[Fanfic] Anchored Cannons

[Fanfic] Anchored Cannons - Rebellion

pageget
decides that life is over

crying
I found out how to make like
paragraphs
its bad quality
but stiLL

So, since they spawned anvil gods in their utility, its just "PLASTIC ANVIL GODS!!!!"
and in actual servers, its REAL ANVILGOD!

Chapter 8: -_______ Anvil God._______-

Many weeks of doing this evil plan, seemingly, The Rebellion got off Scot-free, It was until the day Ev became normal, She did it over board. She used the... Anvil God. And it took many days to get it to go back to it's Hell.
"All who gain and support the Rebellion, come to Mouse Headquarters!" A loud voice called over all of Transformice.
Marlee wondered about the Transformice Headquarters, She quietly followed the gang. "This makes Mikaou so angry!" Mikaou cried out, watching as Ev did nothing to show care.
"What are we going to do? Ev.. you brought out the Anvil God!" Chuck yelled at her, yet, she kept walked forward.
"They'll let us go. None of us got reported before." She used no tone, and by the time they got there, Magiac began to rant too, though, she seem not the ranting type to Ev. "How could they not let us be arrested, you got us into this, Ev! Get us out." So, Ev began into the the huge building, her heart raced, but she didn't like Racing, she liked Survivour, and thats what she was fighting for.
"Hm... Ev...Eeveewings, Correct?" Tigrounette looked up at her, she spotted other Admins, Moderators, and even Map Teams, they nodded, and so did she.
"You made the Anvil God, what a shameful choice." Zou sighed, writing down on papers. "Correct, Zou." Ev sighed too, fixing her hair in place.
It seemed many minutes, the mice whispered, and wrote down words, passing them around, It seemed like an hour before they spoke, but one said something that Ev thanked.
"You have ... more chances, Alright? Same for your team." One of the moderators called out. Ev's eyes widened, and her heartbeat slowed to a steady pace. "How!? Man, never thought that would happen." She sighed. "Thank you.. I'll think better nex-" "Go now." They ordered her, and she dashed out, a wide grin on her face.
The gang looked up at her, expecting bad news. "We're free. They just took one of our chances." Ev sighed, sharing her cheese with them.
"Thank gosh, I was scared The Rebellion would be banned for life!" Marlee gasped, hugging Ev. "Thanks, Marlee. It means a lot." Magiac stood beside Ev, still disappointed in her friend. "Yeah, thanks." Okaru agreed, walking torwards the two, flinching from his robtics. Chuck nodded, "We better go, we most likely won't want to be around." He smirked, heading off torwards Mikaou, who had began to run with happiness. Okaru followed after Chuck, nodding.
"C'mon, Ev, Marlee." Magiac whispered to the girls, and the three giggled, watching as Mikoau would fall or run in circles constantly.

if I get
ᵇᵃᶰᶰᵉᵈ ᶠʳᵒᵐ ᵗʰᶦˢ ᶠᵃᶰᶠᶦᶜ
I will die because of irony

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#62

AAAAAAAAAAAH
FINALLY THANK YOU SENPAI
fanart coming one day

#63

cutedad
Chapter 9

I FINISHED YESSSSSS

also

bad ev
smacksmack

E: I Updated the Main Page! Tell me what you think, and what I should add or delete.

Chapter 9: -_______Strike 2_______-

Baseball, the year was rolling around to it once again, and everyone would watch with Ev to get their minds off of their deeds. Ev always felt guilt when ever the batter would miss. "Strike 1!" The words haunted her brain at night. But casually, she would eat it off or something. Today was the day Zou left. What was it? Was it because she had to be dealing with the Anvil God, instead of thanking the mice more? Had it been Ev's fault, once more? She was only a silly 19 year old who couldn't even afford herself a bigger house for the Rebellion.
"Alright, day two.." Ev squeaked to herself. Casually, she would cook breakfast with Magiac, but they had gone out to vote. Chuck, Okaru, and Mikaou too. She was alone, and the egg she had be frying was brown by now.
"What's gotten into me.." She yelled at herself, hitting her head against a wall. The pain tingling her patched eye, and the bruise began to fleet into pain. She grunted and ignore the pain as she laid on the couch, watching TV.
"I could always run. More mice are supporting the Rebellion... besides the mods." She sighed. "Maybe.." She smirked. "I'll do it." She ran out the door, to the election polls.

Marlee sighed as Ev was going once to the Transformice Headquarters. "Why does she always have to bring in violence?" Marlee asked Magiac, who shrugged and sat in the waiting hall instead of outside, like last time. Chuck told Okaru the whole thing, after all, he stood back, being stuck in the medal detector for a looonnnggg time.
"So she fought with one of our haters? Then she got.." Okaru asked, slightly confused. "Yeah, It was kinda funny, but stupid of her. She needs to fix her additude." Chuck sighed, watching as Mikaou walked over. "Magiac told Mikaou to stop chewing on herrrr..." She whined, eating a minnow, which was kinda big.
The two shuddered at the fish, and began to get up, and they all sat next to Magiac, and Marlee. "If she gets in trouble again..." Marlee didn't finish, her shoulders tense from the thought. "She might get pushed out into therapy." Magiac sighed. "What about being banned? She'll be stuck in jail! She was out onl-" Okaru got intterupted by Chuck. "They can't just ban a mouse these days" He muttered, watching Marlee pat Mikaou as she yawned, laying her lap.
"I'll take her home." Okaru sighed, nudging Mikaou up. "Mika...ou... is so ti..tired.." She yawned, making a cute mew noise while so.

The whole time trying to get Mikaou out the door without passing out was enough for Ev to come back. "Stupid moderators. We were only fighting because she thought I wasn't fit for the job!" She yelled, running out of the hall, making Mikaou suddenly wake up a little. "We...go home?" She mumbled half asleep.
"Yeah, c'mon guys." Marlee sighed, she felt like she was apart of the Rebellion, but truthfully, she was a supporter. She let Mikaou's weight push down on her side as she hoisted her up on her feet. Magiac helped too, and Okaru and Chuck talked about how mad Ev was.
"It's just... just because you don't like them... doesn't mean they can't do what they wanna do." Okaru sighed, looking back at Chuck. "She must be trying to get Ev banned. After all, she has only one chance left." Chuck sighed. "Although, shes too young to be put in jail. She'll be forced in bootcamp." He sighed, Magiac glancing at him. "Don't tell me she'll have to wear those ugly brown uniforms..." Marlee spoke for Magiac. "Yea...h...uglY!!" Mikaou yelled through a sleepy face. Okaru looked up. "Bootcamp is fun for practice. But when you seriously are stuck to doing it.. I suppose its repetitive." He sighed.

All of them got to the Utility House. They watched baseball with Ev. Her anger slightly gone. Though, her face went paler than her white fur, her ears dropping and her eye widening.
"Strike 2!"

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#64

Nice main page!
Also,Okaru is really like me
I'm a bootcamper on tfm (and i love it)

#65

Omg I hope this is open
Ref:

Name: Wind (aka Satan)
Age: (optional) 666 ;)
Gender: female
Personality: Mean, Depressing
Likes: (2+) Knives, Death
Dislikes: (3+) Annoying people, kids, cuteness
Rebellion?: ( Yes / No ) Yes
Extras: Knife in right hand

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DELETED DUE TO ACCIDENTAL POST

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#67

windknives a dit :
Omg I hope this is open
Ref:
Name: Wind (aka Satan)
Age: (optional) 666 ;)
Gender: female
Personality: Mean, Depressing
Likes: (2+) Knives, Death
Dislikes: (3+) Annoying people, kids, cuteness
Rebellion?: ( Yes / No ) Yes
Extras: Knife in right hand

It is open, but due to me deleting the mouse count, I'll have to tell you.
You leave 10 mice left.
Although, the Rebellion is closed. I'm really sorry!
You can either be a supporter, hater, or just a fellow mouse who helps them out.

E: If I reply about a flaw of your post, I WILL NOT ADD YOUR MOUSE IN until you get it, and inform me. Thanks

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#68

wowie hooman!
Chapter 10

2 more chapters until a new one!?

Plans: Ev might or might not end up finding a smol mice child, (She later has to go to Bootcamp because of naughtY BAD BAD!!!!) who grows up to want to be like her. He ends up meeting the cruel, but happy Transformice, and lead's his party to find where the shaman goddess is, and to finally take down the anvil god.
In this process, Ev comes out new, shes a tougher person, and she finds her adopted son. She being this cruel mouse, he guides her to where the light starts with the Shaman Goddess. There, she find out that...
You can imagine the rest.

Chapter 10: -_______Failed and Shout_______-

"I can't take it!" She screamed at the crew, Mikaou wailing in the background. "Ev- Ev... just calm down.." Marlee tried to hand her a ice pack, just for it to be slammed on the ground by Ev. "Aaugh.... it...OWww..." Ev cried, holding her eye, the patch gone, and fresh white fur was uncovered. Half of her face was bruised, giving her a lavender tinted face.
"Ev- Evv...... what if the doctor can't do anything? Mikaou wonders! What if your skull cracked? Mikaou is sad..." Mikaou questioned, sniffling. "She'll be okay. Every game resets," Chuck stated, placing her dark purple hair out of her hand's way. "But she left right when she died, so what if she doesn't reset this pain?" Okaru emerged from the kitchen, handing Mikaou a saved minnow. Her tiny head shaking 'no.'
"She'd heal." Magiac sighed, sitting by her feet as Ev wailed, the pain was enough with out the blow, but she had to be shot by a cannon in the head too.
"I-I... can...mana...ge" She muttered. She had stopped wailing because the tips of her hair were lilac by now. She flinched intensely as she tried getting up. "No! Ev... don...ugh." Marlee tried stopping her as she limped to the kitchen.
"What happened to my legs!?" She screamed, flopping onto a stool.
"Doc said you should lie down, you had been burnt while knocked out by a fire a mouse made." Magiac answered. Ev glanced at her leg. "I'm just... surprised I cannoned myself." She scolded herself per usual. "He said you need to stay home. For at least another 2 days." Okaru read the doctors note, Chuck nodding. "Yeah, She also prescribed you fraises and cheese." He held a bottle of fraises and cheese. they were pill size, and they stopped pain and stress.
"I'm glad." She sighed, cleaning the burn, groaning at every ragged wash of her wet cloth. "How about you guys go to something, I need to rest." She suggested, bandaging her burn, and wrapping a bandage around her head, placing her eyepatch on like nothing. "You sure?" Magiac asked. Ev nodded, taking her daily prescription. "It's late, so we'll just eat out?" Marlee suggested, Okaru and Chuck nodded.
Mikaou sighed. "Mikaou thinks, what if Ev gets-" Interrupted by Ev, Mikaou's ears shot up. "I'm fine! Just go with them." She yelled, laying on the couch with her leg carefully placed. She seemed better after taking the fraise and cheese and cleaning up and bandaging.
"Alright, alright." Chuck laughed at her attitude. "We'll go to a standard cafe." Okaru guessed, walking out with the other 4.

Later, after the 90% of the gang left, Ev watched the news, boring stuff of cheese stolen and tribes invaded. Ev watched and tempted until she heard her name.
"Ev wing, failing to breathe, had knocking herself out with her OWN cannon! A failed cannon shot had hit her, and she passed out. A mouse burned her too. She is doing okay." The reporter say through the pixel screen. Ev growled at the words. They had no right to talk about that!

She sighed, eating CheesePockets and OJ until they had gotten home, she ended up sleeping through the rest of "The Walking Vampires."

#69

eeveewings a dit :
windknives a dit :
Omg I hope this is open
Ref:
Name: Wind (aka Satan)
Age: (optional) 666 ;)
Gender: female
Personality: Mean, Depressing
Likes: (2+) Knives, Death
Dislikes: (3+) Annoying people, kids, cuteness
Rebellion?: ( Yes / No ) Yes
Extras: Knife in right hand

It is open, but due to me deleting the mouse count, I'll have to tell you.
You leave 10 mice left.
Although, the Rebellion is closed. I'm really sorry!
You can either be a supporter, hater, or just a fellow mouse who helps them out.

E: If I reply about a flaw of your post, I WILL NOT ADD YOUR MOUSE IN until you get it, and inform me. Thanks

Oh.... Ok...
I guess ill be a supporter

#70

windknives a dit :
eeveewings a dit :
windknives a dit :
Omg I hope this is open
Ref:
Name: Wind (aka Satan)
Age: (optional) 666 ;)
Gender: female
Personality: Mean, Depressing
Likes: (2+) Knives, Death
Dislikes: (3+) Annoying people, kids, cuteness
Rebellion?: ( Yes / No ) Yes
Extras: Knife in right hand

It is open, but due to me deleting the mouse count, I'll have to tell you.
You leave 10 mice left.
Although, the Rebellion is closed. I'm really sorry!
You can either be a supporter, hater, or just a fellow mouse who helps them out.

E: If I reply about a flaw of your post, I WILL NOT ADD YOUR MOUSE IN until you get it, and inform me. Thanks

Oh.... Ok...
I guess ill be a supporter

Alright! I'm sorry you couldn't come earlier, but you might be able to get a lead on a oncoming sequel! If you want, of course.

<3

#71

bublamorce a dit :
Can we put multiple refs?
I would also join with me (my tfm outfit)

Remember this?

I'm considering it!

But No more than 4+
THIS INCLUDES YOUR CURRENT CHARACTER :)

<3

E: Although, tell me if they'll be going to the sequel, since this will be ending in 2 chapters! :P

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#72

I would like all of my mice that i put in,to be in all chapters you do

#73

bublamorce a dit :
I would like all of my mice that i put in,to be in all chapters you do

For sure ^^;

#74

Crying because writers block

#75

triplepostle
Chapter 11

AHH ONE MORE CHAPTER!!!!!

ALSO

Wind!!! I'm so sorry if I didn't match her personality correctly, I always tilt to two directions when i think of a dark personality,
Fucking scary and murderous and no friends
OR Fucking amusing AF and bubbly and rubs off on people

so
i made you the dark-amusing personality
i hope i got it kinda correct

Chapter 11: -_______The pair of new shoes._______-

Sneakers... they roamed against the hall. The hallway of nothingness, the blank walls filled with bright posters. What time had this been? Ev's tiny white ears twitched with anxiety. "Hey! Stop that!" A faint voice caught her eyes, "Huh?" Her squeaky voice echoed. The look of a blue hair mouse being pushed by a orange haired girl caught her eye. "W-wind... Stop!" The blue haired mouse shouted. "Really...you think of so?" This so-called Wind talked back, whipping around. She almost ran into Ev, although she darted to the right, falling into a line of lockers. "Ev! Make sure Maka doesn't go to any teachers, she'll learn that once or twice that it doesn't end!" Wind laughed, and Ev blink both of her shiny pink and blue eyes.
The blue haired mouse, called Maka; stood up. " 'One day!' she'll get that no one likes her." The mouse spoke. "What if I like her, Maka?" Ev claimed. "Then you're just like the others." Maka glared at her, walking off towards a water fountain.

Ev woke up, blinking for only one eye to see. "Another dream... dam-" "Morning Ev! You have a visitor." Okaru inturrupted her from her nap. Okaru exited from the room as soon then.
"Ev! Hey there." The same voice Wind had from the dream, more mature, came from the darkness as Ev rose up to see the mouse. "Wind... Hi." Ev waved, sitting next to her. "How have you been?" Wind's voice was clearly cracking at the chance of pretending to be nice. "Fine, I guess." Ev stared into the mouse's mask's eyes for some sort of lying. Wind had been staring at her burn, Ev could tell by the tilt of the mask. "Nice burn there, where'd you get it? Oh wait I did it! Ha--" "You did?" Ev raised her voice. "Yup. The marshmallows were greeeaaaat!" Wind exaggerated, "Too bad you limped away as soon as you woke up, you have to keep it as a reminder now! Never, ever, leave a roun-" "I know." Ev paused, sighing heavily. "Why are you here?" She finished, looking into the mask of Wind. "Oh. Well... I though me and some people from our old school could have a reunion." Wind muttered, her voice sharp as she got easily mad at Ev, being mad too. "Oh. Who is it then?" Ev wondered, was Maka going to be there? Like in her dream? "Oh! Me, you, Maka, Crybaby, Luna..." Wind nodded. "Also, Chuck and Magiac... and Okaru-- those people, are out doing the whole rebellion thing. It's kinda cool, y'know? I give you props to that." Wind complimented, cringing after so. "Thanks..." Ev sighed. "We better go to see Maka and Luna, then." Ev got up, limping to the door. "Oh. Luna is sick, so it's just us 3." Wind reminded herself and Ev, going to the door. She noted Wind's red shoes. Then limped after her as she went outside.

Maka greeted the two by the Atelier801's bar. "Hey guys." She called out, adjusting her black frames. "Maka! Hey, how are you?" Ev called out, not really happy at Wind's sight, but still exited to see her old schoolmate. "I'm great. What about you... and Wind?" Her voice seemingly hostile. "I'm fine... Wind is-" "Wind is great, how are you Plant?" Wind pushed at the 19 year old. "I'm fine, stop acting like a stupid 14 year old." She yelled back at Wind, the two exchanging dirty glances. "Anyway, I heard how Wind is still a wrecker and burned your leg. I'm surprised you didn't heal- Oh... you left- never mind..." Maka cut herself off. Ev nodded, walking into the bar with the two.
"Uh. Table of three." Ev spoke to the fellow mouse, she leading the two upstairs. "Thanks." Maka nodded, taking her sit across from the two. "So! Maka... how have you been with your little plants and book stuff!? I heard you're even nerdier now!" Wind laughed, making Ev chuckle. "It's true.." She nodded, setting her flowerless crown on her head, not crooked. "Even better!" Wind finished her laughing.
The waitress came by. "I'd like some hazelnut coffee... still kinda drowsy." Maka nodded, looking at Wind and Ev. "Oh... just something simple. Polka Pola." Ev smiled, darting her eyes at Wind. "Oh! Just getting me something that's red." She giggled, nudging Ev.
"Now... coffee, what are YOU thinking!?" Wind laughing with Ev. Ev seemed to be a road, and Wind had rubbed off on her like a tire. "I don't know Wind-y." Maka grunted, looking at her menu. "NEVER call me that again." Wind seemed to growl, and by this time, Ev had already been setting her side of the table up.
"Here you go girls..." The lady gave them all their drinks, Wind ending up with something with a bitter smell. "Now what would you like?" She continued. "Oh! Um... just... get me frosted waffles or something..." Maka rushed herself, busy fighting with wind before. "C h e e s e b u r g e r" Ev drooled, licking her soft white lips. "Eh, what shes having." Wind pointed her thumb at Ev, shaking the pepper on the counter after the waitress left, the top coming off, with the remaining pepper pouring out. "Whoops."

"That was..." Maka stopped, expecting one of the two pals to finish her. "Wow... I though you too friends would finish-" "Heh, if anything I'm a lone-wolf." Ev laughed, walking off, not noticing Magiac watching.

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#76

Ahhh!
I got cool mice to add in the story,but because i'm sick,i can't go to my pc,where everything is
I can't wait for more,because your writing skills are good!

#77

bublamorce a dit :
Ahhh!
I got cool mice to add in the story,but because i'm sick,i can't go to my pc,where everything is
I can't wait for more,because your writing skills are good!

EEE Thanks!!
And, I feel you, I'm not sick but I had my first half of a root canal done... soo....

#78

THIS IS AN AWESOME STOREEEH! ^^'

#79

begacheesy a dit :
THIS IS AN AWESOME STOREEEH! ^^'

Thanks!!

#80

eeveewings a dit :
begacheesy a dit :
THIS IS AN AWESOME STOREEEH! ^^'

Thanks!!

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