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[Fanfiction] Noob's Diaries
Appleloom
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Xstarryhalox a dit :
OMG THIS SOUNDS LIKE DORK DIARIES :O

Sananie = Mackenzie

Sieling = Nikki :o

Omg it all makes sense.
LOVE HOW YOU USED DORK DIARIES AS YOUR REFERENCE :D ITS MY FAVORITE BOOK - NOW IN TFM MODE!

Noticed that a long time ago XD

MORE PAGEGETS FOR MOI :D
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YOU HAVE 2 I HAVE 1!
WERE IN COMPETITION FOR THE PAGEGETS!

Snowy go rage and throw Sananie out a window.
wanna know something weird?
Theres a girl called Mackenzie at my school which is mean and just like Sananie.
Appleloom
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Snowysun a dit :
YOU HAVE 2 I HAVE 1!
WERE IN COMPETITION FOR THE PAGEGETS!

Snowy go rage and throw Sananie out a window.
wanna know something weird?
Theres a girl called Mackenzie at my school which is mean and just like Sananie.

I can't compare Sananie to anyone.
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Xstarryhalox a dit :
OMG THIS SOUNDS LIKE DORK DIARIES :O

Sananie = Mackenzie

Sieling = Nikki :o

Omg it all makes sense.
LOVE HOW YOU USED DORK DIARIES AS YOUR REFERENCE :D ITS MY FAVORITE BOOK - NOW IN TFM MODE!

doi = brandon

basically the same
but I guess the rest of the characters are different
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Susanlwu a dit :


doi = brandon

basically the same
but I guess the rest of the characters are different

Nope.
Angel = Jessica (Angel is Sananie's BFF)
Zeena & Foxie J = Chloe & Zoe

Snowysun a dit :
YOU HAVE 2 I HAVE 1!
WERE IN COMPETITION FOR THE PAGEGETS!

Snowy go rage and throw Sananie out a window.
wanna know something weird?
Theres a girl called Mackenzie at my school which is mean and just like Sananie.

Lemme guess. At your school you have another girl called Nikki who is just like Sieling. (hates Mackenzie)
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No..but I have two friends which hate Mackenzie with the name Andrea and Audrey..
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Reference:

http://i.imgur.com/DSGL75q.png
Name: Lilla
Student/Teacher: Student.
If student, what relationship with the main character/rival?: Doesn't really get along with any of them, but helps them in many situations.
Personality: Is never shy, very smart(but NOT a nerd), hates school and rules, likes picking fights here and there, is tough, loves danger and taking risks but has a good heart and helps people if they need her.
NOTE: THIS CHARACTER IS BLIND.
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Lolituta a dit :
Reference:

Name: Lilla
Student/Teacher: Student.
If student, what relationship with the main character/rival?: Doesn't really get along with any of them, but helps them in many situations.
Personality: Is never shy, very smart(but NOT a nerd), hates school and rules, likes picking fights here and there, is tough, loves danger and taking risks but has a good heart and helps people if they need her.
NOTE: THIS CHARACTER IS BLIND.

If only a character request could be a teacher instead of a student XD
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Ikr maybe later Im going to make a teacher too XDD
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Lolituta a dit :
Reference:

Name: Lilla
Student/Teacher: Student.
If student, what relationship with the main character/rival?: Doesn't really get along with any of them, but helps them in many situations.
Personality: Is never shy, very smart(but NOT a nerd), hates school and rules, likes picking fights here and there, is tough, loves danger and taking risks but has a good heart and helps people if they need her.
NOTE: THIS CHARACTER IS BLIND.

Student requests are closed, I'm opening a few teacher requests.
EDIT: After I'll finish this book and Darkness Unleashed, I'll make the second book of Noob's Diaries
Anniebuscus
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Chapter 8

So, we all 3 went to a shop to buy some EXPENSIVE and AWESOME clothes! I INSTANTLY fell in love with the first clothes I SAW! So, I bought them. Even my friends liked them!
Sananie and Angel saw US. But Sananie was surprised when she saw ME. She acted pretty.. weird. "Oh my gosh, Sieling! Nice jacket! Where did you get it? In the trash?" Both PPA girls laughed.
Foxie J growled. "Don't make me reveal my real myself. You'll regret that."
Angel said: "Ooh, what's the matter? I think you're ugly like Sieling and this is the reason that you're wearing this mask!"
Zeena's face literally turned red of anger. "YOU KNOW WHAT? DON'T EVEN DARE TO INSULT MY BESTIE OR I'LL SLAP YOU!"
Sananie laughed. "You can't do anything about it."
"Well, how about I should call Nannerl?"
"Ew, you mean that filthy loser?!" Out of nowhere, Nannerl appeared. "I may be teacher's pet, but I'll knock you down in 3 hits."
Angel laughed out loud. Everyone, I mean EVERYONE who saw her gave weird looks to her. Even Nannerl.
"Your laugh makes me barf!" Foxie closed her mouth with her paws.
Sananie smirked. "You're just jealous that you don't have this AWESOME laugh!" Wait, what? HOW can this laugh be awesome?! Foxie would have barfed! That would suck if Foxie would barf!
By the way, after walking in the mall, I saw Sananie getting beaten up by Nannerl. Her last words before she was knocked out were - "Avenge me, Angel. Annoy.. Sieling..."
Great. Time for plan B to annoy ANGEL now.
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are teacher requests open?

if so

ref:

http://i.imgur.com/zrr4LE6.png
Name: Mrs. Donson
Student/Teacher: Teacher
Persionality: Mrs. Donson is a nice teacher, her full name is Abby Hershel Donson, she will get crabby if someone gets in trouble or talks while a lesson or while working, She is always on task. E: Divine mode teacher
Anniebuscus
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Rubytail a dit :
are teacher requests open?

if so

ref:

Name: Mrs. Donson
Student/Teacher: Teacher
Persionality: Mrs. Donson is a nice teacher, her full name is Abby Hershel Donson, she will get crabby if someone gets in trouble or talks while a lesson or while working, She is always on task. (ya, short persionality i know..)

You need to include information of what kind of teacher is Mrs. Donson.
(ex: Divine mode teacher, Hard mode teacher etc.)
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Anniebuscus a dit :
Chapter 8

So, we all 3 went to a shop to buy some EXPENSIVE and AWESOME clothes! I INSTANTLY fell in love with the first clothes I SAW! So, I bought them. Even my friends liked them!
Sananie and Angel saw US. But Sananie was surprised when she saw ME. She acted pretty.. weird. "Oh my gosh, Sieling! Nice jacket! Where did you get it? In the trash?" Both PPA girls laughed.
Foxie J growled. "Don't make me reveal my real myself. You'll regret that."
Angel said: "Ooh, what's the matter? I think you're ugly like Sieling and this is the reason that you're wearing this mask!"
Zeena's face literally turned red of anger. "YOU KNOW WHAT? DON'T EVEN DARE TO INSULT MY BESTIE OR I'LL SLAP YOU!"
Sananie laughed. "You can't do anything about it."
"Well, how about I should call Nannerl?"
"Ew, you mean that filthy loser?!" Out of nowhere, Nannerl appeared. "I may be teacher's pet, but I'll knock you down in 3 hits."

(work in progress)

onfg that quote
that escalated quIckly
Anniebuscus
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Sorry for no chapter 9, I am fricking busy....
Don't let this thread sink down, pls
I'll be inactive on this thread for a while.
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Anniebuscus a dit :
Sorry for no chapter 9, I am fricking busy....
Don't let this thread sink down, pls
I'll be inactive on this thread for a while.

aw man dees is my fav fanfic
Anniebuscus
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Chapter 9

This is gonna be the WORST day in my life!! It all started when I wanted to go to school with my new entry for the contest (note that it's after 3 days). The entry was a BEAUTIFUL painting in my opinion. I worked on it 130 HOURS straight! I overslept. I dressed up, grabbed my breakfast and my backpack and quickly ran away.
Then I drove to school with my dad's bus, which has a GIANT COCKROACH on the roof (because he's a bug exterminator)! I wished that there was NO ONE who could saw me in the bus! BUT NO! Sananie saw me! When I got out, I almost forgot my backpack. Suddenly, Sananie asked: "What's that weird thing over there?!" Oh, really? Everyone, who has a little bit brain (even Sananie), should know that it's a cockroach, which is for something important, and it's not Sananie's business! My precious painting fell down. My dad accidently drove ON it. It shattered. I cried because I worked SO HARD on it.
So there was I, sitting on a sidewalk and crying. All of sudden, guess who saw me. Doi.
He asked: "What happened, Siel?"
I replied: "My hard work SHATTERED, Sananie laughs at me..."
Doi laughed. "Are you joking? Your painting still is beautiful! Even though it shattered into 34 smaller pieces. And with dirt and some worms on it." I DIDN'T deserve my friend Doi! I was such an idiot that I didn't believe him!
After school, a message awaited me. From Zeena and Foxie J.
"Hey Siel, it's us, Zeena and Foxie. We are busy now, so please don't call us back. We have a little project now. And we feel bad of what happened to your painting." They were my BEST friends ever! I just didn't deserve friends, which know these feels.
Actually I went back home after the divine mode lesson. I felt sick and Mrs. Donson let me go home.

E: The next chapter will be the end of the first book.
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Well, everyone. This is the end of the first book of "Noob's Diaries".
After my other fanfic "Darkness Unleashed" will be finished, I'll make the second book.

Chapter 10

The next day, I went to school earlier to see who won in the art contest. In the info board I found a list of winners of this contest. When I saw the name of the student who won the contest of the 6th class, I FAINTED! So all the participants were divided into classes (of course, I was in the 6th class) and I was the winner of the 6th class! Oh, and the winner of each class gets 1000 cheese as I wrote before! So THIS was the project on which my friends worked on! So this was the list of the winning and runner-up students. (I cut out a part from a copy of this list)

6th class

1st place - Sieling McCheemouse
2nd place - Anna Plankvil
3rd place - Doi McFlarecrate

I never knew who Anna Plankvil is, but I know that she's a good friend of Snowy and Ruby. Wait... DOI WAS IN THE CONTEST TOO?! I must congratulate him for the 3rd place! By the way, both runner-ups will get 500 cheese! Deep inside I laughed that Sananie DIDN'T even get to the top 3! After a few minutes, when Doi came in, I HUGGED him! (no, really)
I cheerfully said: "Congratulations for the third place!"
He replied: "Thanks! And congratulations for the first place, you deserved it!" When I went to my locker, I saw a little note which said:

"Come to the janitor's chamber!
We have important news for you!
Zeena + Foxie J"

So I went there. Zeena asked me: "Hey, why are you so angry? Sorry for not getting your permission to make this project we told you about yesterday."
I replied: "I'm not angry because of that. I just wanted to see Sananie's face when she didn't win that contest!"
Foxie J laughed: "Gosh, Siel! You SHOULD have seen her face! She ranted in front of the judges!" And so, the janitor's chamber was the place where we met. We always laugh and cry together there.
The first lesson didn't even start and a LOT of students, even those from 7th and 8th classes congratulated me! Sananie and Angel couldn't recover from the loss. But they might avenge that.
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wait

if the painting got ruined how did she win 1st place?
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let's pretend it was made with all these beautiful and sparkly stones and when it got run over it just added to the beauty
yeah let's leave it at that
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