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Tribu  Stovedove  « Citoyen »
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Stovedove
Trexexjc  « Citoyen »
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Stovedove#0000 - @7798282 (original @178545, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7809905 (original @112790, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7782820 (original @72339, racing)
Nnaaaz#0000 - @7800998: The overall concept of the map is awesome, I love the art and the idea of the map, but there’s one small issue, the timing on the meteorites is a bit off (around 2 seconds) and skilled players could avoid the meteorites. Adjusting the timing should fix that small issue. Nnaaaz#0000 - @7809901: The idea of the hammer is just great, but there's a couple issues you can fix in around 5 seconds. Firstly, on the original map the mice spawn is to the left of the platform, and you placed it in the middle. I would get the XML of the original, write the coords and use those on the troll version. Apart from that the hammer seems 1px off to the left, which one again, you can easily fix.
Sazd#0148 - @7688965: Even though the troll idea of the map is present, I think it still needs some rework. Firstly, once the mice get used to the fact that the grounds can spin, it’s not really a troll factor. Secondly, the “dump objects on your head” is pretty generic and was used in a lot of maps, making it less unique overall. Nnaaaz#0000 - @7789538: After public testing, the map was denied. First of all, the first obstacle usually only gets one or two people, as many people are not even there when the trap is activated. Secondly, the idea of the moving ground to the right is great, but when multiple mice push it, it breaks and most mice can get out. |
| Trexexjc « Citoyen »
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Nnaaaz#0000 - @7817111 (original @208058, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7800998 (original @260377, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7809901 (original @165843, racing) Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797561 (original 55, vanilla)
Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797143: Even tho the troll part of the map is alright, it’s easily avoidable. If mice are aware they can easily avoid it and won’t kill most of the players. Furthermore, the map presents some inconsistencies when compared to the original one. I would suggest using the vanilla XMLs provided in the first post of the thread. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797416: The overall idea of the map seems pretty vague, furthermore, the shaman can easily build over the troll part of the map and they wouldn’t even notice it’s there. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797424: Once again, the map presents some inconsistencies when compared to the original. Furthermore, this idea is present in a lot of other troll maps that were accepted. Eremiaovidiu#0000 - @7797405: Even tho the troll factor is there, it’s too fast, in less than 5 seconds you are already dead. I would suggest starting over with another map, as this map probably can’t be edited as a troll map since you can’t spawn the bombs. |
| Trexexjc « Citoyen »
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Nnaaaz#0000 - @7781575 (original @220500, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7783745 (original @1556972, no shaman) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7788990 (original @180469, racing)
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| Portwave « Citoyen »
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| Trexexjc « Citoyen »
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Nnaaaz#0000 - @7791550 (original @369230, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7786707 (original @259604, racing) Meli#4973 - @7828311 (original 182, vanilla) Eremia#2246 - @7828340 (original @1408349, defilante)
Portwave#8221 - @7827990: The general idea of the troll is alright, but it has one major flaw that needs fixing, this is that the map is an incorrect copy of the original one. I would suggest using the vanilla XML thread linked in the first post of this thread. Portwave#8221 - @7827991: Once again, the map is an incorrect copy of the original. Apart from that, the troll seems pretty simple and it’s easy to avoid the lava part and easily get into the hole. Portwave#8221 - @7827995: Incorrect copy of the map. Apart from that, the idea seems too simple and boring, there’s nothing unexpected once you discovered you can’t jump with the trampoline. I would suggest adding surprise factors to your maps to make them more exciting and unexpected. Portwave#8221 - @7827996: Incorrect copy of the map. Apart from that, the idea seems nice, but I would personally change the grounds after a few seconds (Let’s say 5 or 6) from bouncy to chocolate to make the map even better. Nnaaaz#0000 - @7792626: Even tho the idea of the map is unique and nice, I would execute it in a different way, I don’t exactly know how, but some of the things that don’t feel right are: First of all, the mice are left outside the cage just watching the cat-unicorn thingy. Secondly, the ground that blocks the cat looks bad. And lastly, why a unicorn-cat thingy? :thinking:, and apart from that, it disappeared after some time when played, which is weird. Nnaaaz#0000 - @7810816: The overall idea of the map pretty generic (Falling things on your head) and it has a major flaw, this is, that the cheese can be easily blocked if a mouse is standing up in the middle post, as it totally stops the cheese from falling. Meli#4973 - @7828291: The overall idea of the map seems pretty generic, this is, falling things on your head. I would suggest being more creative with ideas and come up with new concepts that haven’t been used before. Meli#4973 - @7828297: Even tho the idea not that bad, it feels pretty generic. I would personally try adding something else, maybe grounds change to acid? Or a troll face appears out of the ball? Ideas are endless :) Eremia#2246 - @7828361: Although the idea of the troll is alright, the execution can be definitely better, as the map is all around predictable (You see the acid fall down, the troll face, etc) I would make it less predictable for players, as the surprise factors are usually the best part of troll maps. |
