i actually need help with a lot of things but i'd never ask for critique because i'm overly sensitive

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anyway about your colors, I actually like more grey colors and nothing too bright or popping out unless it needs to be, and I never handpick my colors :x I just use the eyedropper tool for everything

I have some problem with the drawing color :/
Any Critiqs welcome :)

Brijette a dit :

I have some problem with the drawing color :/
Any Critiqs welcome :)

I have 1 suggestion but its not with color its with the tail
i personally think teh tail shouldbt be a line like that it SHOULD be like a real tail

Lietfan a dit :

I have 1 suggestion but its not with color its with the tail
i personally think teh tail shouldbt be a line like that it SHOULD be like a real tail

I personally think that the tail is fine. That's her STYLE. :P

Brijette a dit :

I have some problem with the drawing color :/
Any Critiqs welcome :)

there's a dot next to the nose/mouth and i think that the bubble that's inside of the the that's showing, shouldn't be visible because the mouse's lower body isn't visible either

Thefourthone a dit :

there's a dot next to the nose/mouth and i think that the bubble that's inside of the the that's showing, shouldn't be visible because the mouse's lower body isn't visible either

I think that was meant to be like a beauty mark or whatever those are called.

About the bubble, I think that its meant to be infront of the tub, and since bubbles are transparent thats why you can see the tub through it.

Bookmousey a dit :

I think that was meant to be like a beauty mark or whatever those are called.

About the bubble, I think that its meant to be infront of the tub, and since bubbles are transparent thats why you can see the tub through it.

Yeah, I agree on this too.

Thefourthone a dit :

there's a dot next to the nose/mouth and i think that the bubble that's inside of the the that's showing, shouldn't be visible because the mouse's lower body isn't visible either

There is no way to tell if the bubble is inside the tub or not, but it looks like it's outside so it SHOULD show the tub.

The only critiques I can give this is the bubble on the tub. The bubble on the tub should have a lighter color since it is showing it's over the tub. The hair should be more detailed (opinion).

This is my FIRST draw, ever. Be good with me. ;;

Oiebjs a dit :

This is my FIRST draw, ever. Be good with me. ;;

I LOVE it....

Lietfan a dit :

I LOVE it....

Could you please provide critique or just not post? :)
We're trying to provide them help, not just a pat in the back.

Oiebjs a dit :

This is my FIRST draw, ever. Be good with me. ;;

Don't worry! This is pretty good. Are you sure this is your FIRST draw? Because I think this would be your FIRST digital art because it looks like you had some art exprience.

The arms look like boob arms. If you don't know what that means, it's when arms just look like saggy boobs instead of arms.

The neck bothers me a lot because it looks very off.

The knife on her/his head should be in straight lines instead of unsteady lines. Unless the butcher knife has been warmed up into a degree that it can bend, I doubt the knife would be like that. Consistent straight lines is good.

The hair looks very lazy. Maybe you should try to take some time to draw them.

I'll do a redline in a moment, need to do something.

What program are you using? How old are you?

Okim rlly afraid to ask for Critiqueing....
here i guess ;; (ik alot of thigns will need to be changed)


and i have


and

Lietfan a dit :

Okim rlly afraid to ask for Critiqueing....
here i guess ;; (ik alot of thigns will need to be changed)

and i have

and

First of all...

THE SIZE! It's so huge, just for a mouse or two. Either draw your mice bigger, or make the canvas size smaller.

Also, your lines should be smoother. If you use MS Paint, I suggest you switch to a better program.

And try to work on positions, the anatomy needs some work. You should really focus on cleaning up messy lines, things like that.

Sourisplum a dit :

First of all...

THE SIZE! It's so huge, just for a mouse or two. Either draw your mice bigger, or make the canvas size smaller.

Also, your lines should be smoother. If you use MS Paint, I suggest you switch to a better program.

And try to work on positions, the anatomy needs some work. You should really focus on cleaning up messy lines, things like that.

yes
i totally agree im not saying that your arts are ugly they are ADORABLE!

;; ughh its hard on a flippin computer...
im so much better irl

Lietfan a dit :

;; ughh its hard on a flippin computer...
im so much better irl

Do you have a printer? A phone? A camera? A LAPTOP CAMERA? DSi? WEBCAM? 3DS? MINI CAMERA?

Satash a dit :

Do you have a printer? A phone? A camera? A LAPTOP CAMERA? DSi? WEBCAM? 3DS? MINI CAMERA?

digital camera and dsi b-b-b-but ;; they wont upload...
mostly the digital camera my computer wont let itt innnn ;;

I drew this.. My number one best and neatest drawing ever did..



It is simieler to the drawing of tig and melli :3


*Pay attention to the head phones that i am wearing. . . They are on the wrong side XD*

Lietfan a dit :

digital camera and dsi b-b-b-but ;; they wont upload...

You can use a DSi to upload pictures, honey. But you need a SD chip.

Satash a dit :

You can use a DSi to upload pictures, honey. But you need a SD chip.

my dsi is dead
and i flippin lost it ;;
ugh but i did have an sd chip