Wild [ A tranformice Fanfiction] |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1522508280000
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Sorry for the double post... Dernière modification le 1522508460000 |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1522510440000
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Bastlase a dit : Its always sad when that happens... Thanks for pointing out that mistake, my kindle loves to autocorrect, and sometimes in autocorrects wrong, or is just weird like correcting for to four. And yes, Marco probably can meet Alex. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1522536300000
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Kk :) |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1522975860000
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Chapter 8 Marco woke up on the floor. A hard, cold floor. He stood up, brushing himself off. "Althea? Are you here?" He turned around, taking in his surroundings. "What?" Alex saw Marco, who had just randomly appeared in a flash of blue light, "Where did yo..." Alex was not able to finish his sentence, as something heavy hit the side of the Tardis, which tilted sideways, crashing Alex into Marco. A female mouse stepped in. Dark brown hair swirling around he face and large falcon like wings tucked into the Siamese fur of her back. "Ha! You're the one who stole Althea's brother!" She shouted at Alex, who was just string at her in disbelief. Alex thought to himself, "First Marco, now some insane flying mouse?" "No. Marco just appea. Ugh!" A anvil can flying put of no where, knocking Alex down. "No excuses. I'm returning Althea's kid brother, and you're coming too." Her paws admitting a dark magenta light, a web of black iron chains came together, anvils fastened to it like seats. "Little brother sits, and you random guy," An iron chain started to snake up Alex's leg, "Stay right there." The chain yanked Alex towards the net, where another chain pinned him down. Marco, petrified in fear, didn't move, his dark eyes cloudy with fright. "Oh come on!" The female mouse moved her paws again and an anvil appeared right under Marco, levitating him into the net as well. A chain snaked over his waist like a seatbelt, and the female mouse flew. Marco stared down, taking in the sky blue void in which floated small chinks of land, hundreds of mice tumbling over each other to get one small hunk of cheese. Alex thrashed, trying to get the seemingly living chains off him. They arrived at a Marple and stone castle, huge yawning gaps where windows should have been and iron chains dangling off the stacked layers. What looked like a thick anvil snake was wrapped around it. Alex After they landed, Alex was once again yanked away by the snake chain, before being stuck in a room, the walls covered in iron chains. Thankfully, they had stopped moving. A young mouse was dangling from the ceiling, his auburn hair draping across his face and a bow tie drooping around his neck. "Could you please get me down?" He asked politely. Alex yanked on the chain, which swiftly released the mouse. The mouse brushed the hair out of his face, smiling in gratitude. "Thanks!" He said, "My names Alex, that female mouse who got you here was Einean, she's not that bad, but her dads the anvil god, so that... Complicates things. Now to find a way out of here..." Double Alex time! Also Einean, why do you go around kidnapping your friends. Really. Dernière modification le 1522975920000 |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1523010360000
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OMG, I hope the TARDIS is going to be OK, she has no pilot and is in the Time Vortex :o (She's probably going to do an Emergency Landing) Einean, the Time Lord didn't do anything! Marco just appeared in his home, the TARDIS! Oh, 2 Alex this is going to get confusing lmao "Hi. My name is Alex." "Hi Alex, I'm Alex." "..." "..." Together: "This is going to be confusing..." *they get into an argument to try to figure out which Alex is Alex 1, then Time Lord Alex says he's Alex Holmes. Argument maybe settled there.* (just a thought on how it may be) Dernière modification le 1523010540000 |
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Chapter 9 A little Einean backstory... "She's so cute!" The Siamese mouse bent over her new daughter, who had her tongue sticking out and was making adorable purring noises. Oddly, a toy from the nearby table floated over to the baby mouse, who stuffed the toy into her mouth. "I think she has bonding magic," The doctor said, "Like her mother." The mother mouse beamed down at her small child, and this child's birthday would be celebrated in the village, a glimmer of hope against the drear reality that the Anvil God basically ruled the village. Only one mouse wasn't dancing around and celebrating, the mayor, his grey fur illuminated against the harsh moonlight, glared out the window and the celebrating mice. This child was special, but the celebrations would soon be cut short. The wind tore at the mayor's cloak but he was determined to do what he wanted. He grabbed the baby mouse from the basket where she lay (This village is poor, doors don't lock.) and marched back out the door. The rain streaking like tears from Elisah herself, the mayor put down the young mouse within a pile a food, to keep the Anvil God a bay. Without even looking back, he scampered back to the village. The Anvil God came down from his castle, collecting the food and gold the villagers offer him. The small mouse started crying after he moved the bread basket she was placed into. He took her, levitating the baby mouse away. He stared at her small grey eyes, his own malevolent red eyes softening. "You will be my little Anvil, my Einean." Alex Red haired Alex had his head stuck into the dark mass of chains, his speech partially muffled the the iron, "Nope, can't see any obvious ways out, did you find any? Also this is going to get really confusing, we're both named Alex..." "I'll be Alex 1." "Why should you be Alex 1? I was stuck here before you." "Because I'm a time lord." "Not a good excuse." "Ok, well I'm Alex Holmes." "I'll just call you Alex H." "Ok, let's just try to get out of here." "Let's do it." |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1523067960000
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Lmao nice :) |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1524933780000
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Coming soon! Chapter 10! So sorry about my procrastination :( |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1525010700000
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Its OK |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1525306200000
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Chapter 10 Finally. "What the? Is this bad. Heh, maybe it will benefit me. No it won't. Oh great." The first five thoughts in Aces head were these. He stared up at the nubula, swirling, portal of a sky, at the mice running in terror. He sighed. It hit him. "What was that!" He pushed the anvil off him. Only one mouse he knew had powers like that. "Really Einean?" He tapped his foot. "Hah. I'm evacuating my friends. And you know I can't resist hitting you with my powers. Remember that game we used to play? I used to throiw anvils at you and you'd throw you magical grass back at me? Now come on. Brother." Marco needed to get out of here. The chains could move. He had nearly fallen to his death. He needed to get down. "Marco? Einean said you were here." A female voice cried, one he had never heard before. She soon appeared, a tuxedo mouse, her messy black hair tucked into a meat bun, an ornamental (or real?) Piece of holly tucked into that hair. "My name's Holly. I'll show you back to Althea." Althea. Marco missed his sister, way more then he missed eating warm blackberry pies, or even his fix stuffie. Althea was what her wanted to hear. He found Althea, and Sunfern, and a tin of mice he didn't know standing in the main room of the castle, some eating some chatting idly. Althea and Marco shared a hug, but one topic was on most everyone's mind. "Where's Alex?" |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1525351920000
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Which Alex is Marco talking about? We'll find out next chapter ;p Yay new chapter !!! +1 |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1525388700000
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I'm going to edit this post to add pictures of the mice we don't have refs for on her :) @Bast Everyone is talking about either Alex, Holly probably wants her boyfriend back, so she's talking about not your Alex. (Most confusing sentence ever...) |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1525539540000
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Lmao I understood it :) |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1530988860000
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Basically took a break from Transformice, my next chapter will bevout soon, sorry four the wait. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1531015800000
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Kk gadget |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1537932660000
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I've been gone a very long time, but my writing has improved and I have a bit of these chapter done already, it should be about in about 4-5 days. |
Bastlase « Sénateur » 1537970760000
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Kk I will be waiting impatiently. |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1539465000000
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I'm finally back! Chapter 11 Alex thought he was going to die. He and Alex H had decided to try and wade through the the dark chains, but to Alex's dismay, the room had no wall on that side. He pushed aside the last clump of chains, Alex H right behind him, and tipped over the edge of the giant marble structure. Alex H watched in horror as the young mouse went plummeting down, down to the boggy earth many, many miles below. But them he stopped. Alex once again was hanging by his foot, caught by one of the many dark iron chains that looped around the building. Alex spotted his friends, most of them looking very worried, through the huge open window. "Hi guys, a little help please?" He waved a bit, his auburn hair all in his face. Holly looked up. "Alex? Einien, can you get him down for there?" Einean begrudgingly flew to Alex, unwrapping the chain from his leg and placing him in the room, where Holly hugged him. After Alex got out of Holly's really tight hug, he stood in front of everyone. "We need to go get this other mouse as well. He's still up there, his name is Alex H." "Where is he?" Birch asked, knowing she and Blu could get him easily from wherever he was. "He's about two floors up, I think it's so kinda dungeon of some sort." As Birch and Blu flew off, the other mice planned. "What are we going to do now?" Sorry for the kinda short chapter, I need some inspiration. |
Leeeeeeeeeevi « Consul » 1539466860000
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rEEEEEE hopefully forms are still accepted o<o name: Nadia gender: Female ref: owo clan: Oak Root personality: Nadia is a very active person mouse, she loves to discover new things to do. She is also nice to many people, (which some people tend to take advantage over) except to people she has grown quite close to. She is very caring, and finds many things hilarious. She is very serious when it comes to something important. Overall, she is very nice. extras: very good at hand-to-hand combat and good at using knifes/sharp weapons Dernière modification le 1539468000000 |
Gadgetrocks « Censeur » 1539475800000
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Leeeeeeeeeevi a dit : Accepted! I'll find a way to get her into the story. |