You made a prison?!!" Arianne exclaimed in shock.
"That's right! And this prison is where YOU sewer rats belong!" Antonio cackled.
"Hey! You the sewer rat here! Your ego is as big as your BELLY!" Pharah snarked.
Zoey stared at Pharah, blinking, trying to say "Duh, everyone knows that."
"Enough. Throw them in!" Antonio demanded. He had enough drama for one day.

The cats raised their behinds and..
THUNK!

Before they knew it, they were thrown in.

"Hi." a Shaman said
"Tanzanite!" Zoey exclaimed and hugged the Shaman.
"We're so glad we found you! I thought you were dead!" Violet joined in the hug.
"And look! There's Mango over there!" Paulo pointed to an orange mouse.
"You must set everyone free. There's not much time!" Tanzanite alerted.

Everyone looked at Pharah.

"Huh? Why me?!" Pharah asked.
"Your the genius here!" Zoey said.

Pharah thought about her plan for a moment, and a lightbulb popped onto her head.

"Thats it!" she exclaimed.
"What's it?" Mango asked, scratching her head.

Before Pharah could explain, she wiped her glasses lens and perched it back onto her snout.

"Okay guys. Listen up!" she shouted.

Everyone huddled with Pharah.

"Tanzanite, make the cats come closer and make them sleep. Then Arianne, you know how braid things, right? While Tanzanite is playing her music, grab those short ropes and start braiding them to make a very long rope. Violet, since your slim, we will tie the rope on you. Try to get through the jail bars and get the keys. After doing so, you will unlock the gate. Everyone tiptoe while getting out. Mango and Zoey, put sacks on
Rose and Luna. I will get a huge box and try trapping Antonio inside. Then, lets bring them to the Admins, where they shall get banned. Got it?"
Pharah explained.

Everyone nodded. Now all they need is to put their plan in action!
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Ok guys I'll be doing the other two chapters later!
Bye!
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Aah! Nice chapter

I'm really glad to see my character was there, thanks! c:
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Yay! It's back ~(^v^~)
But I'm kinda confused.. are the cats bad? Is Luna bad?
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Yayyyyyyy! I've waited for soooooo long! :D I'm happy that you came back
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~CHAPTER EIGHT~
Plan in Action....Or is it?



Everyone took their places to put the plan in action.

"Okay Tanzanite. Three, two, one, go!" Pharah whispered.

Tanzanite played one of her favorite tunes she made.
The cats were fast asleep even though Tanzanite was only halfway to ending her tune.

"Wow, she's good." Arianne commented.
"Always and forever." Zoey added.

Arianne already tied the ropes together. She handed them to Pharah, who tied the rope to Violet.
Violet was quietly passing through when she heard Antonio snoring very loud.

"Ugh. Did he leave his manners back in that Lava Cave?" Violet said to herself. She got the keys and opened the door, but it creaked so loudly.

The cats woke up, and was about to take Violet.
Then suddenly, everything came to slow motion.

"Nooooooooooo!!!!!" Pharah said and jumped out of the bars. She rolled right in front of the cats, and instead of Violet, they took her.
"Pharah!" Paulo bursted into tears and tried to get out, but Zoey took him by the paw.
"We can't lose another rodent. Move on, at least your safe." Zoey said.

Paulo had to give in, thinking Pharah could be dead.
He and the other mice did the rest of the plan. Put sacks on Rose and Luna, and they managed to trap Antonio in a box.
Then, they went to the administrator office.

"Hi. We need your help. We lost a rodent while escaping a cave, and she got lost. We don't know if she's dead or not. Can you help us?" Tanzanite asked.
"Of course! Just please tell us her name, and we will try finding her." One of the administrators replied.
"Pharah. She has been attacked by such cats. Tell us when you found her, and if she's dead or alive." Zoey said.
"Okay! We will call you on your phone, video call you on Skype or message you on your FB page. Okay?" Another administrator explained.
"Thanks for the help." Arianne said.
"Your welcome. Anytime." all the admins waved goodbye.

Then, they went back to the Shaman Castle to deal with Antonio, Rose, and Luna.
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Hey guys!
Tell me what you think!

A. Is Pharah alive?

B. Is Pharah alive but had a major accident?

C. Pharah is 50/50 percent alive or dead?

D. Pharah is dead?

You decide Pharah's fate!
See you in the next chapter!
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We decide the fate?

oh my god it's hard but i probably think B. p-p
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I think C..
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B ;^;
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I'm mainly evil irl,so that's why i'm leaning towards C and D
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You guys can vote until December 12, where....

Wait for it.........
WAIT FOR IT..............................................................................................

RISE OF THE DEAD SHAMAN 2 RELEASES!!! YAY!!
I will try finishing all the chapters. Each book has 12 chapters, so I think I could continue this story and end it in Book 5 or 6!
A total of 60-72 Chapters!

Anyways, bye!
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~CHAPTER NINE~
Paulo's Confession
(Get your popcorn ready, there's a lot of drama in this one!)



"Zoey, what do you want to do with these three?" Arianne asked.
"I dunno." Zoey replied, thinking.
"Me either. Anyways, I'll talk to Paulo. He locked himself in a room, and was there for three days, without eating or drinking. Im really worried about him." Violet said.

Violet knocked on the door.

"What do you want?!" Paulo asked in a hesitated voice. He slammed the door open.

Violet was startled. She had never seen Paulo act in such ways.

"Um, Paulo, we need to talk." Violet said.
"About what?!" He questioned Violet.
"Uhm...About....Pharah." Violet answered.

Suddenly, the look on Paulo's snout changed. Tears fell down his cheeks, and then turned back.

"Are you...okay?" Violet answered.
"I was, once. But now, I think I dont know myself anymore. Without her, I would not and shall not exist!" Paulo bursted into tears and Violet hugged him tightly. For once, she felt all the trauma of losing someone you adored all your life.
"When did you first meet Pharah? You seem to know her so well." Violet asked Paulo.
"In Kindergarten." He replied.

Whoa. Violet thought. It was a real long time!

"So, do you really love her or not?" Violet asked.
"I cant really tell. It's a secret I kept for my whole life." He said.
"Oh, come on! It's just for the two of us!" Violet teased.
"Okay, fine. I-i-i do like her though. But, Im scared to tell her." Paulo confessed.
"But why didnt you tell her? She might love you back!" Violet asked.
"Didnt you know? I was ashamed! I was a nerd, and she was a popular girl. I might be embarrassed, and so could she..." Paulo delivered the point.
"W-whoa. You do really care about her.." Violet said.
"You just realized that by now..." Paulo added. "I love her, and will never love another."

Violet was stunned at by what she heard.
That's when she went outside. She came back in with a huge bowl of cheese flavored gummy bears.

"Want some?" Violet asked.
"My treat!" Paulo agreed, grabbing a pawful of gummy bears.
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Seriously, I was eating popcorn while writing this.
I think i'll need to repair my keyboard from all the sticky crud I pressed on some letters.
See you in the next chapter!

(Its ok if you think its not dramatic enough. I poured my efforts in making all my chapters)

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