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[Fanfiction] Lost blade
Squeakishly
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-Pulls up sleeves-
It's time to get down to business.


Hey pageget

FIRST SENTENCE DONE! YOU'RE SO PROUD RIGHT? VV
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Splashclaweh a dit :
(whats a drabble?, if it means making an art banner for squeak's story then i take thisss bacckkkkkk)
Lolz Squeak can I has make you a banner? :O

A drabble, it's like.
An OOC(out of character) short story.

nvm I don't know how to explain.
GO SQUEAK GO.

squeak. I'm proud of your slow-ness.

(grabs pen)
c:
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Too lazy to fill out the form right now, but I'm looking forward to the first chapter *-*
Noobforevah a dit :
GO SQUEAK GO.

gogogogo
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Character form-
Specialty: All out crazy psycho
Gender: Female
Name: Xij
Age: 25
Personality: Laid back, but wont hesitate to kill.
Extras: I can think of a weapon and have it instantly.
Picture:

http://i.imgur.com/fX0tUcP.png
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Chapter 1
Everyone was very excited for today was the first day we could try out. Frenchie got on the box once again and said. "Okay,okay everyone. This is just the first village of Transformice we've been to. There will be more tryouts in the future only in different cities. Anyways these tryouts will go on for 24 hours. Please line up on this spot." He pointed at the ground. "Thank you!" Tons fo thousands of mice lined up on the platform.

Cliff's Point of view
I was waiting in line patiently it had been forever!!! To try to past time I was burning random things, I thought of just burning the people in front of me but... I'd probably get arrested. I was very bored by the time I was getting towards the front of the line, It was interesting though because everyone had to tryout on a stage and you could watch them. I saw a girl get up on stage and she said "Hello my name is Tsunami, and I have water powers! Did you know my daddykins is rich and I'm a Princesssss? I rolled my eyes. Rich people. Why can't they just be quiet about it, always going around and telling the world. One of the judges said. "So get on with it?" The water wizard named 'Tsunami' Jumped up and started doing a very pretty and elegant dance, I could tell everyone was very confuse at first. She started shooting her water upwards and it was forming swirls and shapes just glistening in the sunlight. She was so graceful so it wa very interesting to watch The male judge said "This mouse passes!".

After there was a girl in all purple and she grumbled "Hi... I'm Kageri...and I use shadow magic..." A judge rolled her eyes and Kageri got a look on her face like she was going to kill another mouse. All of a sudden everyone in the Crowd's shadows rose into the air. Everyone was amazed. "Woaaaaaah" The whole crowd said. With just the twitch of her paw all of the shadows went back to their owners. The female judge shouted "Pass!" The shadow user girl smirked. Many mice tried out after but all failed. Finally it was my turn. I slowly walked up the stairs to the stage. "Hello I'm cliff" I said while scratching my head. "I'm a fire wizard" I started shooting fire out from all over me. The judges looked as if they had all just seen a ghost. I started doing tricks with my fire and finished off by blowing it into the crowd, although this kind of fire didn't hurt anyone. Only if I choose to use it to hurt people it will. The judges applauded me and all rose to their back paws. I smiled and bowed. I got off the stage and they gave me a badge,certificate, and a rose. I yelled out "HEY GUYS IT'S LIKE I GRADUATED EARLY!" I heard a few laughs from the crowd and saw lots of smiles. I was hungry for I lived alone so I scampered into the forest.

North's point of view
I was holding my paw out so I could feel the snow fall onto it, But instead an accidental cannon came out, and that ended up hitting an explosive sheep, which blew up a lot of things. "oops" I muttered. I looked around, Not a single mouse in sight, Just how I like it. It was very beautiful and peaceful. All of a sudden I heard some movement come from the bushes, I shot ice at whatever it was from instinct. A mouse came out from the bushes and somehow melted it with fire that seemed to come from his body. "What was that for?" He said to me. "Uhh... sorry." I replied. "It's ok!" He said very cheerfully which I was a little confused from. "I'm Cliff, and you are?" He said to me "I'm... well, Why do you care?" I grumbled and started to pad away. I wanted to get to survivor I didn't care about this annoying mouse now! Of course the mouse named Cliff tried to follow me, But just from how he ran I could tell I could run faster than him because I had longer legs than him. I started running at full speed. He got lost in the dust.

Note: North has shaman powers in his blood as well as ice.
I know I didn't fit even close to all of you in but I will try to make next chapter soon, Maybe even tonight.
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this chapter.

is friggin awesome
nothing else to say.

heheh

_-

you still have those chars to work on.

vv to bad lolol.
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Noobforevah a dit :
this chapter.

is friggin awesome
nothing else to say.

heheh

_-

you still have those chars to work on.

Shh don't remind me ;;

vvv Ty booty c; <3
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Squeakishly a dit :
Shh don't remind me ;;

lovely chapter and XD
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i love how that nickname has spread so far and wide XD
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Right here and now Imma let 2 lucky posters have 3 chracters go!
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Squeakishly a dit :
Right here and now Imma let 2 lucky posters have 3 chracters go!

CAN I EAT YOUR FACE

PLS

just.

idk.

ok.

here have Tristan/Calix/Sebastian/Undertaker

I DON'T KNOW?

v Lala please stay away frmo me-- HAHAHAHHHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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Specialty: Artist

Gender: Male

Name: Pakio

Age: 20

Personality: Cheerful, a bit hyper. Pakio loves to paint and doodle on faces to make them real, such as painting moustaches and beards. Sometimes Pakio goes out and draw to mess around with other mice's feelings. Pakio doesn't exactly like seeing someone sad, and would draw something to cheer them up.

Extras: Rhymes alot. Loves to randomly paint things on buildings that are completely 'boring'. The paint he draws with is 'Reality Ink', made from the sweat mice make. His paintbrush is actually alive, he even named it Roi. When he snaps, the 'Reality Ink' comes to life. His glasses help him to see like normal mice, but when he takes it off, he can see things other mice cant.

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POSSTTED
vv WOOT WOOT. EDITINNNGG

Specialty: Alchemist
Gender: Female
Name: Lala
Age: 15
Personality: Totally ditzy, this girl is always hyper and is always messing around. She laughs at the strangest things and sometimes seems to be laughing at nothing. People sometimes wonder if she even has a brain, and are always surprised when she suddenly says something very smart or reasonable.
Extras: She carries laughing gas with her everywhere so people can laugh with her
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vv we went completely crazy. teeheehee
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Mk both of you get 3 characters now, go crazy.
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also: haru uses er......... dagger fathers, dont get fooled there sharp as a knife*shaprer...*

one side is knife one side is fether
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I HAVE NO IDEA HOW THIS GOT 4 PAGES WHILE I WAS SLEEPING BUT HEY.

Specialty: Storm user
Gender: male
Name: Jenshin
Age: 18
Personality: Witty,nice and a gentleman.Selfless and comforts anyone who needs it.When things get serious though,Jenshin could become your living nightmare.He's also superstitious,and gets laughed at alot because of that.
Extras: Never takes off his mask.He just doesn't.Absolutely loves sounds of a flute.
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Specialty: Spirit user
Gender: female
Name: Koi
Age: 17
Personality: Extremly religious and claims to have been brought back to life.Believes in higher power and the Afterworld.Adores koi fishes and is easily angered.
Extras: Carries a sapphire charm with a 魂 (jap symbol for soul/spirit).Her pupil is almost always lighter than the base color of her eye,indicating that she's seeing spirits.If she's not,her eyes turn normal.
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sigh.yeah.but hey.why not.


v i posted this before the slots were closed.
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Sirusthemice a dit :
I HAVE NO IDEA HOW THIS GOT 4 PAGES WHILE I WAS SLEEPING BUT HEY.

Specialty: Storm user
Gender: male
Name: Jenshin
Age: 18
Personality: Witty,nice and a gentleman.Selfless and comforts anyone who needs it.When things get serious though,Jenshin could become your living nightmare.He's also superstitious,and gets laughed at alot because of that.
Extras: Never takes off his mask.He just doesn't.Absolutely loves sounds of a flute.
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Specialty: Spirit user
Gender: female
Name: Koi
Age: 17
Personality: Extremly religious and claims to have been brought back to life.Believes in higher power and the Afterworld.Adores koi fishes and is easily angered.
Extras: Carries a sapphire charm with a 魂 (jap symbol for soul/spirit).Her pupil is almost always lighter than the base color of her eye,indicating that she's seeing spitits.If she's not,her eyes turn normal.
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sigh.yeah.but hey.why not.

aint slots closed...?


any wAY, im stalking this thread for a chap
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Cuitdashie a dit :
aint slots closed...?


any wAY, im stalking this thread for a chap

Siiri got special permission from me.
And chapter one is out but I will do chap 2 later.
She can't be on same time as us usually, Different timezones so she's a different case.
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ay if it's okay i'd like to reserve a spot
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Iwuvcheesed a dit :
ay if it's okay i'd like to reserve a spot

Go for it, or you could whisper me and work something out sice you weren't on yesterday.
I realised you and siiri weren't on when this stuff happened.
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Yesterday I saw TWO posts. The OP and Siiri's posts.
NOW THERE'S 78(9)!?

This seems like a good idea to go with. I'll be watching this thread.
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satash.
that was me when i came on and saw this.
youre def not alone.
sorry for kind of offtopic.
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