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Soumission de cartes  Troll Map Submissions 3.0 |
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Tribu  Trexexjc  « Citoyen »
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Nnaaaz#0000 - @7801848 (original 31, vanilla) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7813075 (original @195765, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7814117 (original @119242, no shaman) M23#4702 - @7818410 ( original @391738, survivor)
Sazd#0148 - @7749884: The troll part of the map looks alright, but there’s a small issue, this is that the dynamic ground totally gives it away since they look different. To solve this I would put everything with dynamic grounds so everything would look the same, and as a consequence, the dynamic grounds that move won’t look out of place. Nnaaaz#0000 - @7799753: The overall idea of the map is just great, but there’s a small issue, the acid is too flashy for the eyes and will be an eyesore for a lot of players. To solve this I would suggest making the acid and putting art instead (something like this but green, representing the acid https://imgur.com/03VaBsz). On another note, if you could stop the acid ground from flashing when you trigger them, it would be a great plus.
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Nnaaaz| Trexexjc « Citoyen »
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Meli#4973 - @7830756 (original 67, vanilla) Meli#4973 - @7831051 (original 4, vanilla) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7799753 (original @1144548, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7814099 (original @391693, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7814126 (original @322216, no shaman) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7822930 (original @281649, survivor)
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Beran_setaou  « Citoyen »
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| Trexexjc « Citoyen »
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Nnaaaz#0000 - @7823213 (original @852617, survivor) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7814248 (original @2066363, no shaman) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7814488 (original @186695, no shaman) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7822873 (original @292592, survivor)
Nnaaaz#0000 - @7804405: The concept of the map is well thought out, but there’s one small issue with the map, this is that it’s an incorrect copy of the original. As you can see (In here: https://imgur.com/b2gvHoH) The level of the water is off, which would be a giveaway that the map is a troll one. Solving the issue is a fairly simple task. Apart from that, the bushes and the platform, are slightly off, as shown in the image.
Sazd#0148 - @7827564: Even tho the troll factor of the map is present, I feel like the wood ground going up is kinda pointless, and you have to be very lucky to actually be there at the correct time. Furthermore, the grounds appear to be kinda glitchy, which is not ideal. Apart from that, I would add something to the right side of the map, maybe acid grounds? I don’t know, but I feel like the map is lacking something a little bit more exciting. Acorn#4549 - @6812447: Firstly, the concept of falling objects on your head is overused at this point, even tho it’s cool and works, we have too many maps with that concept already. Secondly, please submit the original map code, as it helps when comparing and looking for exact copies, apart from that it helps us get a feel of the original map. Lastly, you are trying to resemble map 2, but the middle section is completely missing, I would suggest using Aewings XML thread that can be found in the first post of the thread to get exact copies of the maps. (https://atelier801.com/topic?f=6&t=810566) Acorn#4549 - @6821524: The troll factor of the map is quite alright, but we’re missing the original map. As stated in the above review, I would take a look at Aewings XML thread. Acorn#4549 - @7084476: I think I’m missing the troll :thinking:. This map resembles map 0 in a much better way than the others you submitted, but the decorations are slightly off, map shouldn’t have the ca=”” parameter since it’s a dead giveaway, and most importantly, it’s missing the troll factor. Acorn#4549 - @6577320: The map contains seizure-inducing lights, which are not allowed in rotation. Apart from that, the map is an incorrect copy of the original map, and once again, please submit the original map next time. |
| Trexexjc « Citoyen »
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Nnaaaz#0000 - @7804405 (original 130, vanilla) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7815695 (original @389582, racing) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7801850 (original 137, vanilla) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7802221 (original 98, vanilla)
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Kanskje| Beran_setaou « Citoyen »
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Okpatinhos  « Citoyen »
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| Trexexjc « Citoyen »
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Nnaaaz#0000 - @7803013 (original 13,20,122,71,77, vanilla) Nnaaaz#0000 - @7803900 (original 74, vanilla) Acornelyon#4549 - @7852729 (original 22, vanilla)
Nnaaaz#0000 - @7804144: I personally find the idea of the map quite nice, but there are a couple issues. Firstly, the fake cheese and hole slightly move when the map starts, aligning it should fix the issue. Secondly the hole has a weird curve and can be spotted as fake, a couple more lines and it should be easily fixed. Lastly, the map is an incorrect copy of the original, as everything seems slightly off and off-layered when compared to the original. Kanskje#5156 - @7846590: The overall concept of the troll is quite generic. Apart from that, the acid ground can be easily spotted as the green sticks out of the main post. Lastly, the map is an incorrect copy of the original as everything seems slightly shifted when compared to the original. Kanskje#5156 - @7848025: The map can be easily spotted as a troll one when the bridge is loading. I would suggest not trying to recreate bridge maps, as the texture of the bridge grounds will not be the same. Kanskje#5156 - @7848025: Once again, the map is an incorrect copy of the original, I would suggest using the vanilla XML thread that can be found in the opening post. Apart from that, the troll of the map feels quite lacking, I would suggest adding it something to make it a bit more exciting. Kanskje#5156 - @7848036: Incorrect copy of the map, as previously said with the last map. The concept of the map is kinda lacking, I would add a surprise factor or something like that to make it a bit more exciting for the players. |
