Mellonzz a dit :

PLease -.-

Mellonzz a dit :

i want the next chapter -.-

Be patient, stop. If you are gonna keep whining about it then I won't let you be in the story if you don't deserve it.

And don't you know I'm busy? You are probably busy too. So stop please.

Ah I just read this

Very nice.

[url=]Chapter 3:[/url]

I settled in for a nice piece of cheese cake for dinner. The upcoming war was way too much for me to handle on my own. My warriors, as I told you before, were out training and I was very proud of them for doing so, without me telling them to. Then, Leo walked into the room. You may know him, you may not. Either way, just know he's a bad mouse. Not as in troublesome, but bad as in ''cool'' or ''calm''.

''Sup....'' he said, cool-like.
''Hello.'' I said, with no expression.
''What's the matter?'' he asked, looking concerned.
''Nothing, nothing...'' I said. But something was wrong. As the leader of all these mice, I had to tell them all about the war.
''Are you sure?'' he replied.
I hesitated for a moment...then said ''No, nothing. Do you mind if you leave?'' I probably should have not sounded so stubborn.
He waited for a moment, waiting for me to change my mind. Then he shrugged and walked out.
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Such a short chapter...just introducing Leo a little.......Sorry for lack of posts. It might be because Mellonzz was rushing me................

[url=]Chapter 4:[/url]
THIS IS IN THE SKY HIGH TRIBE'S VIEW!
Hi. I'm Kayla, and I run the Sky High tribe along with my co-leader Leila. We make sure our tribe runs throughly. You probably have heard we are going into war...Well it's true! Luke is the cause of the war. He made too much drama between Sky High and Burning Fire. Jamie and I used to be friends, in fact best friends. But Luke had to ruin it all. Back in the old days, when Jamie and I were friends, he spread rumors about me wanting to take over Burning Fire. Jamie was furious. She planned revenge on me, to take over my tribe. But she failed sadly.

I tried to convince her to be my friend again, but she refused. I was very mad. I planned revenge on her back, and then it succeeded. She became weak and ended up in the hospital. I felt guilty, but at the same time, I felt proud of myself. But I decided that wasn't enough. So, I spent years planning a war. I know...evil right? But Jamie had tried to destroy me herself. So, it's payback time.

Then, my loyal warrior, Jack, came in. He was the best warrior I've seen in the tribe in years. I was very proud to have him in my tribe.

''Hello, Jamie! How are you?'' he said, cheerfully. He was usually always in a good mood.
''I'm fine...'' I mumbled. But, of course, he sensed something was wrong.
''What's the matter?'' he asked, worried.
''Oh, nothing...'' I said.
''Are you sure?'' he said, suspicious.
''Okay, fine.'' I admitted. ''I'm very nervous about the war. I've been planning it for over 2 years. It took a lot of work. What will happen?''
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Another chapter! Enjoy and buh bye

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMG SO GEEWD! ;D

oh you've improved c:

Poopiepoopie a dit :

OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMG SO GEEWD! ;D

Damn, thank you XD

Haruhitastic a dit :

oh you've improved c:

Thanks! C: