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Bengalstar a dit : okay. so. freaking. unpatient right now. |
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Noobforevah a dit : iKR me tOO |
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kinda tired so here's shitty chapter no.1 Chapter 1 I was finally able to get onto transformice again after a day and a half without the internet. I had quickly noticed that the tribe which seemed so small that day was filled with people saying random words like “potato” in the green chat. I thought it was funny, so I laughed and joined with them. Pretty soon before you'd even know it everyone was screaming “POTATO! XD” in the green chat. How fun was that? The tribe leader finally told us to calm down and get on the forums. Having experience from the forums last time, I felt less interested to what was actually there when I clicked the magical button. Everyone stated to where we should go next in the forums, after all it was quite a big place when you counted all the threads. I lost everyone after they said “click the forum button”. Luckily, not everyone there was a forumer. I was happy to find a few players who knew the community on game well too. Many of them would sometimes spam the chat at this mysterious room where some bots (or however you call them) lived. The most coolest part of the room was that the game seemed to be going on forever. I tried talking to those mice that always seemed to be there but they never responded to me. Sometimes I'd even stand there for hours trying to get the bots to respond to me, instead they stand there and do nothing. I asked a few tribe friends of mine if they ever got a bot to respond to them once, which they said “yes”. I was determined after that conversation to get Elise and Papaille to respond to what I was trying to ask them. I was as bored as heck until I finally found another person I could talk to. I greeted her quietly in the chat, hoping that she wouldn't sit there and do nothing like all the other mice who came to this room. “What are you doing?” asked a mouse in the cluster of other mice. Before I replied, I checked his/her profile page. “wow u have over 1000 firsts? :O” I replied, ignoring what the mouse said. “How did you know?” the same mouse replied again. His/her name was Yukizomi on the chat board. I really liked his/her name so I wanted to compliment him/her. “i really like ur name xD” I commented, ignoring the mouse again of what she/he was saying. “Thanks! I like yours too!” Yukizomi smiled. She actually seemed like a nice mouse, although shy. “hey can we be friends?” I quickly replied after, also adding an unneeded “o3o”. “Wow, sure!” Yukizomi replied happily. He/she seemed to be lonely for some reason, wanting a friend like me. I was startled for a bit when I got a strange notification that I've never gotten before when she left. Was it.. a friend notification? I was confused, but too shy to ask what it was. I assumed it was a friend notification and spent the rest of my time trying to get Elise and Papaille to say something at 801. |
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Bengalstar a dit : I loved it! keep up the great work c; Can't wait for Chapter two :3 |
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wow really? hahah thanks I'm gonna make sure that choochoo rages after she finds out that elise and papaille really don't say anything mwahahahah |
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cANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE PLS MAKE MORE |
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Bengalstar a dit : lol she's kind of dumb |
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Bengalstar a dit : oMG I THOUGHT HER NAME WAS CHOCOCHOCO |
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Sourisplum a dit : >kind of you mean really dumb? lel Erikadeedee a dit : that's a good name too yes |
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cant wait for more or atleast when bya is in im exited to see whta happens |
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i'm guessing bya will be on the EN chat thread and at the forum games every now and then so at some point in time choochoo is going to come to the EN chat thread (this chapter) and yeah i'll make sure something happens for now i think i'll start making a few more chapters tomorrow I also don't mind critique from anyone and infact I would love critique from haru since she's one of the most amazing skilled writers i know of anything to make the story better i would much like to hear :> |
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just one more chapter tonight pls its amazing makes me wanna release the wise old mouse again and yes we all know ill be on the en chat thread |
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Bengalstar a dit : xD *bands table* EVEN MORE |
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eh I don't know i feel like i'm about to fall asleep on my chair right now ;; i think if i keep on writing chapters they'll end up to be shitty and a waste of time to read and yes i think you should release the wise old mouse that was a great story maybe a second part? i would love that very much gonna sit on my feet and play transformice until my eyes roll out of my brain Micefamilies a dit : i'll make sure to write more chapters tomorrow morning heheh ok <3 |
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idk i made a second chapter but i really think the end of the wise old mouse was amazing aaaa ~ cOME ON BENGAL YOU CAN WRITE i'm sorry its amazing |
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i know i can write but i just feel really tired right now ughhhhh i think that's enough for writing today for me i mean i only just put this thread up like today |
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yeah i think i'd be shizzle at trying to write another one i really miss writing though |
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i'll start on some new chapters yes |
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Bengalstar a dit : YAAY! |
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shitty chapter no2 also that was just her first time at the en chat thread and there's plenty of more times she'll come again so don't feel bad if you weren't here when she first came ok Chapter 2 After a long day of school (bleh) I quickly hopped into my seat and waited for my computer to load. I logged into Transformice as usual and impatiently raged while IE would freeze. My mouse pad had become my chew toy shortly after I had found this game on Mochi. Turns out that you could actually spend money on the game for fraises. I would bug my mom every day about them pleading if I could just get a little bit of them. She'd always quietly smile back and yell at me “NO”. Rest in peace dreams. After being extremely bored of not knowing how to “wall jump” or however they call it I sat down in my chair comfortably and clicked the forum button. Not many people were on it seemed, maybe they were at school? I paused for a moment of the possibilities. The time I got out of school though was normal though. The forums I had seen were split up into numerous categories, although I never bothered to click on all of them. Restless, I clicked the button that said “Off topic”. I thought it meant something like what we did at the green chat yesterday so I decided to see what it would be like. On the top of the forum thingy held some cool colored threads. “The EN Chat Thread” caught my eye for a second, but I felt like I should probably introduce myself first at the “Introduce Yourself!” thread. I wanted to seem like an older kid so I lied and put my age as “17”. This is how my short introduction went, Name: NOT TELLING U STALKERS xD Age: 17 Gender: girl Interests: uhh idk o3o Pets? (If you have any): i had a gunne pig but then it died :'( After introducing myself, I quickly went to the EN chat thread if there were some people there. Trying to act like the age I posted at the “Introduce yourself!” thread, I cussed quite a lot in my sentence. Having not read the rules, I had no idea what to do there or say. My first post on the EN chat thread: “hi there im new but im 17 xD POTATO!!! xD”. The EN chat thread turned blank until finally someone replied to my post. Her name was “Bya”. This was the first time in my life I had seen such a short name. I read only half of her post and with that I quickly replied to her on the thread. “umm can I be ur friend?” I replied shortly after she commented. Another person replied after me, it was someone with a different username. “Are you 17? You act like you're 5.. just saying” that person replied shortly. My cover was blown! I quickly replied to his/her post. “well duhh, why would I be on the internet then -_-?” I replied, trying to keep in my pathetic lie. Instead, I made the problem much worse. Another person replied, this time one that seemed to pick on what I was trying to hide. “Ok well first of all, you're the only so-called 17 year old I've seen in my life that randomly uses the word ''potato''. Secondly, you spelled ''guinea pig'' wrong in the ''Introduce yourself'' thread. Third, you're the first 17 year old that spammed ''xD'' when you replied there. In my opinion, that's proof that you're not what you said you were.” I raged like an idiot after that person replied. He/she was right about the way I acted. My emotions and thought suddenly bursted as if a bubble had popped. Trying to keep my cool together, I cussed at that user as if any normal 17 year old would do. Hopefully I could get out of here without a bad reputation. “***** u” I replied back to that user. The words shocked me for a moment, realizing that normal 17 year olds probably wouldn't act this way. He/she was right and I was totally busted. “Woaaah using the big words there. Also I'd recommend not using the ''*''s since they make you seem like a complete coward.” the same person replied. I was extremely furious and followed what she said. “ok fuck you! I said it!!” I shortly replied after, listening for once to what another user said. “Thanks kid I really needed a laugh.” a different person replied. They seemed to be friends with each other. “Could you just go, we don't allow annoying brats here at the EN chat thread.” another person replied. This was a different person, however, but seemed to be friends with those users too. Before leaving like a mess, I wrote down their names on a piece of paper. “Sock, Zakkie, and Spin.” Those were the people that I would watch out of. Then another thought bubbled in my mind, what about the other mouse when I first got there? Oh yeah, Bya was his/her name. I wanted to write a note down if I ever saw her again, she seemed kinda nice. I slowly closed the forum button and returned to what I did best on game, being a noob! |