Ejaffa a dit :

I've already done my entry :P
It's Thanksgiving btw

Ejaffa's Commision
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Judged by Rainbowbells

Coloring (4/5) It's very nice coloring, though i see some places miscolored! Turkey's and Mouse's leg on the grass...
Neatness (9.5/10) Some spots are not smooth. Thats alright though
Anatomy (5/5) The mouse chasing the turkey was priceless XD
Creativity (4/5) BAAAAAAAAAAAAK! RUN AWAY TURKEY! :D
Effort (5/5) I can see you worked very hard on this! Good job!

Total: 27.5/30

Ah...

I wanted to judge Ejaffa..

But I guess I can just judge Gabreyolo's... Wait Gabre you have two. which one is the entry? ^^"

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Is it the chocolate one? I'll go ahead and judge that one.

Grading:
Coloring (3/5) The colors are quite plain, maybe you could've added a few more colors. Perhaps add a background?
Neatness (8.5/10) Some lines are very shaky,and if you zoom into the mouse's ear it has white dots. The chocolate looks as if you kind of just put it on the mouse.
Anatomy (3.5/5) I don't think ears are suppose to be that small and up onto the head. The neck is perhaps a bit fat? The feet look semi-akward, maybe place it near where the legs are.. Noses aren't supposed to be red unless it has that item.
Creativity (4/5) The mouse eating the chocolate was a wonderful idea.
Effort (3/5) You could've worked on it a little bit more, you have two entries after all.
Extra Points for doing more than one theme: 0, there's only one.

Points: 22.0

some of this judging may be wrong or something.. Tried not to be strict, it's round 1 after all.
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What are the points to pass..
vv wonderful edit LOL

JUDGE IT AND MAKE SURE TO ADD THE POINTS LOL XDDD

Noobforevah a dit :

Ah...

I wanted to judge Ejaffa..

But I guess I can just judge Gabreyolo's... Wait Gabre you have two. which one is the entry? ^^"

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Is it the chocolate one? I'll go ahead and judge that one.

Grading:
Coloring (3/5) The colors are quite plain, maybe you could've added a few more colors. Perhaps add a background?
Neatness (8.5/10) Some lines are very shaky,and if you zoom into the mouse's ear it has white dots. The chocolate looks as if you kind of just put it on the mouse.
Anatomy (3.5/5) I don't think ears are suppose to be that small and up onto the head. The neck is perhaps a bit fat? The feet look semi-akward, maybe place it near where the legs are.. Noses aren't supposed to be red unless it has that item.
Creativity (4/5) The mouse eating the chocolate was a wonderful idea.
Effort (3/5) You could've worked on it a little bit more, you have two entries after all.
Extra Points for doing more than one theme: 0, there's only one.

Points: 22.0

some of this judging may be wrong or something.. Tried not to be strict, it's round 1 after all.
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What are the points to pass..
vv wonderful edit LOL

o.o
I DRAWED TWO THEMES -.-
Chocolate and Fantacy...

Rainbowbells a dit :

Anatomy (5/5) The mouse chasing the turkey was priceless XD

That's not what anatomy is.

o_o..... Why am i just now seeing these..


Ejaffa's entry

Grading:
Coloring (4/5) It had much colore, and it looks like the sun is realy going down and shining onto theme. but there is some colore on other stuff that dosent belong
Neatness (7/10) there are some lines wabbly but that realy good!
Anatomy (4/5) the tail is reeealy fat and turky feet look odd
Creativity (4/5) its really cool that itsa running at the turky, RUN TURKY RUN ^^
Effort (5/5) im shure you put lots of work into thos, there may be mistake but its awsome
Extra Points for doing more than one theme: 0 there's only one.

Points: 23.0 points.

Gabreyolo a dit :

o.o
I DRAWED TWO THEMES -.-
Chocolate and Fantacy...

Yes I know.

I only judged THAT one.

You submitted that one first, so I judged it.

Two themes = in ONE drawing. Not two seperate.

And Cuit, Ejaffa's entry was already judged by Rainbowbells.

you also didn't fix some spelling errors.


actually no

just delete me from judges.

I don't exactly have time and I'll just create drama.
see I already sound rude.

May i join?

Micefamilies a dit :

That's not what anatomy is.

^ rainbowbells you need to fix your judging.

I think if you guys are going to judge, you have to atleast understand what anatomy is. You also need to get your spelling and grammar down or else no one is going to understand you.

okay bye now. Good luck

Davidbibble a dit :

May i join?

yes u may join bibble

I guess I passed then? o3o

yes u did, ima judge more contestants if there etrys done and if no one judged them

judgeing ens jan 9, 2014

aka round 1

Micefamilies a dit :

That's not what anatomy is.

Darn

o.o omg im late. i forgot about this..

;-; all of us did, we still are waiting for some people im pretty shure.