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[Chapter 8]

I woke up, dazed in thoughts.
[url=]Ugh, I'm aching all over. What the fuck did I do?[/url]
I was laying down in a small puddle of blood. I thought it was mine, but it was just the blood that had splattered on me during the battle. The snowy ground... Looked like winter wasn't quite over I guess. The tribehouse, the ground. It all seemed like the most epic battle I had ever been through, but I wasn't proud of it.

I can't move at all. Paralyzed I lay there, in the cold silent hill. Footsteps suddenly approach me.

"Who the fu - fu - fuck are you?" I chattered, coldly.

I opened my eyes to see it was Niknol. A proud, brave, strong, warrior of the Impure alliance.

"We've found Admshumaker, Impure told me to report this to you, sir." Nik told me as he lended me a helping hand.
"Where? I need to talk to him!" I said rapidly as I stood up, still trembling from the cold.

I ran back towards the battlefield. The horror of the new stack o bodies. Fewer soldiers and warriors were out in the battle. I pulled out my sword, ready to help them. My blood stained, golden sword seemed sharp, even after the rough fight with the owls.

"Ughh! Aghh! HYAHHHH!" I spotted Awesomepro, a great warrior.

I jumped next to him and slashed his opponents leg. For some reason the dark mice seemed to be larger than the last time I had seen them. Then I understood why...

One just a couple of blocks away from Nik, who was a couple of blocks away from me, there was a dark mouse hauling up a soldier and eating him...
It was a terrible sight. My mouth slowly dropped and my grip on my sword was starting to become loose.

"Nooooo!!!!!" I heard a soldier run towards the dark mouse, slashing and hacking through the other dark mice.

I was terrified...
Terrified that if me or any of my friends were eaten I'd be in complete depression. Admshumaker was walking out the door of the tents that Impure had set up. It was a good thing the base was behind a large fence of anvils. Only a sword could open it, because it had a special blade that shapes the key form to unlock the fence.

Adm ran into the battlefield towards me. All of a sudden a dark mouse was chasing him. he dark mouse was the same one who ate the solider. It was larger than the time it gorged the soldier. Adm ran as fast as he could. Nik had saved his life. Nik struck the dark mouse directly in the back of the head. That's when the real battle started...

That dark mouse must have been the leader of the squad or something because it somehow triggered he rest of the dark mice to turn towards Nik. They all ran after him as if he was food.

"Ahhh, Help me!!" he shouted as he too, ran.

The whole Impure patrol and squad jumped into battle. I was still aching. Hero gave Adm a battleaxe.

Me and Adm double teamed the next largest dark mouse. I hacked at its leg while Adm jumped and slashed its head straight down in the middle. It fell like a tree. More mice came after us then, instead of chasing down Nik. I was prepared. Adm ran away to fight seperately. It would be more efficient and quicker that way.

I jumped onto a dark mouse's shoulder and stabbed into its skull. Quickly, I pulled out my sword and kicked the dark mouse's body towards another opponent as I backflipped onto the ground. The dark mouse has stumbled and fallen. It got up and merely scratched me on the neck. It wanted a deadly blow for sure.

I hacked through numerous dark mice.

~{4 Hours Later}~

4 hours have passed. The battle was over...
Only a few dark mice remained. They were all scratched up, but showed they were nothing to mess with quite yet. A few of them stretched from 6 feet tall to 10 feet tall. They fled...

Everyone went into the Emergency Room...
Most of us at least. Adm was one of them...
Reddit...
Was yet another...

I waited patiently as I dazed off again, but this time, in a hard bed. Softer than the ground at least...

[To Be Continued...]
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Man I really haven't posted in a long time. Well it's revived now! I am too lazy to proof read, so if you see typos, correct in your mind.

Thanks for reading!

P.S
If no new chapters come during Christmas, it's most likely family time. So don't be concerned.

Hey, when did I have a battleaxe to give to Adm?

Lol :p I love this!

can i join i wanna be a crazy nice woman that tells you a light stone is in a very dark cave and guarded by a giant cat skeleton and when the light stone is raised and reflected above the sun the dark mice disapear and never be found again but then there is still one dark mouse that didnt disapear and then to be continue pls can i be a character plus i can wait for you P.S that can be part of your story if you like :)

Dijz a dit :

can i join i wanna be a crazy nice woman that tells you a light stone is in a very dark cave and guarded by a giant cat skeleton and when the light stone is raised and reflected above the sun the dark mice disapear and never be found again but then there is still one dark mouse that didnt disapear and then to be continue pls can i be a character plus i can wait for you P.S that can be part of your story if you like :)

That sounds like you're suggestion a whole new story ._.
I like suggestions, but this is kind of cleache. I will add an interesting ending though :3

[/!\ WARNING] There will be no new chapters, it has been comfirmed! After Christmas Vacation (For me) I might post a new one!

Jjaakkee a dit :

That sounds like you're suggestion a whole new story ._.
I like suggestions, but this is kind of cleache. I will add an interesting ending though :3

[/!\ WARNING] There will be no new chapters, it has been comfirmed! After Christmas Vacation (For me) I might post a new one!

Okay :S

Anybody who hasn't read this story ... should .... !!! Awesome job jake ... and thanks for the character and all , friend ! Keep up , can't wait till the end ... and if u make a new one , i will be sure to read every single word of it !

vcs ate hoje metade ja me uminhou mas terei que fala com vcs se vcs verem um rato com oculos 3d e um chapeu verde respeitem faleu curto o transformice

When will you guys fight the Delatex? And also if you can, in the fight, make it have me transforming into a peregrine falcon?. Tanks. ( Because wasn't I the owl leaderps?)

Trigam a dit :

vcs ate hoje metade ja me uminhou mas terei que fala com vcs se vcs verem um rato com oculos 3d e um chapeu verde respeitem faleu curto o transformice

Sorry, but this is sort of an english-only thread.

Yeah, no new chapters, school work slowing me down. Midterms coming up next week, wish me luck!

Also I have made my own tribe, "The Fading", be free to ask to join and what not. This tribe will be added into the story, so people inside of my tribe, will be semi - main characters or every so often show up.

[Chapter 9]

I woke up, yet again dazed.
[url=]Ugh will I ever wake up, not tired and aching like shit?[/url]
I sat up, just to see Adm with an eye patch and a cast on him. Many people gathered around. I looked outside, out into the fields just beyond the fence.

Dark mice grouped up, prepared to fight. You would think they'd have enough, but apparently, they're not stopping until the dreadful ending. Whether it's for them, or us. No other allies were ready to fight. I was, but I wasn't in the right condition. Too many times have I failed to just finish this.

"Calm down, I can see the anxiety in the way you look." A nice woman had said to me.
"Oh great, more fucking mice to annoy the crap out of me!" I said, aggitated from my own thoughts.
"If you're really tired of failing to end this apocalypse, I'll tell you something." she said in an elegant voice.
"What..." I said curious, but still frustrated.
"There is someone, or something in the cave beyond the rocks that block its entrance. I once walked there, clearing up the rocks to the shrine. I heard a voice. I wasn't sure whether it was me, or if it was actually real."
"Wait, so you left a person to die in there! Without even telling anyone?!" I shouted with disgust.
"No, no, no. Let me finish. I ran looking for another way to clear the rocks out quicker. When I returned the voice said to me, 'Find the mouse, the mouse that holds "The Final Ending"'." She stopped there and took a deep breath.

I didn't want to hear the rest of the story. I opened the fence, and at that very moment dark mice had lunged at me. I closed the fence as fast as possible, hoping that none of the dark mice got in the camp.

Impure looked at me wide eyed, with the impression that I was crazy. I ran, ran as fast as a cannon. The dark mice followed me onwards towards the shrine cave. It felt like hours that I have been running. Dark mice still traced every step and turn I took. Detours around the forest, the bridges towards mountain tops, even hiking trails that led to distant lands.

Every step I took, they followed. I reached the shrine. At the same moment I stopped, ready to be devoured, the dark mice stopped too...

I stood there waiting for a voice, a light, something that could tell me that I was actually doing something helpful for once. I heard the voice. The voice Dijz was talking about, the nice lady told me about this. But the voice sounded anything, but friendly and terrified. Their voice made me drop to the ground. Their voice made the world fade out...

[To Be Continued...]
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Short chapter today. More action filled adventures to come! \o/
I also added Dijz to my story as a ncie woman, but not exactly following what she suggested.

From here on to chapter 13 I will be solo-ing the series. No new characters will be added, or excluded.

^^nice chapter

Jjaakkee a dit :

Thanks, I might add Selvidi into it later.

thats a tribe!

Jjaakkee a dit :

Yeah, no new chapters, school work slowing me down. Midterms coming up next week, wish me luck!

Also I have made my own tribe, "The Fading", be free to ask to join and what not. This tribe will be added into the story, so people inside of my tribe, will be semi - main characters or every so often show up.

i am in that tribe

i am in the story so less. Can i be part of the story more?

Hey,can I be in this story too?(Sorry if I sound demanding)
Can you make me the keeper of "The Final Ending" and you have to prove to me that you can use it?

Kool :3

Herobrinefan a dit :

Kool :3

*Cool