[Fanfic] Anchored Cannons

[Fanfic] Anchored Cannons - Rebellion

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eeveewings a dit :
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THIS IS AN AWESOME STOREEEH! ^^'

Thanks!!

I suck at making stories.......

I'm sure you don't! You just have to make sure you like your story enough to put effort into it! Detail, similes, metaphors, (ect.) really add effect. Anyway, let's not get off topic. Thanks for the support, anyway!

#82

Keep up the good work bab! Its turning out great.

#83

miilkychan a dit :
Keep up the good work bab! Its turning out great.

thaNKS <3

#84

LAUGHING AHAHA
Chapter 12

okay
prepare
because this is the last oF THIS

Chapter 12: -_______The fight lead to a cry_______-

EV'S POV

Constantly, regret fled through me. I knew what I said had hurt her, and the rest of the rebellion. By this time, I was on my own, bashing at mice. Had I not let my temper loose, I wouldn't have been here. In boot camp, the real thing.
Earlier, I have found this tiny kid, he was lost and he seemed scared, I helped him out... that's a lie, kinda. I was hostile, but he said he had nowhere to live or parents. I decided... My friends are gone... my job is seriously just working at the shop, and well, I had decent cheese. I decided to adopt him. I wouldn't be his mom, i'm not fit for that, by maybe someone else could.
By the time I was sent off for boot camp, he was in tears, and I had no one to trust. Besides... Maka! She'd help right?
She acted strange when I pulled him up, but she decided to take him in, as his mother. And I was gone.
Boot camp was strangely silent, and every time I failed, I could feel my tongue bruising as i bit it slightly. It seemed like it was my stress reliever. I hated boot camp, although.. it was my punishment. I had to do it. And i'd get little calls from the kid. His name was Dalton, and he was so caring for me.
Had I actually made that choice to keep him, the weeks ago I had hatred towards the world? I didn't know, I couldn't decide, what was the world giving for me? Was it trying to make me give in? Surely not, if it was... would I have to at some point in time?
That day I left, it seemed like the atmosphere was thick. The kid had been crying, and Magiac as yelling at me, and the kid. the same with the rest of the rebellion. Had they thought I was the traitor, although they were the ones not doing what we planned? It angered me, and I knew the kid was going to stay strong though that. Dalton hadn't been strong, when I found him, but a little caring had pushed his confidence.
Sometimes, I wondered... what if I never found Dalton? Would the little thing still be crying a river everyday in that vanilla room? I couldn't stand those thoughts. And the day I had given his backpack for his school, his eyes lit up, and darted into the bus. It reminded me of myself.
The fight felt like lava burning me, it was terrible. I had been taking no guilt, until now. Would they ever forgive me? I could hear they're words right now.
"She was hanging with that bad influence ! She can't go to the boot camp with her leg!" Chuck would say.
"It's punishment, the leg was the influence's fault." Okaru you suggest.
"No. It's no ones fault..." Marlee would try to calm them down.
"Mikaou misses Ev-" She would get interrupted by the steamed Magiac. "Shes a traitor! Don't feel pity." Magiac would defend they're hurtfulness I had caused.
And Wind would be laughing, thinking it was funny that I walked off with my remark. "Heh, if anything I'm a lone-wolf." I would laugh, walking off. Not noticing Magiac watching me. This all happened because of that slight laugh and 6 words.
Even if wind or Maka cared, I didn't blame anyone. Only myself. And now, look at me, i'm in boot camp.

Although so... had I made the write choice to let Maka guide him correctly?

#85

pees

#86

Should I make a new topic or change this one to the next one, and request for Topic name change?
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#87

Eyy.. I made the sequel, so if you want your characters there, check it out!

#88

Your really good at making stories as for i, im very bad XD

#89

begacheesy a dit :
Your really good at making stories as for i, im very bad XD

Heh, if you wan to see more of this story, click here. Because this will be continued there.

#90

eeveewings a dit :
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Your really good at making stories as for i, im very bad XD

Heh, if you wan to see more of this story, click here. Because this will be continued there.

Okie dokey! I really need to catch up on your story :D

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