Perhaps, there should be an argument. Where the rich man proclaims he is not possessed ans has different mood switches to confirm he is in fact. But maybe the rich man doesnt know, he is? And that is why he can not accept it?

Im going to try to write a novel about an underwater world. Any ideas on how normal/mythical creatures show up underwater or a main climax?

Deathswishes a dit :

I'm writing a freaking novel about transformice, but I don't know what to do at this one chapter. Taki (the main mouse) and her grandpa came to this rich dude's house and her grandpa is trying to get the rich guy to confirm he's possessed. I just don't know what to do.

I agree with maskedjoker's suggestion, as this seems to be the best course of action.

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Penpause47 a dit :

Im going to try to write a novel about an underwater world. Any ideas on how normal/mythical creatures show up underwater or a main climax?

There could be an underwater city, allowing for various mythical creatures to be down there, with, perhaps, a voyage to land to get some sort of stolen relic of the ancient past. The main climax could be the characters finally finding who was responsible for the thievery, and placement in say, a dragon's lair. There could be a fight, and ultimate victory for the main characters. After all, many good stories have more than one climax ;)

Bastlase a dit :

Deathswishes a dit :VoirMasquer

I'm writing a freaking novel about transformice, but I don't know what to do at this one chapter. Taki (the main mouse) and her grandpa came to this rich dude's house and her grandpa is trying to get the rich guy to confirm he's possessed. I just don't know what to do.

I agree with maskedjoker's suggestion, as this seems to be the best course of action.

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Penpause47 a dit :VoirMasquer

Im going to try to write a novel about an underwater world. Any ideas on how normal/mythical creatures show up underwater or a main climax?

There could be an underwater city, allowing for various mythical creatures to be down there, with, perhaps, a voyage to land to get some sort of stolen relic of the ancient past. The main climax could be the characters finally finding who was responsible for the thievery, and placement in say, a dragon's lair. There could be a fight, and ultimate victory for the main characters. After all, many good stories have more than one climax ;)

Oooo thanks for the tips!

Penpause47 a dit :

Bastlase a dit :VoirMasquer

Deathswishes a dit :VoirMasquer

I'm writing a freaking novel about transformice, but I don't know what to do at this one chapter. Taki (the main mouse) and her grandpa came to this rich dude's house and her grandpa is trying to get the rich guy to confirm he's possessed. I just don't know what to do.

I agree with maskedjoker's suggestion, as this seems to be the best course of action.

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Penpause47 a dit :VoirMasquer

Im going to try to write a novel about an underwater world. Any ideas on how normal/mythical creatures show up underwater or a main climax?

There could be an underwater city, allowing for various mythical creatures to be down there, with, perhaps, a voyage to land to get some sort of stolen relic of the ancient past. The main climax could be the characters finally finding who was responsible for the thievery, and placement in say, a dragon's lair. There could be a fight, and ultimate victory for the main characters. After all, many good stories have more than one climax ;)

Oooo thanks for the tips!

Np

Here's a tip/trick for you people wanting to create your own worlds in your fanfics:
Take inspiration from a person or community/game you love. Whether it'd be from Atelier801 or Pokémon, Sonic or SSBU, so on and so forth, you can combine to create a story you might love.

cough, gemstones was based off of steven universe, cough

Maskedjoker a dit :

Perhaps, there should be an argument. Where the rich man proclaims he is not possessed ans has different mood switches to confirm he is in fact. But maybe the rich man doesnt know, he is? And that is why he can not accept it?

Thanks! This really does seem the best way to handle it.

Deathswishes a dit :

Maskedjoker a dit :VoirMasquer

Perhaps, there should be an argument. Where the rich man proclaims he is not possessed ans has different mood switches to confirm he is in fact. But maybe the rich man doesnt know, he is? And that is why he can not accept it?

Thanks! This really does seem the best way to handle it.

Reminds me of Jekyll and Hyde. You could pick that line of thought, minus the whole horror-kinda theme.

Bethdacat a dit :

Here's a tip/trick for you people wanting to create your own worlds in your fanfics:
Take inspiration from a person or community/game you love. Whether it'd be from Atelier801 or Pokémon, Sonic or SSBU, so on and so forth, you can combine to create a story you might love.

cough, gemstones was based off of steven universe, cough

https://atelier801.com/topic?f=6&t=888030&p=1