Trapped |
Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1519588080000
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Time to re-read these a bunch of times again cause i'm an impatient boiyo trying to be patient |
Ayumiouo « Consul » 1519588080000
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o snap cargil and eve are related?! :oooo next chapter hype |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1519588920000
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Oh boy. Things are getting interesting, and when Einein comes in... I wonder if she's going to make friends or try to smash everyone. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1519589460000
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Gadgetrocks a dit : Hopefully try to make friends |
Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1519589580000
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Gadgetrocks a dit : Well Dark will most likely join her if she starts causing havoc so... Let's say friends or else it's gonna have all hell break loose. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1519590300000
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Definitely. Austin and Jareth wouldn't like the violence all that much, though. |
Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1519694460000
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-pats- Plz. Plz uploads, my heart is gonna explode |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1519699800000
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Maskedjoker a dit : |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1519769640000
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sorry for da wait Chapter 6 Dark hehe, you'll have to wait till next chapter~ Another day at this place. I'm starting to get tired of it. Being "roommates" with weirdo is annoying. Why am I even in this place? I haven't done anything REALLY bad since last year. Anyway, days here just consist of sitting around, looking at things, or doing nothing whatsoever. Personally, I like speeding up the day with fighting. I have to admit, he's tough. Anytime I knock him down, he gets the f*ck back up again. And now it's lunchtime. I walk to the lunchroom. I grab a tray of crappy food and take a seat at one of the empty tables. I look around at the other mice in this... place. There's something about this place that makes it seem like, a prison. I've never been to prison, always escaping the police due to my power, but if I were to guess how prison was like, this was what I'd think of. This is just--- ... Somehow, I lose my train of thought for a second. My eyes lay on a mouse. She is.... pink. Just... pink. I have no idea how to describe it. Cute? N-no.. She's not "cute" she's pink. Who knows what kind of secrets that gal has. Or else, why would she be in this weird place? My face feels hot, and my stomach feels... weird. Am I getting sick? I must've started staring at her, because Maskie decided to disturb my thoughts. "Who's she?" he asked, noticing me looking at her. I glared at him, "Nobody." I growled. Maskie (and yes I'm calling him Maskie) looked at me with disbelief in his eyes, but shrugged it off. "Suuuure." he muttered. Ugh, he's always like this. We walk back to the room as lunch is ended. I sit down in a corner. Somehow, I can't think much right now. I haven't felt like this in a long time. I don't remember why... It's a weird feeling. I notice the girl again. She's actually in the room across from us with another girl who has a weird cloak on. I find myself getting hot again. My stomach aches again. I really feel like I'm sick. Of course, Maskie jumps in. "You're quiet. That's new." I glare at him. "Actually, I'm pretty sure I'm sick." I went back to sitting in the corner and thinking. Does he have to be like this? I look back through the door. She's talking with cloak girl. She seems to get along with people well. Suddenly, Cloak-girl sees me. Pinky sees me too. I quickly turn away. A few seconds later, I start to... glow? I float in the air for a bit, until my head turns on its own. It turned towards the door. I look to see Pinky, holding her hand towards me. Her hand is also... glowing. I feel my face grow red. And... she smiles at me. I see Maskie give me a smug look. I glare back. I feel myself slowly go back down. There's a warm feeling in my chest. As soon as I get down I rush to the corner and bury my face in my tail. She was different from other people. Everything felt like air. I... I remember this feeling now.. What... What was it called..? Oh, yeah... It was called... love. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1519770660000
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Now we get Dark's thoughts. Soon will be Jareth's But first, dark meets Akira, who is basically his light. Dark is frustrated with Jareth And we get a little knowledge about what dark uses his powers for Dernière modification le 1519777500000 |
Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1519782960000
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PFT Dark's partially Asexual and it's hard to make him blush. (For the 5 years i've had him he's only blushed like.. 3 times..? And he's married in one) Akari must be one nice gal, especially to make him of all people feel something besides anger and hatred XDD Dernière modification le 1519786380000 |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1519940940000
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Chapter 7 Akira --Still in the lunchroom from Chapter 5-- I look at the siblings. Now that they're next to each other, they really do look alike. "Wow, I didn't know you had a brother, Eve." I say to them. Eve sniffles, "Y-yeah, I d-do. I di-didn't expect t-to find h-him here th-though." I look at her brother, Cargill. "Hey, I'm Akira. I share a room with Eve." He looks at me. "Thanks for taking care of her for me." he smiles. Eve has a fake offended look on her face. "Hey! I'm not a little kid, Cargill!" she says. We laugh. Lunch ends, and we head back to our rooms. We talk about our families for a bit, when an announcement comes on. ALL MICE WITH POWERS, PLEASE STEP OUTSIDE OF YOUR ROOM." I look at Eve. She shrugs. I walk out the door and stand in front of our room. Then, the wall in front of me moves. It lowers, revealing a big space. I can see the other mice outside their rooms. The ceiling moves, and makes the room bigger. Structures come out of patches in the floor. The room re-designs itself. A mouse with tan fur, orangey hair, and a suit comes out of the ground inside of some weird glass-looking case. "Hello, everyone! You may be wondering what's going on." he starts. "Well, I'll explain." What's happening? I thought. He continues, "All of the normal mice without powers are in their rooms. You are now participating in a fight for your lives." Murmurs of concern float around me. The mouse keeps going. "You can be on a team with 5 members max." I sigh with relief as I look at the other mice. I didn't want to fight my friends. "You will have to fight until there is one team standing. If your team wins, you will be freed from this place and you will get to choose 3 normal mice to save." he explains. Then we can save Eve, Rebecca, and another mouse! I think excitedly. "You will be given 10 minutes to prepare a team." The mouse adds, "Starting now!" my mind is racing as I look around. I walk over to Cargill and Austin. "Hey, wanna team up?" I ask them. Cargill nods. "Yes, please." he quickly exclaims. "That works for me. What power do you have, Akira?" Austin asks. "Telekinesis." I quickly reply. Looking around, I see some other mice teamed up. Unexpectedly, the two mice in the room across from mine walks over to us. The one wearing a hat quickly asks, "H-hey, can we join?" I didn't think he'd want to be on my team after... the incident. I thought. Still, I replied, "Of course!" He sighs. The mouse with the mask starts, "He--" but is cut off by the mouse with the hat. "--I'm Dark, um, by the way." He glares at the mouse with the mask. Sighing, the masked mouse says, "I'm Jareth. Just call me Jared." I grin. "Okay. Akira. Nice meeting you." I add. Dark responds with a simple "Yeah." I start to say something when I'm cut off by a loud buzz. "Times up for teaming! Get ready to fight." the mouse in the middle exclaims. "We'll do this!" I whisper to my team. The mouse starts, "You can start in 5!" I'm so nervous. "4!" I don't want to hurt people... "3!" I have to, though. "2!" To get out of this place. "1!" To save my friends. "START!!!" We hear a loud ring. The fight for our lives begins! |
Maskedjoker « Censeur » 1519942620000
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..... I'm surprised Dark even teamed up so easily. Or talked to them. Bleeehhhh hah okay, I'll accept it I suppose. I never did clarify him in depth. XD Action commencing!! sighs Cause didn't clarify if Dark liked you he's stuck with ya but wouldn't care enough until actually knowing you I wasn't expecting him to shipped with anyone :') |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1519948740000
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Hi, is Einean going to be j the next chapter? I'm waiting for her. (Also Einean really hates Jareth.) |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1519997100000
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Lol this should be interesting, considering Jareth can't die. |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1520023500000
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Gadgetrocks a dit : Sorry, yes. I wanted to wait a bit since I had an idea for her. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1520027100000
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Bastlase a dit : this came out great *waits for next chapter* |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1520038200000
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Cookie_kitten a dit : Sure! Thats fine :) |
Cookie_kitten « Consul » 1520095800000
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Chapter 8 Akira againbcwhaynot RIIIING!!!! I panic a bit as the battle begins. As soon as it sounds, mice all over start to fight. I quickly whisper "Hurry, here!" to my team as I duck behind a structure. They follow me behind the structure. I take a deep breath. I have to do this to survive... I peek out of our hiding spot. I see one mouse going crazy and flinging anvils everywhere. What..? I use my powers to pick some mice up and slam them into the other structures and floor. I really wouldn't do this if I didn't have to. I duck back behind the structure. I look over to my team. Jareth is currently fighting other mice. I heard from Eve that she thinks he can't be killed. I spot Dark. He's constantly turning into a shadow, beating mice up, and then repeating. He must be used to this... I look for Cargill. I see him and Austin crouching behind another structure. I see Cargill turn into a... knife? Austin picks him up and starts to stab mice from the other teams. Wow. I continue to slam mice into the walls and floor. Dead mice are everywhere. I decide to join my team and go out of my hiding spot. I run around, dodging attacks and fighting off other mice. An anvil flies right by my head. I turn my head to see a mouse running towards me. She flings an anvil at me, and I quickly stop it and fling it back at her. "Guys! Over here!" I quickly yell to my team. Jareth runs over to me and hits a few anvils away while the rest of my team continues to fight other mice. I notice Cargill go invisible and seemingly choke other mice. Damn. Austin is literally blowing people away with wind and fire. Dark is also sending shadows to attack other mice. I let Jareth hold Anvil Girl back. I attack other mice, sometimes killing them myself, sometimes throwing them to a team member for them to finish off. Eventually, the announcer mouse says, "There are currently TWO TEAMS LEFT!" I look over to my team. Then I look over to the anvil mouse. This would be the final battle. If we won, we would be freed. I was nervous. We could die, too. I thought of Eve and Rebecca. They're my friends. I have to save them. We have to win this. "The final battle will begin in 5!" I look at my teammates. They're getting ready for battle. "4! 3!" This is the boss battle. "2!" This is what counts. "1!" RIIIIIIIIING!!! The final battle has begun! |
Ayumiouo « Consul » 1520135640000
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*eats popcorn from a distance* Hmm, I wonder who could win in a 4 v 1(?) fight... anything could happen though |