poorly shaded ...lol..im still trying to figure out piant tool sai -0.0-

The arms feet ears eyes and whiskers are all different shapes and sizes, You might want to work on that.

And what is that ring in the corner of the pictur...

But I think its cute :3

how did i do on this one?

Naturmouse a dit :

how did i do on this one?

Feet and hands should be paws, they look like little knobs at the ends, otherwise it's pretty nice, I like it, you did a good job making it kind of 3-D.

ok thanks :)

oh ya i forgot the fingers xD

Naturmouse a dit :

oh ya i forgot the fingers xD

Also, adding whiskers might be a nice touch, but it's your choice.

You're welcome! Happy to help.

Naturmouse a dit :

ok thanks :)

:}

Only advice I can offer is to change how the feet look because they look very phallic.

Naturmouse a dit :

The arms feet ears eyes and whiskers are all different shapes and sizes, You might want to work on that.

And what is that ring in the corner of the pictur...

But I think its cute :3

ohh..i accidently moved it there on accident while scripting it 0.0
or while i was thinking a comet going fast.

Naturmouse a dit :

how did i do on this one?

I'm not a hormonal mouse who sees everything sexual but those feet. . . Look like sexual organs.
I'm so so sorry.
Try looking up mice pictures of looking at how your idol (if you have one) draws mouse feet.

thing poking out of head is the ear on other side lol ^-^



Late night fright

Sorry if its big :I

Terrifying, I must say. Just simply horrifying. You are afraid, aren't you?

*Your basic Scary Rat.*

Please, help me. I mostly need critique for the anathomy and the poses.

Vividia a dit :

Please, help me. I mostly need critique for the anathomy and the poses.

i think the first one looks nice anatomy wise, so i'm only going to do a redline for the second one.


other than that, i think you may need to add some shading into your drawings and colour in any left behind white spots. (i can see a few in the second picture). the scarf in the second drawing should be skinnier at the top and thicker at the bottom.

but, other than that, your backgrounds are really good. i absolutely love them.

Peashaman a dit :

thing poking out of head is the ear on other side lol ^-^


Late night fright

the muzzle needs to be a tad bit smaller and skinnier. the head could also be a bit smaller. the arms need to be placed up higher and not be hanging down like that. the nose needs to be either half seen (since it's a side view) or on the tip of the mouse's muzzle. the feet need to be longer and all three toes shouldn't be sticking out, there should only be 2 sticking out. the ear that is facing us in the second picture could also be a bit rounder.

Hetaliagal a dit :

i think the first one looks nice anatomy wise, so i'm only going to do a redline for the second one.

other than that, i think you may need to add some shading into your drawings and colour in any left behind white spots. (i can see a few in the second picture). the scarf in the second drawing should be skinnier at the top and thicker at the bottom.

but, other than that, your backgrounds are really good. i absolutely love them.

Thank you, it helps a lot! ^^ I usually add shading to my drawings, this time I were too lazy. xD

just some art i did last night, thought I might as well post it up.

i will trie to redline! I nver critique before :/


I think you should make a line under the ears
and the arm in the back. And you should
closen up the toes and Make the arms a little bit more higher.
And you should make bigger and longer tails and whiskers.
(short whiskers too!)
And Make the snout a little curvy-ish
and make the mouth a really bit close to the nose