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Envio de Mapas #Hardcamp#Hardcamp Map SubmissionsSoumission de cartes #Hardcamp
Refused
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Eremia
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@7713585
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Alarobzein
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End
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@7477447
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Anotherbob2
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@7136114
Jeackemre
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@6471753
Monstro
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@7743559
Eduard11
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@7743586
Auroraclears
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#649
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Refused
Monstro#8669 - @7703150 - start is somewhat unclear; the rest of the map is still generic and cramped, with most of the obstacles being less unique than they look.
Pro#5335 - @7300244 - very simple map, and the obstacles are reminiscent of Gobbek's cheese-avoid maps but otherwise nothing special. Bottom left isn't very good, and the end is a pretty generic tramp bounce obstacle.
Pro#5335 - @7267335 - just a very dull, basic use of antigravity with tramp obstacles. Most of the obstacles don't flow well at all and are annoying to play. That said, the top left as well as hole parts are decent so try reusing them in a better map.
Miroslavchik - @7708354 - extremely generic lava/aie gameplay with obstacles that don't flow well together, and are inconsistent in their difficulty. The obstacle with three springs at the end does have some potential, but the rest is simply annoying to play.
Apelidunsete - @7699999 - much like Miroslavchik's map above, way too generic and more annoying/precise to play than truly challenging.
Bielpratasqn - @6974750 - lack of defilante aside, it has all the same issues as the two maps reviewed above. In general, maps that revolve entirely around precise lava gameplay with AIE are incredibly hard to make interesting and fun to play, so try avoiding the concept altogether unless you have something truly unique with it.
Apelidunsete - @7172769 - extremely basic and two of the three tramps are pointless entirely.
Anotherbob2 - @7680800 - please don't edit your maps after you submit them.
Interesting gameplay, but it will need to be reviewed again.
Alarobzein - @7713878 - the restitution on the bottom tramp is too low, making the initial chain more precise than it needs to be. Otherwise, the cheese part seems to be copied from Xorcist's map and the end part is pretty generic bouncing from left to right; try editing those to be more in line with the map's theme.
Alarobzein - @7666041- while this map allows for more freedom than Sirakaba's similar P3, the gameplay is too repetitive and the difficulty is inconsistent, with a huge jump after the cheese. Also the design of the map unfortunately invites players to glitch through the skulls.
Guisanper - @7680717 - start is interesting but somewhat precise; the rest of the map is pretty standard and generic, especially the end.
Monstro#8669 - @2902434 - same issues as the other version you submitted.
Alarobzein - @7719267 - the very first chain is kind of cool but somewhat precise, which makes it annoying to retry. The rest of the map is okay, but after the cheese, but the last stretch after getting the cheese is pretty generic tramping.
Refused#6163 - @7690100 - four generic, repetitive tramp chains.
Refused#6163 - @7714101 - one-chain maps need to truly be well-made and creative to work, and this one is neither (this is more or less a one-chain map because everything after the cheese is just filler to get to the hole)
Refused#6163 - @7690099 - if the obstacles were more well-made, this could work as a basic defilante bootcamp, but it's too basic and repetitive for hardcamp.
Refused#6163 - @7724375 - a good portion of the gameplay here is automatic, and the entire map in general consists of generic defilante obstacles, with the lowmasses/treadmills adding nothing to the gameplay.
Anotherbob2 - @7645106 - messy design, and the top right portion of the map can be skipped entirely with a pretty easy shortcut.
Refused#6163 - @7690909 - very generic use of wind and lowmasses, and like in your previous maps, the chains are too repetitive and similar.
Refused#6163 - @7690790 - the overall idea behind the map, as well as the last bit with the hole both arguably have some potential, but the map in its current state is just too poorly made and uses the concepts in a dull, generic way.
Pratton - @7499974 - just short and uninteresting aside from the cheese chain.
Monstro#8669 - @3778442 - all the issues from the previous times you submitted this map are still present; the chains are just poorly made and uninteresting.
A_4ngelxd - @7729919 - generic tramp gameplay, though the bottom right arguably has potential if used in a better map.
Refused#6163 - @7692133 - overall precise, frustrating to play, and uninteresting.
Refused#6163 - @7692701 - again, just too precise and uninteresting to play. The start is a nice tread obstacle, but the map overall is just too generic and poorly made.
Eremiaovidiu - @7713585 - empty, chaotic and inconsistent.
Eremiaovidiu - @7713992 - also empty and generic, plus a bad use of wind.
Eremiaovidiu - @7715710 - pretty much a repetitive WJ/TA map with an annoying reduced gravity quirk and a borderline impossible top part.
Enderflash - @7477447 - consider making the chain immediately after the cheese slightly easier, and polishing up the gameplay in general.
Anotherbob2 - @7136114 - like with many of your other maps, there are some nice concepts but they aren't executed well, which results in highly inconsistent gameplay, especially with the tramp CJ after the cheese.
Jeackemre - @6471753 - nothing interesting or well-made here.
Monstro#8669 - @7743559 - same issues as the last time.
Eduard11#2625 - @7743586 - terrible, fillerish concept.
Zaurye - @7693795 - generic, with an annoying bottom part.


Edits before being accepted
Monstro#8669 - @3370242 - while the second chain works far more consistently now, there are still some useless cheeses in this map, try eliminating those; besides the second chain, the rest of the map is somewhat standard but that's okay as long as you edit out the cheeses.
Alarobzein - @7433826 - the map is very well-made, but at the same time, has much more potential for more interesting, faster-paced obstacles, specifically in the second half of the map after the cheese.
Enderflash - @7643446 - interesting concepts but the start is too precise and you may want to change the lava on the left to a tramp to clarify that it's meant to be bounced off.


Accepted
Difficulty 1
Alarobzein - @7701092
Pratton - @7000026
Difficulty 2
Alarobzein - @7716928
Enderflash - @7474124
Virtini - @7333370
Difficulty 3
Alarobzein - @7737163
Enderflash - @7571410
Difficulty 4
None.

http://img.atelier801.com/29a4f0a0.png

Edits
Xorcist - @4638223 Diff1 to Diff2
Urook#1131 - @7493086 Diff4 to Diff3
Removed
Pamdecp - @3875019
Donmickey - @7237960
Kaan#0999 - @5799121
Virtini - @7288288
Mousezxcvbn - @7384468
Virtini - @7391000 (will be added again)


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Monstro
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@3370242 edited

@7747201 (other version)

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Monstro
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[Modéré par Sentinonyme, raison : Double-post]
Elmattjuan
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@7751354

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Brpiy
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@7758259
@7758331

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Refused
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@7690100
Bhvana
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@7753990
Also submitted for bootcamp if not hard enough
Miroslavchik
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I00
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P_oul
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@7467233 @7318778
I00
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Bhvana a dit :
@ 7753990 Yeterince zor değilse bootcamp için de gönderildi

easy map
Monstro
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