Lietfan a dit :

hero ninjaed you.

I tried redlining without putting in too much of my style XD

Kayleekitti a dit :

Plz critique

Thinner outline or COMPLETELY deleted outline, less “straight” outline, better shading,more detail on the right ear since it has basically no end (aka shading part again)

Herobrinefan a dit :

I tried redlining without putting in too much of my style XD

I like it!

Lietfan a dit :

hero ninjaed you.

pfft okay shouldnt have wasted my time on that. T-T

Lietfan a dit :

I like it!

tyty

Shervonne a dit :

pfft okay shouldnt have wasted my time on that. T-T

LOL its okay, at least you tried

as you could see
guidelines there guidelines everywhere
critique with anatomy pls

Mantlestar a dit :

as you could see
guidelines there guidelines everywhere
critique with anatomy pls

you should erase guildlines.
add more shirt detail.
fix teh mouth probally.

Lietfan a dit :

you should erase guildlines.
add more shirt detail.
fix teh mouth probally.

umm
and i also noticed that the nose isn't in the right place xD
pls ignore that

Mantlestar a dit :

as you could see
guidelines there guidelines everywhere
critique with anatomy pls

hey looks pretty good
shoulders could follow those two posts made on the last page though
breasts should not be so away from eachother
and one hand looks longer than the other
also hair could use some movement (hair on the right is lower than on the left, should be changed)

Vulli a dit :

Critiques like this aren't very helpful. Just saying 'fix the mouth' 'fix this' 'fix that' isn't really going to help unless you explain what's off about it.

Oh sorry.
The mouth is open it souldn't be like that.
it should have no blank spacing.

Vulli a dit :

Critiques like this aren't very helpful. Just saying 'fix the mouth' 'fix this' 'fix that' isn't really going to help unless you explain what's off about it.

Damn, was about to type that, lol. Anyway, Mantle, it's nice, but the left side of the skirt is off, like she's holding it. If she is, you should display that more. It seems like she's twisting her hip to full view the skirt. The eyes, are fine... hmm, the chin is ok, but the cheeks should be less round. Her chest (if you don't mine me :L) is a little off, you should centre her, erm, breasts a little more. Also the right arm is short than the left, so be sure to fix that. I think your over all lining of the shoulders and feet were REALLY good though! Good luck! ♥

Immagetcheez a dit :

Damn, was about to type that, lol. Anyway, Mantle, it's nice, but the left side of the skirt is off, like she's holding it. If she is, you should display that more. It seems like she's twisting her hip to full view the skirt. The eyes, are fine... hmm, the chin is ok, but the cheeks should be less round. Her chest (if you don't mine me :L) is a little off, you should centre her, erm, breasts a little more. Also the right arm is short than the left, so be sure to fix that. I think your over all lining of the shoulders and feet were REALLY good though! Good luck! ♥

I acctually agree with this critique i didn't notice the skirt until now.

Tailtong a dit :

hey looks pretty good
shoulders could follow those two posts made on the last page though
breasts should not be so away from eachother
and one hand looks longer than the other
also hair could use some movement (hair on the right is lower than on the left, should be changed)

Immagetcheez a dit :

Damn, was about to type that, lol. Anyway, Mantle, it's nice, but the left side of the skirt is off, like she's holding it. If she is, you should display that more. It seems like she's twisting her hip to full view the skirt. The eyes, are fine... hmm, the chin is ok, but the cheeks should be less round. Her chest (if you don't mine me :L) is a little off, you should centre her, erm, breasts a little more. Also the right arm is short than the left, so be sure to fix that. I think your over all lining of the shoulders and feet were REALLY good though! Good luck! ♥

guys, thank you for the critiques *-* those will surely help me in the future :D

Mantlestar a dit :

guys, thank you for the critiques *-* those will surely help me in the future :D

Great, have fun! ^^

Graciekinz a dit :

I reallly need help with mouse bodies.. Everyone has their own style and yea but i just get the drawing from the actual mouse.. i want my own style i just really need help with shoulders..

tips on how to make it furry like an actual mouse..?

this was a drawing for beautyiscool. i think i did horrible it looks so weird help pleaase :c

please help me here ;;

Kayleekitti a dit :

Plz critique

Well the eyes look uneven.
The ears too.

Graciekinz a dit :

please help me here ;;

Hi! Well.. Here you go:

Please don't hate me, if I critiqued so much (wait, it isn't so much.. What ever -.-)! :(

if someone could help me with this, that'd be very helpful c:
i kind of realized too late that the arm lenths are uneven

yeah, the arms are a bit uneven, like you said. they also look a bit too long.
the pupils are facing different directions if you look closely. the head looks a bit too small and there's multiple spots where you've coloured outside the lines. oh, and there needs to be shading in numerous places. (under the dress, hair, some on the face, ect)

but, i do happen to like how the hair looks. oh, and your hands are done really well.